Neptune's Soul Penetrates the Dog and Licks the Dog: He Wins the Beautiful Goddess at the Beginning

This kind of novel seems like you don't have to think about anything. I like it. It's so cool. My only suggestion is that it's really cute to have more self-drawn illustrations. And... Please update it as soon as possible! ! ! I want to see it woc! ! !

This book is the author's first [snicker][snicker][smirk] It's pretty good, the writing and content are very good, and the author doesn't have to worry about the bad stuff. In addition, the author looked at my five-star review and asked me to give it more credit. I gave it a gift! Get started with extra time [Thinking]

1. The characters are also relatively full-bodied (In addition, I said: I really cried to death about the male protagonist, I love him so much) 2. Each heroine character is also very fulfilling (The super-poke-my-male video is a very good one that I've watched) 3. The author's sister is so awesome! (Breaking update) (When I first read the introduction, I thought it was just ordinary, and then the more I read, the more excited I became) (It's not a loss if you fall into the trap) My sister is also very serious about making up pictures for everyone. I think the pictures she drew are actually pretty good, hehe, they are quite cute. 4. Although the male protagonist has a harem, he respects girls. It's very comfortable and doesn't smell bad. I like this small system. Finally, please give me a lot of praise [shy]

At 100 points of appearance, it is comparable to one-fifth of mine, not bad, not bad, and I can barely feel a sense of belonging.

There has been a shortage of books recently. I read a lot of recommended ones, but they all seemed to be either cliche or poorly written. From the first word of mouth, it sounded like a beautiful woman with a luxury car and a live broadcast to make a lot of money. Various business empires are rising again. This book by Chen Chen can be regarded as a step-by-step normal plot with a bit of dark humor. Although it is written about both career and relationship, it is more beautiful than the exaggerated text. It is mixed with the pull of campus love. I know how to describe it. It is that Chen Chen's feelings and portrayal of characters are more delicate. At least it allows us to read slowly, with a little passion and ups and downs. What I complain about is to seize the time to learn to draw. Look at it, give me a simple drawing of a ghost painting symbol, hahaha, but it is also very cute. Overall, this book is a book that I can read. How can I only read for three hours? I have never registered a Tomato account. I am just reading this book as a visitor after get off work. I just read Chapter 108 tonight, where the author greatly counterattacks Xiao Heizi. So I have to register an account. I won't say anymore, just to support and encourage Chenchen.

Everyone who reads Tomato should also know that most of them are cool novels, and cool novels have a common problem, that is, they are not rigorous and can be toxic. I have been reading this novel for more than an hour, and I have read all the latest updates. As a girl, the author can write such a male-oriented novel. Wrong, there is nothing imprecise or toxic, and the advantage of girls writing books is that they are more emotionally delicate. I think this is a very good book, and the rating should not be so low. If friends want to read a book on this type of subject, I think this book is worth reading. Also, the author has been greatly updated! ! ! !

Basically, I have seen the latest chapter, and I am glad that the arrangement is actually pretty good. As a reader, I would like to offer some small suggestions to the author: First, the protagonist's attributes grow too fast, and he achieves freedom in appearance and wealth too early. In other novels, his combat power collapses. Secondly, the main character of the protagonist is Neptune, but I don't know if it is because of the revised plot. Except for the sister, there are no subsequent chapters for other characters in the early stage. It is not said that the girl will be abandoned, but the pulling and Shura field are actually also very interesting. The last point is that the story does not have a clear main line. The protagonist is too perfect and does not need to prepare for any "emergency" at all. This results in the story having no internal driving force. Similar to well-known plots such as the break-up of engagement in novels such as Fighting to Break the Sky, the protagonist needs to have a set of internal logic to tell the story smoothly.

I really like this book. The plot is very comfortable and there is no overall logical confusion. The author is very cute🙀🙀🙀. The female author drove past me and hit me in the face. The speed of the car was about to take off. This contrast is too strong. Of course, the book is also very good. The characters have vivid emotions and unique personalities. It would be nice to read more. Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

Damn, it must be five stars. Even if the author is great, sometimes the plot should be more compact. For example, when Chu Ruonan sprained her feet, she could write [snickering] [smirking] when applying medicine to her feet. Of course, the author's story line is still very interesting. Come on.

It's not bad. I haven't seen a male protagonist like this in a long time. I just feel that some parts don't look smooth. I hope that the ending is not a bad ending. It's hard to find a novel that is more to your liking.

