Comprehensive Comic: the End of the World, the Beginning Is Bound to the Two-Dimensional System

Let's talk about the shortcomings first: 1. It's too short. The author really made it too short, which is not enough to watch. As a result, the characters and the protagonist's skills and growth are not well developed; 2. The plot is relatively immature, and there is not much plot in itself. Moreover, the logic of the characters' behavior is based on the present, rather than the three dimensions of "past, present, and future." It is recommended that the author write more outlines to connect the previous and subsequent chapters; 3. I personally recommend not to discuss topics such as environmental destruction, original sin, and religion. Without some knowledge reserves, it is easy to write about these things and collapse. This book is almost on the verge of collapse. Fortunately, the loli attribute of the article allows it to survive. As for the advantages, the most important thing is that it is comfortable for me to read. I can briefly mention three points: 1. The pace of this book is very good, not procrastinating and not anxious (of course, this is also the advantage of being short). After reading it, I feel like I have more to say than I have finished; 2. The writing style is relatively good, humorous and interesting, in line with the two-dimensional style (why not go to cwm); 3. Of course, the most important thing is that the author makes no secret of being a loli fan. Most readers probably come here for this [laughing]. This kind of work with its own distinctive characteristics is a very important bonus for its audience (this is why I gave it five stars (of course I am not a loli fan) In general, except for the short problem, this book is a very good food for the audience. If the author slightly corrects the shortcomings, it will be an excellent vertical work.

Well, most of the problems come from second-game players' praise for combat power. In fact, the story is pretty good, and the character descriptions are also good. Putting aside the second-game (Miyou) part, it's very enjoyable.

5 Stars is support, but it was only interesting when I first watched it. After a few days, I didn't want to watch it anymore. I didn't have the initial interest in watching it. I don't know how I continued watching it in the first place... Maybe it was the subject matter...

So far, this book has a very good beginning, and I can even write a lot. At least three to four hundred chapters is not a problem because there are so many amazing female characters in anime and games, coupled with a broken society, many crises and murderous intentions, and the protagonist's male-to-female characteristics, emotions, adventures, positions, and cultivation will all be the characteristics of this novel. Not much to say, this book does not need too much rhetorical modification, it is a very good-looking novel, and all book lovers can read it.

It's so good-looking, well, it's a bit relaxing, but I really want to see which Gaia really reincarnated a roasted chicken into a roasted chicken after playing Honkai Impact III?

Positive and optimistic book

Good looking, good looking, support the author Alas, there are still too few authors. It will be August soon. It seems that I will not have time to read anymore. My parents are forcing me to preview the textbook for the first year of high school [crying] [crying] [crying]

Good looking yo yo yo yo

Good-looking, but a bit lacking, not enough to look at

Good guy, is it over so soon? [Petrochemical]

Personally I think it's well written and I'm good at words, but I recommend it.