Eternal Life in Great Qin: I Am the First Emperor's Uncle

If you continue to follow this setting, I will pursue it. Determined seekers of truth, don't be embarrassed women, get your career approved, come on!

The protagonist of this book is not born with immortality, but is also a seeker on the road to immortality. But this book can also be used to appreciate the scenery on the road while pursuing immortality. It is sometimes slow and sometimes urgent. The plot of the story is very reasonable, and it is very comfortable to read. There is nothing poisonous about it. In my mind, this book ranks among the top three in longevity literature. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update quickly.

How can I put it, it's okay, but the plot is too bland but it's not boring to watch. Generally speaking, there are no big problems with the logic of the plot. The progress of the plot is one step at a time. Maybe the author wants to bury all the foreshadowings and stuff, which makes the plot not progress quickly. I hope the author can hurry up and finish the plot. I want it to be pushed forward as quickly as possible to the modern era. Otherwise, I estimate that the progress of the plot I am currently watching may have to be written in the modern era. Of course, I do not rule out the possibility that the author does not want to write it in the modern era. However, this is just my personal idea. There is no problem in writing the plot step by step. It is just that I personally want the plot to be faster.

It's very interesting and exciting. Fortunately, it doesn't have a female protagonist. Otherwise, I really can't stand it. It's the first time I've seen a movie with or without a female protagonist. I'm so moved (ಥ_ಥ). Come on.

Relatively speaking, it is quite good. I just feel that it lacks the atmosphere of troubled times and grand narrative. It is biased towards one area, and there is very little detail on the war. It is brushed aside, but in the end, its flaws cannot be concealed.

The content is delicate and there is no fluffy assembly line production content. The characters in the text are written with flesh and blood, and a character will not pop up suddenly. Most of the inner activities of the protagonist are introduced by big stories or small stories, and some ideas will not appear out of nowhere. The author has carefully checked many details in the book. This is something that most authors I have read cannot do. I hope the author can keep it up. Judging from the current content of hundreds of thousands of words, the author has the potential to become popular. The author does not say that he will continue to work hard, but he hopes to maintain the current writing level. Finally, I hope that everyone can feed the author within their own capabilities. After all, people also need to eat 🍉 🍉 🍉

The first two hundred chapters are quite good, but the writing of Xiao Xiao and Ah Lian is a bit... I can only say that it is not satisfactory, especially Ah Lian's excessive writing makes people disgusted. I don't know how to describe this feeling, but I just don't like not being able to read it. I skipped the next thirty chapters... (If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't force yourself) Not to mention Xiaoxiao and Ah Lian, the first two hundred chapters are worthy of five stars. This book still has great potential, so please give it a try

She's so beautiful, so why is she so good? At least it's 9.2, It's not poisonous, you can check it out, brothers.

The writing is elegant and the words are meaningful. It not only describes magnificent scenes, but also depicts ordinary people. Even if there are some small flaws, they will not hide the flaws. Personally I think you can take a look

I have read 20 chapters, and I haven't found any poisonous points yet. This book is considered a high-quality book on Tomato. There are so many scenes between A Ling and Xiao Xiao in the back, they are just fucking! Advance the main line! The six kingdoms have not yet been unified. Who cursed King Qin? There are a lot of things to write about. No one wants to read the experience of the second apprentice.