A flawless male video novel. The content has some excellent points and bad points, but it does not affect the overall masterpiece. As the first novel I read on Tomato, the author is a female author and writes a male video novel. There are many novel and interesting points that are different from male authors. The characterization is very delicate. As a female character in a harem novel, everyone has a unique charm. I personally think that the life experience and character development of the character Gu Niannian are very good. I will not say too much here to prevent spoilers. At the same time, the character of the male protagonist is also relatively perfect. He is indeed a perfect winner in life. It's great that the knife buried in the middle period also came back in the end (if the author can read this review of mine, I can publish the knife in the future, but the end of this article is too hasty to collect the foreshadowing, and the knife should not be too absolute in male videos, and it should leave some suspense for the readers) Then let me talk about some minor problems in this work. First of all, the rhythm of the work is a bit unbalanced, maybe because it is the author's first novel? (I don't know if the author has any other works elsewhere) As a rebirth system, the early rhythm is too tight and the attributes are improved too quickly, which makes the early impression very shallow and the work ends quickly. Secondly, many foreshadowings are not recycled. The world view and story line of this book include the characters in the middle. Logically speaking, it should be possible to write more and expand a lot of things. There are also many functions at the system level that have not been upgraded and used. This is the disadvantage of the author's immature writing. Maybe he stopped writing in a hurry because he was afraid that the reputation would drop in the middle. The plot of the later competition was also too slow, which had a small impact on the overall look and feel. Generally speaking, it is caused by the writing problem that the work was finished too early, but it does not affect my opinion that this is a good book. I haven't read the author's next book yet. Reading the chapters seems to be smoother. I hope the author can write better and better in the future. I will continue to follow your novels [please update]

This book is really good. The author should ignore what those haters say. What you wrote is really great. I have never insisted on reading a book for such a long time. Please keep writing and go to Don't finish it. Come on, author, I always like this article of yours, eh [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

9.5 Points, progress 233, no skipping chapters. At the beginning, the Neptune man overturned and was stabbed to death by a woman in the back. After rebirth, he entered the host's life of being a dog licker, and started to save the disaster girl system (you need to read a certain chapter to understand why I call this system). After importing the original memory, he started one after another Neptune rescue plan, successfully recreating the modern life of an unmarried harem, and through the help of system plug-ins, he walked out a story of extremely high-profile happiness. The plot is touching, sad and sad. The portion is appropriate and suitable for a short period of time. You can rest assured that you won't forget everything after tasting it for too long. The ending is perfect. I should be able to read them all today.

I really like it. I am a boy who likes to read mental pictures, so I watch more female videos. However, I can't stand the main characters of female videos. The male videos are too simple and crude. After reading a few chapters, they will become boring and difficult to follow. Therefore, I have basically never read a novel in its entirety. This author really tempered my hobby. It is the first time I have read a novel. It's so in line with my taste. The sadistic plot is just right, I really like it! ! Everyone has their own type of book that they like, and this is really my favorite. Looking forward to the author's new book! Be sure to watch it as soon as possible! ! The author comes out soon! ! Please turn over my sign, please! ! You are truly my first favorite novel author! Stick to your own style! When you become a great author, I will be your biggest fan! ! Come on @dustspeaker

I think this novel by the author is very good. It does not make people feel boring after reading the first part. The whole article seems to be able to adjust the audience's emotions and bring joy to the audience. If some people are jealous, just be jealous. It will only make the author work harder and become better. As a reader who has read this, I personally like this novel very much. I hope the author's novels can make a long way to the novel world.

Such a delicate description touches people's heartstrings. Each character has its own unique charm. The protagonist is not just a mindless output, he is a flesh and blood person, and the beautiful fur is just an embellishment. An interesting soul is fundamental. I hope the author will not give up on his creation because of some setbacks. You are not alone!

I hope the author can finish it! ! I personally like it so much, it doesn't burn my brain and is easy to read. And from time to time, some soul painters and jokes are mixed in to lighten the atmosphere! The book is not mind-numbing, but the character setting is not like other books that highlight mindless throwing away money and getting things for nothing. All in all, personally speaking, this is really good. (Personal preference and opinion, if it offends, it's up to you) I'll make one up when I see this. I haven't changed what I wrote before. I'm not a professional reader or reviewer. It's a cool novel. The main character is a scumbag. Reading a cool novel is mainly about having fun. But after all, a system novel is still a system novel. 90% Of the protagonists in system novels are just a shell, a machine with no emotions (except for Youman), which may be more emotionless than the real machine of the system set by the author himself. The system will complain and say more humane words than the protagonist after all. It gives you the system, and isn't it a cool novel to let you change? It still follows the same old path. Although it is written at the beginning that the protagonist is Neptune, feelings may not be that important to it. But I didn't expect Shuangwen to be so poisonous. I read Shuangwen just to make myself brainless. It was really enjoyable to watch in the early stage, but the Snow Country Daisy chapter I've seen so far is a big deal! ! It's not that I can't accept this kind of ending, but it's weird that it appears in this kind of novel. Although this is just the setting of the book and the woman's sensitive identity is doomed to tragedy, it's just a pity that it was portrayed so well. As a result, my mentality has changed after reading it now [face covering], and I no longer have the same motivation and mood as when I first started reading it. [But it seems that the author tag did not say that this is a good article, so I should just complain about it. Anyway, no one will stare at this kind of long and smelly nonsense. If it doesn't suit everyone's feelings, feel free to criticize it.]

