In a Matriarchal World, If I Can't Fight Back, I'll Just Give Up

Demon: why do they call me devil Angel: because you killed someone Demon: But I clearly saved someone Angel: Because they didn't see it Demon: Why do they call you angel? Angel: Because I saved people Demon: But you obviously killed someone Angel (sneering): Because they didn't see it Once in class, the teacher asked: What is the difference between angels and demons? The class is very quiet Until one person stood up Said: Angels can give up on you for the whole world But the devil can give up the whole world for you I'm afraid of the dark, but I love the night I'm afraid of the cold, but I fall in love with the snow I'm afraid of being alone, but I'm always alone I'm afraid of pain, but I always end up with wounds all over my body I like knives because they are ruthless I like the devil because he is free I like getting caught in the rain because no one knows I'm crying The lights are off, can I cry? The lights are on, can I laugh? That's true: The angel looks white, but that's just her appearance Although the devil is black, in the dark night, she is the only one accompanying him I hate black, but in the end I fell in love with the night I hated red, but ended up liking blood I hate being alone, but in the end I like being alone I like angels, but in the end I turned into a devil I hate getting hurt, but I always get myself covered in bruises I don't need pity from others, nor love from others Fall in love with the night I also like blood like to be alone When I was a kid, I smiled at my friends. When I grow up, I smile at my mobile phone I liked blue when I was a kid When I grow up, I like black The sea is beautiful But many people drowned Roses are beautiful But he stabbed his hand Angel is beautiful But he killed someone The devil is bad But saved people Seeing is not necessarily believing Everything 💔 Everyone 💔 They all have two faces💔 One is hypocritical💔 One is real 💔 Very few people can see through it💔 What is behind beauty💔 Telling lies using real names in the real world💔 Telling the truth using fake names on the Internet💔 They don't know 💔 Devil's good💔 Angel's bad💔 Like...💔 You have done a lot of good things 💔 But no one saw it 💔 I accidentally did something bad💔 Others will point their noses at you and scold you💔 It's not that I don't believe them💔 But they...💔 Can you make me believe it...💔

The background description at the beginning is a bit unclear. The characters could be a little different. For example, the yandere and slightly sadistic person you mentioned in your profile now seems to me that the people who appear all have the same series of characters. The details are okay, but there is a lack of diversity.

How should I put it, I quite like the subject matter of this book, but there are still some poisonous points. The two biggest ones are the logical problems and the problems with the protagonist. Logically, some of the plots are very rigid. The logic is based on the author's subjectivity but lacks objectivity. The author I thought it was reasonable, so I wrote the plot like this, but readers would find it awkward because this result cannot be obtained for this reason. It is illogical. I hope the author can read the plot more, think about the connections, and polish his novel after finishing it. Then there is the reason for the male protagonist. There is a line in Bad Guy that goes like this: God has given you beauty, but not the corresponding wisdom. For a top-notch charming person like the male protagonist, this is dangerous. I believe everyone understands the principle that a man is innocent and possesses a treasure. A beauty with no special background has no absolute strength, let alone great wisdom to strategize. Even if Even though he is the most beautiful in the world, he is nothing more than a pink skull. In front of such a giant as the Aristocratic Family, without the influence of the so-called protagonist's halo, his life and death are basically determined by other people's mood and character. If someone is in a good mood today, they want to let you go. My friend, tomorrow he will lose control and throw you into bed. What about the day after tomorrow? What about the future? Will he be controlled by others for the rest of his life? Since this is a male video, the male protagonist should have obvious abilities. He does not seek to be invincible in the world, but to be able to protect himself. Protecting the one you love, the one you love, this is what a man should do. Precisely because the article is about soul transmigration rather than a native woman who is a native woman, it is more important to reflect the ideological gap between the two. Otherwise, it would be better to write it as fetal transmutation. Of course, if you want to change it to a female channel article in the future, I didn't say so. Of course, apart from these problems, this novel is still good so far. It is a good novel about women. It has a promising future. Let's not talk about the problem of the male protagonist for the time being. After all, different people have different opinions on the protagonist's problems. However, if the author can polish the plot in the future, There will definitely be many people reading this book in the future, including the connection between the series and the plot. By the way, it is best to find ways to add some text polish to the long dialogues in the novel. After all, the novel is not a two-dimensional game or anything like that. The dialogue is just a simple dialogue without expressing anything. Finally, I wish you success, come on

Well written 👍

The female character written by the author @ is quite good. Come on, the author, I support you! 😫😫😫[Admired][Admired]

Author, are you a woman? [Laughs evilly]

Some places are very well written, and some places are a bit too uncomfortable. When introducing the system, the author should write that it is a rubbish system that cannot be used in rubbish, so that I can be mentally prepared. The introduction of the auxiliary system is a bit rubbish for me, who has seen many auxiliary systems. As I said at the beginning, the good things are really good, so I will give it five points.

It's a bit embarrassing [laughs awkwardly]

Bull! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

To be honest, this book is really uncomfortable to read. The system is not very useful, and the body of the male protagonist has been tainted by the female villain. I feel that the author is too female, and the male protagonist has been assimilated too much by the female villain.