The Days When I Opened a Black Shop in Zhutian

Generally speaking, the first volume is okay, but there are still some problems with the transaction objects and there are too many chapters about people in the small world. I haven't read it yet. Here are some suggestions for the author. First, since you can trade with Tiandao, isn't it great? Win-win cooperation is really good. You can trade freely, and Tiandao can also gain certain benefits. Over time, other things can also be traded directly with Tiandao. Otherwise, your introduction is about trading, and wouldn't it be ugly to think about plundering in the content? Second, don't give up on the small world. Mosquitoes are also meat. Intelligent life is the greatest wealth. You can find a few doomsday-type or invaded worlds and make deals with them. You help save the world, and they pay a certain amount of compensation. Use online games to put them there, and then there must be things that can be recycled into energy. Isn't it good for you to make money on both sides? Third, as the number of worlds increases, there must be certain rules. You can work out a perfect rule, and then let cross-borders be allowed. The travel expenses alone are enough for you to make a fortune. Fourth, writing a novel of this type of communication between worlds can only describe an individual in one or two chapters at most. If it is more, it will be boring. You can refer to the writing style of the strongest store manager in history in the middle and later stages. There is the protagonist's own perspective, everyone's perspective, and a personal perspective. Isn't this rich in content? Of course, I'm just suggesting, it's up to you how you write it.

It's super good-looking, the protagonist is intelligent, and the main character is interesting. Not in a World Water word count. Before I got tired of watching it, I changed to another world. . There is constant freshness. . I was so hooked that I couldn't stop, I wanted to put down my phone, but I also wanted to watch it for a while. So now that it's almost dawn, I finally finished reading and want to go to bed. I'm super lucky to always find novels that I like. There is currently no heroine and no sister that I really like. The author quickly got started. Update, update, don't be lazy. I love you [send heart] Ouch. . . Continue to keep it

It's a very new idea. It's the first time I've seen the main god used as a server. It's really cool. Come on, author.

The author's imagination is good, but it's too little. I finished reading it in one go. Although this book only has a score of 7.2, I guess it will definitely get a score of 8 or more in the future. Check it out and hope to become a long-time fan of this book.

The writing style is very good, and the content is also very good, but a lot of things in it jump too fast, and the author probably didn't write it very seriously. It's a pity. If the middle didn't jump so fast, and the ending wasn't so hasty, this would have been a pretty good book. [Eat melon][like][like]

No heroine/behind the scenes/travel/main god/multiple worlds/give away golden fingers/open a store (actually, it's a platform) I like the structure of this book very much. It probably starts by building a platform, develops the world, connects large, medium and small worlds to create a cross-border trading platform, occasionally guest-stars in world upgrade services, and sends systems to the children of destiny (small copy plot) The reason for the high score is that many of the points written in this book are my favorite points, and I didn't miss any of the bad points (everyone's bad points are different, just for reference), and there are no parts that I hate. The whole book is relatively comfortable to read (for me) Then there is the point that many people in the comment area criticize that there are too many small copies and are too complicated. In fact, this is what makes me happy... I like to read books with a structure similar to this one, such as the one where the system exploded, and the one about Yuhuang Datianzun. I also think that the small dungeons are almost unfinished... Basically they end and return to the main story less than half way through (I really hate this, the world of the small dungeons is not enough to see). I really want to see more small dungeons, but they are all blocked. In other aspects, as long as it's not unsatisfactory, I won't mention it.

The novel is very good, especially the first volume. I have not read the second volume. The third volume is generally relatively dull. I hope the author will update it well and think of more ideas or adopt some opinions and ideas from the comment area. You can use jokes appropriately but not too bluntly. I estimate that this novel will maintain five stars in the past month and these two months. Please don't look at the ratings. Sometimes the ratings are low because the system deliberately does not give popularity. I suggest you read this book.

Very good-looking, no cp, no ambiguity, good career, the copy is also good-looking I didn't like it very much when he ended up in person later.

It's okay, but it's too short, and the progress is very fast. The theme is similar to "The Lord God's Black Shop", both of which use the broken Lord God to open a shop. The progress of that book is slower, there are eunuchs, and the plot is still very good (except for the early stage)

Come on, you feel like the strongest shopkeeper in history!

Hmm... That... This book is very nice [give me my heart]... (Almond eyes are round, lips are slightly pouty, cheeks are as red as a misty sunrise, showing a shy look, jade fingers are holding the corners of clothes and gently swinging, and round toes are gripping the floor)

These volumes have the meaning of fast travel, and there are plots such as the protagonist being a system, and the networked world of immortality. It's really well stitched, and there's nothing I'm not satisfied with in the writing. I'll give it five stars, and cheers for the author.

The plot is compact and grand, and the setting of the main god is eye-catching. The author's creativity is unique and amazing. There are no obvious flaws on the whole, and there are some light-hearted and enjoyable elements interspersed. I look forward to the author continuing to expand the worldview and bring us more exciting stories.

I don't originally read reincarnation novels. Congratulations to the author for successfully attracting my attention.

It's a bit long to write about Liu Ji. What I want to see is the growth of the protagonist, not the supporting character.

Time travel, (system is divided into levels 1 to 10) system level 10 (disabled state), small thousand worlds, middle thousand worlds, big thousand worlds, parallel worlds, other worlds, development in the early stage, recovery of system energy in various worlds in the middle and late stages, it is good to read it

I didn't expect the rating to be so low and it looks so good. I watched it in one sitting.

The number of words is a bit short, and the ending is a bit quick. Many stories just start with a simple beginning without filling in the holes in depth, but the overall story is relatively smooth. The stitching is strange but the stitching is very good, the subject matter is novel, and it is very readable.

It's quite good. Firstly, it's not too addictive. Secondly, although some of the storylines are not very attractive, the number of chapters in each volume is adequate. It's a good fast-paced novel. If you're a book-hungry reader, you can take a look. There's nothing exciting about it, and it's mainly a leisure genre.

The setting of this book is good, and the writing is okay, but not many people have read it. It is probably because of the lack of exposure. The author can try to buy it on the list. In addition, the update speed is extremely slow and needs to be improved.

This is bringing the tricks of profiteers to the world of immortality.

This book is very good. Although it is written by the author at will, although the pattern is not new or old, the writing style is very good and the imagination is wide open. You can take a look at it.

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Yours is pretty good, and I'm quite happy today. The main reason is that the updates are too slow. Oh, and I've also been lying recently.

Very good, I hope the author will continue writing

Good book. Someone maliciously suppressed it. Like Hongjun Killing System and Pangu Killing System, it makes me want to catch up on updates. But there are too few updates.

I don't often read trading novels, but this time I read it and it was quite interesting.

Very good. A rare good book from Tomato. Unfortunately, there are too few words and I never update it.

It's quite innovative and very good. Come on.

It's very beautiful, a bit confusing, but worth a look