Honor of Kings: The All-Rounder

I read a few pictures. The author's writing style is good and the writing is very good. I just want to make a comment, can you break it into paragraphs? Each picture is from the beginning to the end. It is a natural paragraph. It is really easy to make mistakes.

So far it's okay, but there are a lot of typos Does the author want to repeat all the pronunciations several times?