Luring Her Across the Line

The biggest feature of this book is that it is short! [Like] [Like] I have read so many novels, and this is a "little novel". Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and well written! [Like] The male and female protagonists in the story are very vivid, and the male protagonist's domineering doting on his wife is vivid on the page. The details in the novel are also very vivid and real. The heroine is beautiful, cute, and very principled. Like! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] The disadvantage is that the author writes the book in large numbers without checking, making small mistakes all the time. [Laughing] If you read it carefully, you will feel like you are stumbling.

The content is a bit short. It would be better if there was a description of their wedding, as well as the emotional development of Wen Huarong and Lu Wan. I hope lovers will eventually get married. I hope the author can write additional supplements! @

Not bad, short and concise! Ji Yan Li [Love] Li Yan. Year after year, day and night. From the moment I first saw you, at that moment I even thought about where we would be buried a hundred years from now. Li Yan is the lead that affects Ji Yanli, his nemesis, his medicine, and everything about him.

I like this kind of short and sweet article that hits the ball straight [shy]

Not bad, not bad, good looking, I like it, I recommend it.

It looks good, but there are a few typos, but nothing major.

Short essay. Sweet!

I like the male protagonist to be dedicated, affectionate, gentle, delicate and considerate, but there is no such male protagonist in real life.

I feel like I haven't finished writing yet. I wish I could write more. The writing is good and worth recommending.

Beautiful, short and precise, I like it