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If you continue to follow this setting, I will pursue it. Determined seekers of truth, don't be embarrassed women, get your career approved, come on!

How can I put it, it's okay, but the plot is too bland but it's not boring to watch. Generally speaking, there are no big problems with the logic of the plot. The progress of the plot is one step at a time. Maybe the author wants to bury all the foreshadowings and stuff, which makes the plot not progress quickly. I hope the author can hurry up and finish the plot. I want it to be pushed forward as quickly as possible to the modern era. Otherwise, I estimate that the progress of the plot I am currently watching may have to be written in the modern era. Of course, I do not rule out the possibility that the author does not want to write it in the modern era. However, this is just my personal idea. There is no problem in writing the plot step by step. It is just that I personally want the plot to be faster.

The protagonist of this book is not born with immortality, but is also a seeker on the road to immortality. But this book can also be used to appreciate the scenery on the road while pursuing immortality. It is sometimes slow and sometimes urgent. The plot of the story is very reasonable, and it is very comfortable to read. There is nothing poisonous about it. In my mind, this book ranks among the top three in longevity literature. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update quickly.

It's very interesting and exciting. Fortunately, it doesn't have a female protagonist. Otherwise, I really can't stand it. It's the first time I've seen a movie with or without a female protagonist. I'm so moved (ಥ_ಥ). Come on.

Relatively speaking, it is quite good. I just feel that it lacks the atmosphere of troubled times and grand narrative. It is biased towards one area, and there is very little detail on the war. It is brushed aside, but in the end, its flaws cannot be concealed.

The content is delicate and there is no fluffy assembly line production content. The characters in the text are written with flesh and blood, and a character will not pop up suddenly. Most of the inner activities of the protagonist are introduced by big stories or small stories, and some ideas will not appear out of nowhere. The author has carefully checked many details in the book. This is something that most authors I have read cannot do. I hope the author can keep it up. Judging from the current content of hundreds of thousands of words, the author has the potential to become popular. The author does not say that he will continue to work hard, but he hopes to maintain the current writing level. Finally, I hope that everyone can feed the author within their own capabilities. After all, people also need to eat [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

She's so beautiful, so why is she so good? At least it's 9.2, It's not poisonous, you can check it out, brothers.

I have read 20 chapters, and I haven't found any poisonous points yet. This book is considered a high-quality book on Tomato. There are so many scenes between A Ling and Xiao Xiao in the back, they are just fucking! Advance the main line! The six kingdoms have not yet been unified. Who cursed King Qin? There are a lot of things to write about. No one wants to read the experience of the second apprentice.

The writing is elegant and the words are meaningful. It not only describes magnificent scenes, but also depicts ordinary people. Even if there are some small flaws, they will not hide the flaws. Personally I think you can take a look

Hmm... This book is interesting. When you first enter the immortal path, you are impatient to set foot on immortality. It may seem like a poisonous point, but it is actually understandable. Coupled with the relationship between master and apprentice, the friendship between relatives and friends, the Tian family is ruthless... It's not rough, but it's worth watching for now.

The writing was okay. I stayed up all night to read it. It wasn't too toxic and the reading was smooth. However, the content has nothing to do with the title of the book for the time being.

So wonderful! Get them all into my trap! Author, please update quickly! (Holds fists) When I saw it, I called Thai pants hot! Really good-looking! (However, I am uneducated, and my good looks are known all over the world. If I say too much, it will be considered a spoiler. Don't hesitate to jump in!) Great cheers for the author!

I just started reading it. The writing is very detailed and the characters are vivid. It can be said to be a fairy tale. Unfortunately, it has been discontinued. I don't know if it will be updated in the future.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good book. I've read a lot of books. Generally, you can tell immediately in the first few chapters whether a book is a good book or not and whether you can read it. Some high-rated books are rated 9.5 Or above, but the writing has no logic at all. I also admire others who can read it! This writing is soul-stirring, has a strong perspective on the overall situation, and has rigorous logical thinking. It's online! This is a very rare and good book that makes people want to read it and give them a brief review of history! Endless aftertaste, I hope everyone can calmly appreciate this book in these impetuous and busy days, and you will find that the author is very talented [Like][Like]

I think it is very well written. The touching feeling brought by small things and the magnificence brought by the grand struggle between countries are so wonderfully combined in this book. I think it can be given a score of 9.6. It feels like my favorite book besides Chen Xun Daozu.

