The Host of Quick Travel: He Competes for the Male Lead in the Mary Sue World

It's quite interesting, but the plot development is a bit too slow. The first small world hasn't ended in more than fifty chapters, and the heroine's character is poorly described... I hope to see a tougher and kinder heroine later on, everything else is good. My impression is that it was written well. After a long time, I came back and saw that the rating was very low. Although I have forgotten what I wrote, I still changed it to 5 stars to increase the score.

It's super good-looking. The first plane is sweet and reassuring. [Sending my heart] The second plane is just a big knife. [Crying] Sometimes it's better to change the direction of the torture, but they both didn't do it, so why did they cut it first? [I'm about to cry] Can you let them do it first before I torture you next time? Mainly because my friend wants to see it [laughing]

It's very interesting, but the novel is too long. I thought there would be two or three small worlds in the ninety-odd chapters, but the second world is not finished yet. If you mind reading it, please read it. Because it is relatively long, the details are in place, giving people a very just right feeling that will make you keep looking down. The protagonist's IQ is very good. The protagonist's perspective is also very objective, and there is no plot deliberately created for the sake of acting. The author's writing style is also very detailed and the characters are well created.

I don't know what to say anymore, it's just beautiful

Oh my god, this article is really very good. My bookshelf is basically full of fast-traveling articles. This one really impressed me the most. I only reviewed it after reading it all. It is very good. It's good. I don't really like that kind of mindless writing, and Shou is not feminine. Maybe the emotional development is a bit slow, but I can understand it. The author clearly writes the emotions of both attack and shou. The slow development is because the emotions of their world characters are slowly changing. I read the reviews before and found that some people may hate Chiya's emotions for slowing down the progress of world creation. I think this is normal. Everyone has their own emotions. Doesn't this make it more real? It shows that the relationship between the two of them is sweet, after all, they have lived in the previous world for so long. I also feel that the author's writing is getting better and better, and each world is also a very interesting character. I look forward to the update. The only drawback is that I hope the update will be faster [Like]

Come on, author, it's very beautiful [top post] [please update] [cool] Do I count as your fan hehe [shy]

The more I look at the back part, the more I feel that this article is not sweet. In the early stage of accepting the aspect of the sick man's wife, he kept licking and chasing her. I admit it. After all, he is the only one who has the memory. Later, he suddenly started to follow the personality. . . . . . . It's inexplicable, but it feels good to torture me for a while I liked the first plane quite a lot, but who knows what happens next. . . . . . . . . Hard to say

How should I put it? The introduction of the novel made me think it was a sweet novel. Each world was quite sweet when I first watched it, and it was really provocative and heart-warming. But later on, due to some things, the relationship between the world and the world suddenly changed. Even though I was still greedy on the inside, it was really weird on the surface. I can't describe it. It was just weird, and it wasn't as sexy as it was at the beginning. Then I suffered a lung injury in the middle of the second world, which made me cry. But the miracle doctor said he could live to old age and then die when he went to take care of his father. And when I learned that Gong was a man, my attitude changed. Maybe it was because the character couldn't be OOC, but I still felt it looked weird. Then at the end of the first world, the attacker and the opponent are placed in the second world just for BE? I thought it would be sweet, but who knew the gap in my heart. [Cry]

Good-looking, sweet article, very good at changing my mood

Awesome ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧, but the author is the slowest updater I have ever seen, and I feel tired⊙⊙

I hate unfinished novels! ! ! But it's also really beautiful Most! Most! Most! The main thing is that 10037 is so generous that I want to go up and give it a try! ! (The author should have no objection, right?) [Shy][Love]

I just want to know if this plane is he? And the author, do you dare to write more? If your book has such a low rating, there must be a reason why you are slow to update it. It's definitely not the book's problem.

Recently, I have become obsessed with fast-traveling novels. Some have low ratings and some have high ratings, but none of them satisfy me (of course there are also good ones). But after seeing the author's works, I found them very interesting. The content is vivid and interesting, and the characters are also very good. Anyway, overall it is very good. And the sense of CP between them is so great, wow (ಡωಡ).

Personally I feel very good

Oops, whose lips turned up~Oh~it turns out to be mine.

The babies who have watched it said they like it. The babies who haven't watched it also like it after watching it [Blow a kiss]

It's very beautiful. It's really exciting. Why is it discontinued now? The author should update quickly, this is the third world [top post][top post][top post][top post][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] Wrong, wrong, remembered wrong, it's the fourth world

OK The plot develops too slowly. There are too many chapters in the first dungeon. I can't read more than 70 pictures. Later copies have fewer chapters Overall it's okay

I like it, it looks good

The author has not been feeling well for a few days. How is the author recently? Are you sick? Still very busy and have something to do?

The world is too long, please shorten it.

It's good-looking, but it's a hole that I haven't filled in for a long time. I loved the first world because it was sweet The second world is be The third world is okay, at least he is dead The fourth world is only half written😭

Super pretty ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Fairy, fairy! The plot is reasonable, the emotions between the protagonists are delicate, and it's not sudden. I really like this book. Come on! I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This book is pretty good, but the world is too long

One of my favorite novels [Shy]

Nice! Big cheers for the author! [Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting, but the author is great, why is the second world be[cry][cry][cry]

Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Huge Looks great

Come on, there is a convenience store deep in the sea selling blue loneliness.