The Void of Star Divination

This subject matter can be said to be quite novel, there are no flaws in the character's personality, and the story structure is also quite attractive, but the problem is that the author's writing skills are not enough, some details are not handled well, the pace is too fast, and it passes by in a flash, giving people a feeling of being in the clouds, and not knowing what exactly happened. What, I hope you can add some more extended explanations, such as adding psychological descriptions of characters, explaining concepts from a God's perspective, etc. Because I really think the story structure is quite interesting. I hope the author can handle the details well and give readers a better experience, and get rid of [learned] [learned]

Ah, here, I am very grateful to many critics for their speeches, allowing me to play the role of Bai Mo as the heroine. Zundu is very happy 🍉. To be honest, I am a little bit offended by Bai Mo and Qin Zhuang. I hope everyone can continue to read this book, oh yeah (´-ω-`) It's so beautiful and I love to read it. Please keep me updated. The author doesn't need to rest. 🤭 (Just kidding) I'm also trying my best to draw white ink. It may not be as beautiful as everyone thinks, but I will try my best (I said something irrelevant hhh, don't take offense everyone)

The subject matter is very novel, and the stories of each character are also very touching. However, maybe because I read quickly or don't know enough about tarot cards, I still don't understand some parts. Come on, author! Looking forward to the next story [Learned]

Suddenly I realized that I hadn't reviewed it yet. The book was pretty good and the subject matter was quite novel. I've basically never seen it in other books, but if I have to say it, it's short! Very short! But it's a new book and I can understand it. I'm looking forward to

Finished reading. How should I put it? The ending is quite unsatisfying (mainly because amnesia is more uncomfortable). I posted a comment earlier saying that the author did not use Bai Mo Dao to kill Qin Zhuang, because the prophecy was true, so I had to do it myself first (laughing). The book has few problems (it's just short), and the writing style is relatively green (well, that's nonsense. If you don't agree, just call it a fart. I really like this book and beg for Bai Mo and Qin Zhuang's extras). In the end, there is nothing more to say, so I wish you all a bright future, and I wish the author will write better and better, and the book will become more and more popular. (Ps: If you are touched, just reply and thank me ๑•́₃•̀๑). At the end of the day, I beg for Bai Mo and Qin Zhuang's extra story! (Written in blood by one person)

It's a very good book. The protagonist's brother is very handsome. Bai Mo felt that something was missing and the characters were not vivid enough. Overall it's okay

The subject matter is quite new, the plot is good, but maybe I don't know enough about tarot cards, and I don't understand some things very well. I only have one hope, don't stop updating, don't make it unfinished, don't just focus on quantity rather than quality. If the current quality is one chapter per day in three days, I will accept it.

It's a good read. I've decided to read this book. The most impressive thing is Bai Mo and his brother. I beg the author not to use the knife. Bai Mo is really a child. I guess I typed it wrong, I really like Bai Mo

The plot is very good, but there are still a lot of details that are not handled well. You don't have to say everything, you can use more foreshadowing. Of course, you don't have to do this if you are not good at it or not proficient. It is still very interesting to watch. The reason why few people watch it is probably because there is not much written yet. If you write more, there should be a lot more people to watch it.

I really like this kind of article with novel themes and the content feels good to people. The poor reading volume may be because there are too few updates now, and the articles are depressing to read. This style of writing has a small audience.