The content is step-by-step and the emotions are very good. The description of strategies is slightly lower than the emotions, but it also stands out as an excellent work among many works. It can be called a sequential and refreshing article, which is confusing and boring, and is different from a fast-moving and exciting article. However, it is nothing more than that this work has a fresh idea, is wise and non-toxic, and is really a good product [Eat Melon] Cherish Zhang Shaodu

It suits my taste, I look forward to the next plot After more than a hundred chapters, the main character Shui met Xiaoxiao, and then he started going crazy. Now everyone knows about the blessed land space. There are too many entanglements, and more and more supporting characters have been written. I can't stand it. Why is the longevity novel doing this? I want to withdraw it. Come on, author.

To be honest, the writing is really good. I feel that the author wants to write everything, but it seems too procrastinating, which makes the plot development too slow. In addition, the subject matter of the book is difficult to write, so updates will naturally be slow. I can only hope that the author will not abandon the book.

I am a stingy person who has read countless books, but I dare not claim to be rich in knowledge. I have read 1200 chapters so far. The content in the book is fascinating, the plot is well connected, the characters are vivid, and the battle formations and killings are wonderful. I hope the author can continue his efforts and update more.

Awesome, awesome indeed. Have 9.3 Qualifications. Don't stop updating!

Dream for thousands of years, never wake up. From modern times to ancient times, and from ancient times to modern times. Thousands of years ago, I read through history. Thousands of years later, I will be history. The author's Qin Dynasty, then Han Cao Xin Cao, Three Kingdoms, Wu State, and Tang and Song Dynasties are almost the same. This book is very exciting, an excellent work, the writing is very good, the plot and the relationship between the characters, and the mutual speculation and opinions are all well written, so I hope the author can work hard, such a good book, of course I must continue to write it! [Praise]

This book can only be said to be... Low! Hugely low! The Taoism here is a mixture of current Taoist cultivation methods and traditional fantasy realm, which is very nice! The insights into the characters are also very good. It is based on objectivity and mixed with subjectivity. It completely made me feel the magnificence and talents of historical figures! Recommended to all book lovers, it is worth reading!

The semi-white dialogue was understandable to me, with a wonderful structure and a complete system. The process is tight, not to mention how good it is, but it has surpassed 70% of Tomato novels, is on par with 25% of novels, and is only half a point different from 5% of novels.

I think it's very interesting. Some people may think that as long as it has a female supporting character, it's a bad book. But I think the author's writing is very good. It's really well written in all aspects. The author can just write according to his own ideas, but don't hurt me.

The combination of immortality writing and military advisor writing is okay, but there are too many descriptions of life and it's too ordinary. Write more about wars and the realm of cultivating immortals. Leveling up is not very engaging, so this aspect needs to be strengthened!

The writing is very good, why is the rating so low?

To be honest, this is the only longevity novel that I have read in its entirety without skipping chapters. What's wrong with the Virgin Mary if she's not the protagonist? Did it offend you? Isn't there a reason in the article? If you like to read cool novels, go elsewhere and insist on reading that kind of nonsense, which lowered the rating of this novel.

The writing is very good. In the Age of Ending Law, there is relatively little spiritual energy, so it is normal to say that the strength of cultivators is worse than that of ordinary monks. In addition, the inheritance is cut off, and most of the powerful attack methods have been lost, but the combat power has not collapsed. This is different from other novels. Awesome [like] [like]

I have been reading books for several years📖, and this one can be said to be one of the best. The writing is good. When I first saw other people's reviews, I thought it was exaggerated. I planned to give it a bad review after reading it. Unexpectedly, after reading a few books, I found it to be very good. I have read more than a hundred books so far and rated and commented. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The content is quite rich and the subject matter is good. If I have to find fault, it would be the lack of pen and ink in some detailed descriptions. However, it is understandable in order to quickly advance the plot. I hope the author will not finish the story and stick to it.