Lei Dong was originally an ordinary employee of Nadutong. Once when he was on a mission with Sister Bao'er (Ah Wu), he accidentally inherited the original power of Sister Bao'er, which caused Lei Dong's Qi to mutate, and then he awakened the ability to dig holes and bury people to obtain the opponent's secret knowledge. From the iron head skill at the beginning, to the corpse exorcism technique next, and then even the legendary eight miracles and the thunder method of the heavenly master were defeated by him. From then on, Lei Dong embarked on an incredible path...
Reader comments
Isn't it a basic element to first understand the original work when writing a fanfic? What is written in this, Xia He's supernatural powers became illusions, and his hands became Lu's traditional Chinese medicine ancestor. Also, the description of Feng Baobao, Liu Yanyan, and Zhang Chulan made me confused. Please ask the author to read the original work.
Cultivation, isn't it just to avoid being bullied by others? After becoming stronger, can you kill everyone who has bullied the protagonist? For example, Lao Tianshi, although this character is a positive character in the original work and is very popular, but a plot that every fan novel will have is Lao Tianshi suppressing the protagonist, which is really disgusting to watch. Otherwise, you should have a good talk. If you insist on coming up, just rely on your high cultivation to suppress him. You really have no temper! I hope to see a book that kills Zhang Zhiwei
It looks really good. . .
That's Sister Baoer of yours
It's okay, keep up the good work
It's a mess, the protagonist seems to know the plot, but is forced to feel like he doesn't understand the plot.
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Don't you even know anything about that sect? It's such a mess. From the first talk about the Lu family creating both hands to the talk about the Feng family worshiping Uncle Liu, I was convinced. Now the author has a very clear mind. If you just look at things that anyone knows, there is no worst, only worse and boring. It's such a mess to write about these things, let alone other things. Bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review.
This book feels like it was made up of words
Internal strength? ? ?
Like writing an essay
Shouldn't you read the original novel or anime before writing? He really couldn't read two fanfics, and he also knew that the two-boxer had red hands and blue hands, not some thread.
If the typos and missing words in the novel could be corrected, the rating might be higher.
Isn't it a basic element to first understand the original work when writing a fanfic? What is written in this, Xia He's supernatural powers became illusions, and his hands became Lu's traditional Chinese medicine ancestor. Also, the description of Feng Baobao, Liu Yanyan, and Zhang Chulan made me confused. Please ask the author to read the original work.
Cultivation, isn't it just to avoid being bullied by others? After becoming stronger, can you kill everyone who has bullied the protagonist? For example, Lao Tianshi, although this character is a positive character in the original work and is very popular, but a plot that every fan novel will have is Lao Tianshi suppressing the protagonist, which is really disgusting to watch. Otherwise, you should have a good talk. If you insist on coming up, just rely on your high cultivation to suppress him. You really have no temper! I hope to see a book that kills Zhang Zhiwei
It looks really good. . .
That's Sister Baoer of yours
It's okay, keep up the good work
It's a mess, the protagonist seems to know the plot, but is forced to feel like he doesn't understand the plot.
Refueling processing 6666
Don't you even know anything about that sect? It's such a mess. From the first talk about the Lu family creating both hands to the talk about the Feng family worshiping Uncle Liu, I was convinced. Now the author has a very clear mind. If you just look at things that anyone knows, there is no worst, only worse and boring. It's such a mess to write about these things, let alone other things. Bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review, bad review.
This book feels like it was made up of words
Internal strength? ? ?
Like writing an essay
Shouldn't you read the original novel or anime before writing? He really couldn't read two fanfics, and he also knew that the two-boxer had red hands and blue hands, not some thread.
If the typos and missing words in the novel could be corrected, the rating might be higher.