What can I say about this book? It's the first time that the author has written a book. It's already very good. What's more important is that the author understands us so well that he even made me feel like a familiar tomato. I'll give you a brief review. The subject matter of this book is relatively new, the plot is very rich and will not make people feel tired from reading, and the author's conception is also good. The only shortcoming is that I hope the author will not collapse later! Be steady! , I have read too many books, but they all collapsed in the later stages. I believe that as long as you keep this book steady, you will continue to work hard. What can I say? The author's writing style is really good. But when it comes to painting skills, the author's writing style is really good.

It's well written, but I can't stand it anymore. To be honest, I like to read comfortable and refreshing articles, rather than sadistic ones. Each character is very full, but the characters are probably too full. Their emotions and emotions made me feel uncomfortable. And what makes me happiest is that the male protagonist is not a nouveau riche, but a man with brains. Then there's the heroine aspect. Maybe I am a soft-hearted person. I am not a Holy Mother, and I cannot forgive those who have hurt me. But seeing the male protagonist continue to abuse me, I feel uncomfortable. I feel that since the regret value has reached 100, it has reached its limit. Either there will be no intersection in the future and the relationship will be cut off, or I will try to start over and then give up. There is no need to torture me anymore. It has always been like this. It is uncomfortable and mainly boring. It is nothing more than brushing up values, which is a bit boring. Perhaps, if he were more free and easy, the male protagonist would be more attractive. Then there is Sister Man. To be honest, it might be better to be more free and easy. The male protagonist will eventually have a harem, be more free and easy, make yourself happy, and the readers will be happy too. In fact, Sister Man's reaction is the most genuine, but when reading novels, hey, I still like to have fun. I still have to give it five stars. To be honest, the author wrote it very well.

From my personal point of view, this is a very good novel. The details drawn by the author are very good, and the subject matter is relatively novel. It is the kind of feeling that makes you read. The overall reading experience presented to readers is very good, and the author will interact with everyone in the book club, and will explain and describe the plot of the book in detail, which makes readers Readers can have a deeper understanding of this novel. You may see some other bad comments. I just want to say that they are ordinary people. There is no need to stand on the moral high ground and point at the author's plot. After all, it is difficult for everyone to agree. It is understandable if there are people who don't like it. And I also said at the beginning that it is from my personal perspective, which also shows that some people like it. , It's normal for some people not to like it. If you really don't like it, you can leave. There is no need to step on it to show that you are different. Anyway, I very much agree with the author's creation. You can also join the book club to get a deeper understanding of the author. It is not easy for the author to write novels. I still hope to give the author more support so that the author can bring you better plots and content in the future. Thank you everyone [blowing kiss]

This is the first book I have read that shocked me. The protagonist is really understandable and the plot is compact. The plot is too smooth and there are not many setbacks. But the protagonist is a bit heart-wrenching. Woohoo, I really cried to death when I saw Daisy😭. This is the author's first book on Tomato. Come on, I will always support you, but don't be so harsh. I will always support you.

Well-deserved five stars in my heart! Although it is a systematic text, the proportion of the system is not high. Most of the stories move forward based on the male protagonist's own judgment and past life experience, which gives a good impression. Secondly, each heroine's character is very unique, so that after reading this book, I can vividly remember the character of each heroine, especially Xiaojia and Niannian, who are my two favorite heroines. The plot has ups and downs, unlike ordinary novels, which are all achieved through a series of online IQ and emotional intelligence operations of the male protagonist. What attracts me most about this article is that it is not a simple cool novel, but has very delicate emotions. Although the two SSS-level female protagonists in the later period have swords, and even Qingmei in the extra story also has a sword, it is deeply rooted in people's hearts (of course I think a cool novel can accept a little sword, so I think this is also an advantage). Finally, after reading this book, I was actually a little disappointed, and it reminded me of my past self (of course I am not a scumbag, nor do I have the ability of the male protagonist). It is very interesting. I will even revisit this book over time. Summary: The plot has ups and downs, the logic is very smooth, the speed of the car is fierce, and the content of the work even has the ability to empathize. PS: The author's own paintings are great!

