Elden's Circle: the World of Man

The writing is good, keep the quality, and keep updating. In the game, I can only play the role of Feng Ling Yueying, but in the novel, I can see A Tui's wives and concubines in groups.

It is the best book about the Dharma Circle that Tomato can find so far. There are no embarrassing names or brainless plots. It is very comfortable to read. It has multiple female protagonists. I don't recommend it to brothers who like to read single female protagonists or no female protagonists.

First of all, I am quite positive about this book. There are not many articles about Ring of Magic. After all, Ring of Magic, or Souls games, are all fragmented narratives. If you want to completely sort out the background settings, the story development is actually very troublesome. If you are willing to sort out and create on this basis, I think it is already very good. Secondly, I haven't read many chapters yet, but I still noticed a small problem, that is, the punctuation marks in the article don't look very good. For example, there are often no commas in a large paragraph, or there is no punctuation at the end of the paragraph. In fact, you can pay more attention to this aspect and try to write as few long sentences as possible, especially if a large paragraph is connected, which will look a bit laborious, so you can use commas to separate it. Then, in terms of the plot, the author should advocate the theory of parasitism of the supreme will. This is also a point of view, and it is understandable to write it this way. However, I will also share a point of view that I personally agree with, which is the theory of the supreme will of the creator. This theory is different from the parasitism theory, which believes that the supreme will harvests the material or energy of the junction through the Dharma ring and the golden tree. The creator theory is more inclined to the supreme will itself as the creator of the junction, similar to the position of God. The theory of creation holds that the supreme will dropped preserved eggs and the furnace of life into the original junction. The preserved egg is the dharma ring itself. The dharma ring is the basis for the supreme will to construct the rules of the junction. The furnace of life created all kinds of life, including ancient dragons, giants, etc. People, humans, etc., Under the rules of the Ring of Law, the border areas are governed by the binding rule of God-Kings, that is, they are ruled jointly by powerful creatures and Gods who are the representatives chosen by the Supreme Will, such as the Dragon King and his gods Godfrey and Malika long ago. The Supreme Will also sends its own messenger, the finger, to maintain the ring and maintain its rules. Apart from these, the Supreme Will seldom interferes with the borderland. The Supreme Will does not care much about how the borderland develops. The Dragon King and his gods once ruled the border area, but why they lost their rule is still unknown. There is speculation that the Dragon King's gods were made into hunting finger knives by the Eternal City, that is, the group of underground outsiders. This speculation is also based on the similarity between the hunting finger knives and the god-body sword, and the finger knives have great power. The ability can hurt or even kill the finger as the messenger of the Supreme Will. Therefore, it is believed that the Ancient Dragon King may have been harmed by the races of the Eternal City, and even the lost head was cut off by them. Subsequently, the finger was threatened and reported to the Supreme Will, which dropped a meteorite to destroy these ethnic groups. Of course, this is just a guess. Speaking of which, after the Dragon King lost his rule and hid in the gap between time and space, Malika was selected by the Supreme Will to govern the junction. One thing to note here is that it is true that Malika was selected by the Supreme Will, but it does not mean that Malika's behavior is approved by the Supreme Will. Malika ≠ Supreme Will, or the Supreme Will does not care at all how the chosen person governs the junction. Malika chose the barbarian king Godfrey as her king, and transformed the furnace of life into a golden tree. How it was transformed is unknown, but under the theory of creation, the golden tree is the embodiment of Malika's will, not the supreme will, and the supreme will does not care. Malika's golden tree force is not inconsistent with xenophobia and sealing death. Therefore, it makes sense that the golden tree force is hostile to other forces, because there is more than one force in the border area. The rest, ancient dragons, giants, and various foreign gods all have their own forces. It is normal for them not to agree with Malika's golden tree. What followed was a long conquest, and why Malika broke the ring later is unknown. Perhaps the shattering of the dharma ring finally attracted the attention of the Supreme Will, or perhaps the Supreme Will never cared, but the finger as the messenger of the Supreme Will. There are also differences here, whether the finger has self-awareness, or whether the will of the finger is completely representative. The expression of the Supreme Will is still unclear. If repairing the Dharma Ring is just the will of the fingers, then it means that the Supreme Will basically does not care about the junction and is purely free-range. If the fingers only convey the instructions of the Supreme Will, then it means that the Supreme Will still cares about the Dharma Ring itself. Then came the Shard War, and then the return of the Faded Ones, and after that, it was our choice as the Faded Ones, to repair the Circle, to have the Madness or the Stars. But no matter which choice he made, he still couldn't feel the attention of the Supreme Will. Maybe the Supreme Will didn't even care about the magic ring itself. To sum up the theory of creation, the Supreme Will is like God and does not care about the development of the border area, but it may care about the basic rules set, which is the Dharma Circle. Of course, the above are all creation theories that are opposite to parasitism. At present, creator theory and parasitism are still at odds. I have no intention of opposing parasitism. The author is free to write whatever he wants. I am just here to introduce another public opinion besides the author's point of view to some friends who have not had much contact with the Dharma Circle, or who do not pay much attention to the background of the Dharma Circle. Finally, I hope that the author can become more proficient in writing, and I will continue to read it. Generally speaking, it is quite to my liking. [Eat melon] I'm almost finished reading it, and I still maintain five stars. I always think the author's writing is pretty good. Although the writing style is still relatively immature in many places, but still, if you are willing to write it, it is already remarkable. Of course, it would be better if there was a symbol at the end of each paragraph [laughing and crying]. Then, there is the plot, because I personally prefer the Supreme Will Creator theory. Although the author also said that he is neither a parasitist nor a creator theory supporter, the author still chooses to portray the Supreme Will in a negative way. I respect the author's ideas. After all, I'm a fan. It's just inevitable. Reason tells me that it's okay, but my sensibility makes me feel uncomfortable watching it. It's such a contradiction. The faded people described by the author have a very rebellious spirit, a very precious quality, and are willing to take action to resist the superior existence. But for that reason, I personally prefer the theory of creation and feel that the Supreme Will is like God, so why should I resist? The supreme will divides life, brings rules and order to the border area. From then on, all laws will be implemented through the legal ring. Different laws are like the replacement of dynasties. The chaos during the replacement will eventually move towards order. In other words, since the establishment of the legal ring, the border area has already had order, and the replacement of laws is also part of the order. Therefore, I always think that the Supreme Will can be used as a background board, because He is objective enough. What He has done so far seems to be just formulating rules, but it will not discriminate against any law. The ring of law gives any law a chance to be implemented. What we really want to resist is the one that is full of loopholes. Malika's golden law is not even the golden tree. The current golden tree is the embodiment of the golden law. So, if I were to write it, the protagonist would probably be similar to Godfrey, but there are still differences. Godfrey respects the Ring and tries to repair it and reproduce the Golden Law. I am more inclined to repair the Ring, but change the Golden Law. I feel that it will be in Lani or I have to choose between Mikaela's two laws, but there is a high probability that I will choose Mikaela's, which is more tolerant and purer than the Golden Law (but when I played with the ring last year, I did not look back on the stars. As I said, Lani is so beautiful [laughs]). Maybe you can say that I am a conservative from this point of view [laughs]. Finally, I have to say that the above are all my personal opinions. I have no intention of criticizing the author or questioning the author. I am just expressing my inner thoughts as a spectator.

