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The subject matter and world view design are very good, but the author's writing style is a bit poor, and it reads strangely. I suggest you practice more, don't always break sentences and change scenes casually, finish the words in one go, and make the sentences smoother. Also, the use of punctuation marks is really poor here. It is recommended to retake the punctuation marks knowledge in the first grade of elementary school (it is not a liberal arts major and it is basically a problem with language and literature related majors, including me. I just recommend that you learn the basics,...! ? "": ; ()... "" - · These are just the usages)