Ming Dynasty**********

Zhu Chongba is Zhu Chongliu's biological brother? I really doubt the author's IQ

There are too many typos and the connection cannot be connected.

They are all typos, and the titles in the book are all wrong. Didn't the author check? The first sentence is uncle, and the second sentence becomes uncle.

What is this written? The names are messed up. This is no longer a problem of typos. When I read Chapter 4, Tang Wulin popped up. I don't know, I thought I was reading Douluo. After a while, there was something about the Empress, or some foreign names popped up inexplicably.

Kinship relationships are so confusing. Please read more typos before publishing.

There are so many typos. Did the author carefully review it? ?

I can only say that the writing skills need to be improved...

Can you please stop the typos in this article? Brother, brother, brother

The creativity is pretty good, but it's just like the second brother and the younger brother, the second uncle and the uncle, and this and that. It's too confusing.

There are a lot of typos, some repeated paragraphs, and the symbols are also messed up. Please correct them.

The writing is very creative and wonderful!

Don't blame me... It's a mess. I really doubt that this is a foreign language translated directly using software, or in other words, software translations are better than yours.

Can you write clearly when writing a book? One moment a brother, another moment a younger brother.

No, such novels can be written.

What are you writing about? ? Kindergarten level is better than this, right? ? ?

Author. There are too many typos and I can't even connect.

Since it is fictional history, what kind of history are you writing about? Why don't you just write about Zhu Yuanzhang's legendary deeds? Since it is fictional, then you should write about guiding the reform, conquering the world after the reform, etc., Instead of just writing about this and that, which are all nonsense.

I don't understand, one is the second brother, the other is the second brother, and the other is…the king, and the king of Huai'an is

The content is very good, and the storyline is okay, but the author is a little short on word count, there are a lot of repeated words, and the quotes are not particularly good. Overall, it is just so-so. If the content continues like this, I will not be able to stand it. I hope the author can work hard on the storyline.

The plot is pretty good, but there are so many fucking typos like something

My head is dizzy after looking at it

What is written here makes no sense at all.

I got a headache after seeing it.

The code is messy, but the meaning is still understandable.

The subject matter is okay, but there are too many typos, and this idea is wasted.

Written in a mess

It's a mess,

It's so confusing, the preface doesn't match the postscript

Too many typos

Insulting people's IQ, an emperor has no children