This book is good. It is different from other books in similar categories that I have read before. It looks eye-catching and feels relatively novel. I hope the author will work hard! ! ! After finishing this book, I also hope that other book friends can read more chapters before commenting. Don't just read one or two chapters to discredit this book, and don't be easily fooled or trolled! ! ! ! I have high expectations for this book٩(•̤̀ᵕ•̤́๑)ᵒᵏᵎᵎᵎᵎ I hope the author doesn't give up! ! ! ! ! ! The coolest of cool stories, the male protagonist is equivalent to full level game awareness + perfect plug-ins, king level, he can be called a fighter among the greats! ! ! ! ! I'm addicted to watching [love] [love] Don't give up, author, I and the book friends who like your books are your Zhang Wu (later)

Not bad (recommended, good, watchable, average, bad, shit), compared with the author's latest one, it's a lot worse, but the writing is pretty good. After all, it was written before, but the early stage will give people a feeling that the progress is too fast. I personally recommend reading this one before reading the author's new book. The new book is very good and highly recommended. If you read the new book first and then read this one, it will feel a lot worse. It will feel a bit greasy and unreasonable in some places, so you can either read this one and then read the author's new book, or read the author's new book but not this one.

Overall it's okay, the psychological activities of the characters are portrayed very delicately, which is the strength of the female author. The first half is the road to rise, a bit like a male video. But the second half turned into a pure female video with star-making and sadomasochism. The so-called male channel is not defined by the protagonist being male or having a harem. Personally, I think the backbone of male videos is a series of masculine qualities such as taking action when disobeyed, decisiveness, perseverance, and indomitableness. The character creation is almost forcibly stitched, especially the protagonist's character. Without the possibility of the youthful male temperament and the mature and steady CEO temperament appearing in one person at the same time, he would be schizophrenic. It is simply unrealistic to pretend. People's personality will be projected into behavior and thinking to form "habits." The so-called aura cannot switch back and forth in a short time. What can be done is not normal human beings at all. In order to create a perfect male god character, it is not advisable to forcibly sew all kinds of things together. Daisy's plot is the book's biggest flaw. The torture of this book begins when the protagonist learns of the existence of the treasure and ignores Daisy's injured foot. The male pornographic novel will not let the protagonist give up on Daisy and watch her fall into a pit of fire. Even if it is a dead end, the protagonist will work hard regardless of his own safety. Finally, this paragraph was rounded out near the end, which hurt the readers' hearts. The general male in the book is basically not interested in the entertainment industry, let alone the fandom culture. It seems that the author has been immersed in this industry for many years.

A long novel, very interesting. ① First of all, from the perspective of characters: each heroine has her own characteristics. Facing different heroines, our protagonist can save the day every time, and everyone can also get "practical experience" from the book. ② Secondly, there are many environmental descriptions of scenery in the novel, and there are also some famous sayings such as "If you never forget it, there will be an echo." The language description is very rich, and different characters have different ways of speaking. ③The plot is also very interesting. From the beginning, I thought it was an ordinary cool novel. The plot fluctuated in the middle, and the climax at the end was very good. All in all, in short, this is a good book [Love] The last thing I mentioned is that it's really picturesque, the car is going very fast [laughing]

I only watched 4/1. I feel good. I will be notified if there are any changes in the plot. It makes me mentally prepared and looking forward to the next plot. But sometimes I feel a little disappointed. It's just that the system interface is difficult to see. Sometimes I am confused about the male protagonist's funds. It is worth reading. I hope the author will update it soon. I haven't finished it yet, but I feel it's not enough. It's best to have 10 chapters a day.

I discovered this book at around 12 o'clock in the morning yesterday, and I was able to catch the reminder button in one go! The author is very good at handling the whole article so far, especially when I saw the soul illustrations, I have to say that it really relieved my slightly depressed mood a lot. I hope that the soul painter will continue to do so (after all, there is no famous painting of the century with soul masters in the back. Let me make it clear). So far, I have not found anything too poisonous. Newbies can eat it with confidence (of course, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables)! Five-star praise sent to you, がんばる! ! ! [Eat melon][eat melon]

It must be praised, the pace is good and not draggy. Come on update! There are also some trolls and other trumpets. If you are too envious, just use good works to criticize. Don't use disgusting words to write bad reviews! The author greatly supports you!

I think the author's writing is really good. Every story makes people feel immersive and can arouse the readers' emotions. I admire the author's great writing skills. To be honest, I have read so many novels, and only the one written by the author shocked me the most. It will make me unforgettable for a long time. Moreover, the author is very good at grasping the details. He does not deliberately write every place, making people feel just right. I really admire the author's skills. I really like this book. This book, why do I want to cry? I feel that Gu Niannian is portrayed very well in it. Although my father is not a murderer and my mother will not punish me corporally, they will make me more and more insane in other ways. I was really touched when I saw Gu Niannian in the book has a good ending. I want to cry. Thank you to the author for bringing us such a good article. I like it so much. I hope the author can read this [crying] I feel so touched by reading this novel.