My Two Yandere Masters Are Actually Mortal Enemies!

Your plot is too outrageous. Even if the top people in the world don't have spiritual power, they still have magic weapons and bodies. It's only Chapter 8 and you're broken. You can't use spiritual power, you become an ordinary woman and you are molested by the little Yakuza who took off his pants. 🤦 The main character ran away from the two sickly masters in a few dozen pictures. The plot has returned to the same old routine. It's all beside the point. Most of them want to see the two sickly masters more.

Lei, the two girls take the protagonist as their disciple and are yandere to the protagonist because the protagonist was their brother Mo Chen in his previous life. What does the author think?

I really don't know how to describe it. I can't call the plot design a piece of shit, I can only call it pulpy.

I can only say that there are too many flaws, and the plot is a bit unclear. The idea of ​​the Yandere Master is very good, but the author is not very good at writing it. (Although I'm not very good at writing either.)

The writing is pretty good, right?

Personal feeling is average

Personal feeling is good

You are both acting and standing, you write a piece of cake

After 10 years of cultivation, you are still at the lowest level

The early stage was good, but the later stage was unbearable.