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It's great, but the protagonist is too doting on the Yusan family, that kind of care like an old father, and the protagonist is so strong that others can't do anything to him. It would be better to take Jizi's place and go offline during the last lesson, and then let the Yusanjia grow up a bit, and go online when it is time to learn the treasure. Also, if you have the strength to match Kevin's 50-50, the plot dialogue when you see the grown Yusanjia again will be more attractive. Of course, this is just my personal opinion.

I think it feels good for someone like you, the author, to raise the Yusan family as a daughter. It feels weird to be like other people who come to tear down the Yusan family's CP and become the heroine for nothing. [Thinking]

Come on, author, don't stop updating. The author will write according to this update frequency >_<

So far, it seems to be very satisfying. There won't be any big problems if it doesn't collapse or become a supervisor later. Come on.

Although I don't have money to give you a gift, I will still support you.

Five stars and when will sex start?

I don't really support not letting others call the protagonist (Brother Jie), so I only give it four stars🤨

Why did the author end it so suddenly? Don't understand? However, the plot in the book is really well written, and it's a pity that you have an appetite for people. The protagonist in the author's next book is also named Zhang Daojie. I think you can take a look.

Hey hey hey, bring in private goods to work, you know [smile][smile][smile]

Nice looking, I like it very much, but a bit short

The book is quite interesting, but there are few updates. Who is the heroine?

Very nice, but short.

Give me five stars, cheers for the author!

It's finished when we get to the main storyline. It's finished when we get to the main storyline of the game. It's well written, but 66 chapters are too short.

Not bad, I highly recommend it personally, so the author won't hurry up and add more updates [angry]

Come on, author, I like it very much

Although it's pretty good, there are so few

It's beautiful. Come on, don't be a eunuch.

So far it's looking pretty good, but emotionally it feels like a dilemma. I hope this status quo can be broken in the future.

It's so beautiful, so why don't you update the special ones? [Angry][angry][angry]

Come on, it's very beautiful^ω^

The whole text is very good and highly readable, but the ending is too sloppy.

Come on! Keep it up!

Single woman, no women, many women?

Okay, it's still pretty good-looking

Not much to say, you know. [Sinister smile]

Good looking, good luck to the author It sucks [face covering]

Come on! Great author!

I feel pretty

Is this gone?