Fallen leaves bring messages, forgotten in the middle and forgotten later

It's over, buddy, I've finished all the DLC backstabbing for you [eating melon]

It's not brainless, it's not brain-burning, the language and personality of the characters are not conflicting at all. If this book appears on DIC, it is estimated that the number of chapters can reach 500. It is worth recommending as a fan. I would like to add that if Damei saw his mother kissing, she would probably cry with joy [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

A lot of settings were changed as soon as the DLC came out [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I think it would have been more complete if I had written it after the DLC was released, which is a pity. Among the Dharma Ring fanfics I have read, it is considered to be the best. There are no embarrassing plots, the characters are not OOC, and they have their own explanations and sorting out some vague plots. The small drawback is that the dialogue sometimes jumps around and is a bit confusing, and the combat is a bit sketchy. In addition, this book is more suitable for people who have played games or know about games. Due to the large world view and the number of people, the description of the characters is not too in-depth. For me, this book is a dream come true. I was very happy and comfortable reading it.

The writing is very good, and the characters and story lines are well developed. Writing on Tomato is a bit incompetent [Like]

Being stabbed in the back [laughing evilly] Evil little man-girl [laughing evilly]

It is a well-written book. Although the plot has some flaws, the future is promising. It is considered a high-quality book on Tomato. The characters basically do not deviate from the original work. I look forward to the follow-up.

Come on, the author, work hard to update. This book is one of the best books I have ever read on the old headband genre.

It is doubtful whether Radagan faithfully believes in the Golden Law, because the thorns blocking entry to the Golden Tree are his strength. Without these thorns, the Golden Law would have been repaired long ago. There is no need to burn the Golden Tree and release the destined death. The strength of the Black Sword in the background is not comparable to that of the demigods. Therefore, it is suspected that Marika and Radagon have reached a consensus to wait for Godfrey to defeat the Elden Beast so that the Golden Law will no longer be restricted by external gods.

The best in the Dharma Ring, it's that simple

After watching Melina burn the tree, I came to the fans to make up for my regrets. I found many books, and I personally think this one is the best. Unfortunately for me, I just came to see Melina, but the plot of Melina is not very prominent in the book [crying]

Nice! Come on, author! It's rare to see Lao Touhuan's books on Tomato

It's so fun to watch. The author not only restored the world view of the Ring of Law, but also highlighted each important character's character. The character is more three-dimensional. Moreover, the protagonist is no longer the A'mai in the game, and it feels like a parallel world.

Very good old ring novel that made my tree spear spin. There are so few fans of Tamaki 😢, and the popularity of Tomato is not high 😢. I hope the teacher can persevere and give my Meimei a good ending, 😭👊😭👊😭👊😭👊 (I watched the first-class love story)

Okay, okay, a rare old ring

Okay, okay, just a little bit less

The logic is clear and there are few poisonous points. It is worth reading.

I give five stars to the old one I just played not long ago. All the good characters are gone. I'm so unhappy. After watching it, I think it's okay. I started the second week yesterday [laughing] Good luck to the author.

Pretty good, but has the cover changed? There's an extra piece of wood [laughing]

It's beautifully written, but the dlc ruins all fanfics

Why is the rating so low? Isn't it great?

I would call it the best fanfic of Elden's Circle

It's not good enough, is there more? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Really good fanfic article, it makes my bow tie twirl

This article is very interesting. Although the fate of Mikaela and others has been changed by the male protagonist and they cannot do the things in the DLC, I really want to watch the plot of the Land of Shadows! ! ! Author please update

In Tomato, I am very talented. The writing and plot are excellent. I don't know how many levels better than the so-called high-scoring works on the ranking list.