I Became a God in Another World, Then Returned to Reveal My Power

It's okay, but there are a lot of typos, some sentences don't make sense, and the character names are wrong sometimes.

It's well written, but it looks a bit familiar to me. I've seen your early writing ideas in another novel, that novel is called I Seized the Sun God. Basically, your early writing ideas were the same as his, and he ended it long ago.

The real-life plot is okay, but when it comes to the other world, it seems very messy. Especially when the forty or so chapters introduce the background and conflicts, I feel that the control is not very good. It is better to write more about reality and bring me through the other world.

Each chapter is written into a separate book. It's outrageous. There's really no logic at all.

Come on! Go, go, go!