Lin Hao, who obtained the mysterious ring, suddenly became a god in the primitive tribe. Although this god is not strong, it doesn't matter. I still have the faith of the Blue Star World to support me.
So the Blue Star myth began to revive, and a powerful new god would appear in the primitive world!
Ps: the behind-the-scenes flow
Reader comments
It's okay, but there are a lot of typos, some sentences don't make sense, and the character names are wrong sometimes.
It's well written, but it looks a bit familiar to me. I've seen your early writing ideas in another novel, that novel is called I Seized the Sun God. Basically, your early writing ideas were the same as his, and he ended it long ago.
The real-life plot is okay, but when it comes to the other world, it seems very messy. Especially when the forty or so chapters introduce the background and conflicts, I feel that the control is not very good. It is better to write more about reality and bring me through the other world.
Each chapter is written into a separate book. It's outrageous. There's really no logic at all.
It's okay, but there are a lot of typos, some sentences don't make sense, and the character names are wrong sometimes.
It's well written, but it looks a bit familiar to me. I've seen your early writing ideas in another novel, that novel is called I Seized the Sun God. Basically, your early writing ideas were the same as his, and he ended it long ago.
The real-life plot is okay, but when it comes to the other world, it seems very messy. Especially when the forty or so chapters introduce the background and conflicts, I feel that the control is not very good. It is better to write more about reality and bring me through the other world.
Each chapter is written into a separate book. It's outrageous. There's really no logic at all.
Come on! Go, go, go!