The Top Tycoon Is Reborn as a Devil to Help His Younger Brother!

Sorry, I want to give you a unified reply. I am the author's reading account. It is my first book as a newcomer. I have read a lot, but it is really difficult to write, and many problems cannot be noticed. Sometimes, I feel uncomfortable watching it myself. No matter how much I try to improve it, I will also pay attention to the problems you see. Please give me your opinions and I will revise them. If you can't revise them, I will learn and revise them. Dear readers, you can read and comment on my book. If you want to watch some brain-burning movies, I will recommend some better brain-burning ones to you later. Writing a book may not be professional, but after reading a lot, you should be satisfied. This is my first time writing this book. I will summarize your experience in the future and strive to do my best.

Come on! The author still has great skills! Shenhao's novels in Tomato are pretty good! It's just that the writing is more detailed! Everyone knows that there are more chapters! But I hope some early issues will be resolved as soon as possible! Develop other plots! Otherwise, all the other readers will run away if they see such a grind!

Author, tell me honestly. Are you from Handan, Hebei? I read more than 20 chapters and I feel like you are from Handan. If so, if you have time to drink together, I am also from Handan.

It's pretty good. It reminds me of the bumps and tumbles on the road of struggle! I really want to go back in time [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Although the plot is corny, it still looks interesting.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

This is the first time I know that there are such rich people in Handan. As a native of Handan, I am short-sighted.

The emotions of the petty bourgeoisie are written in a serious way. Unlike other reborns, who are so awesome when they come back. Let me go, the logic is very reasonable. If you look at the plot, there should be a lot of girls [laughing] [laughing]

The structure is reasonable, Luo Ji's thinking is clear, and it looks good.

Is there such a family?

Is the protagonist's mother suffering from a serious illness? She is attracted to Su Meng.

Very good 👌 Not a little yellow

Good, good, good, good

I like it so much. It looks so good. 👀👀 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀

Is it finished? Where did you end up writing? Isn't it still early?

Nice! Nice! Keep up the good work!

Well written, a good start

The author wishes you good luck

Is the author from Handan?

The content is very good and there are no mistakes.

Good writing, keep it up

This novel is good

It looks good so far, looking forward to the future

Very beautiful, very good

This book gets better and better the more I read it

It's okay to have relationships around family and friends, unlike others who just pick up girls on their own.

Just so so, work hard, work hard, work hard, work hard again

This fellow's book must be supported

Classics, family ethics

Overall, it was okay, except for the ex-girlfriend part which was a bit long-winded! Can be skipped quickly! It fits the character.