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"Qingxuan alone has seven points of character in the world." The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are described in detail, as if they are alive. I like the protagonist's character very much. I liked this sentence so much in the first world that I copied it. I can't refuse Qingxuan played by the protagonist [Sending my heart]

The first plane: The cold monk guided the emperor in the fog towards him step by step, but he pretended not to be confused, causing the little emperor to be helpless and panicked. "I'm holding your hand, come with me, don't let go" The second plane is not finished yet, but the beginning is still exciting. Instead of approaching the emperor's favored son for profit, he rewritten it as because he loves him too much. He can't bear to say it but is affectionate and dedicated. He relies on getting along with him step by step to move him towards her. "I'm just waiting for you at the finish line. You will come, I promise." It's so to my liking, I really like it. The first plane really poked me. Although the Queen Mother is a villain, I still like this character. "If the Buddha doesn't help me, what's the use of offering it to me?" "If it doesn't work, then you don't believe it."

Especially beautiful. Evaluate the following aspects: 1. Have an engaging storyline that arouses readers' interest and curiosity. The development of the plot has ups and downs, conflicts and climaxes, which made me full of expectations during the reading process. 2. The characters in the novel should be three-dimensional and flesh-and-blood, with their own personalities, motivations, and growth. Readers are able to relate to the characters and care about their fates. 3. There are beautiful words that can vividly describe the scene and show the psychology of the characters. At the same time, language expression should be concise, clear and easy to understand. 4. It has a certain depth of thought and can trigger readers' thinking. The theme idea can be a discussion about human nature, society, history, etc. 5. The structure of the novel is compact and reasonable, and there is a logical relationship between various parts. It makes it easier for readers to understand and accept the story. 6. Have unique creativity and be able to stand out among many works. Novel ideas can surprise readers during the reading process. 7. It can arouse readers' emotional resonance and allow readers to have various emotional experiences such as joy, anger, sorrow, and joy during the reading process. All in all, the novel is very interesting and can be considered comprehensively from many aspects.

Based on my personal experience of reading online articles for five or six years, if it can cause people from both sides of the comment area to quarrel, then the author's writing style must be online. After all, only when the characters are well established and the plot develops wonderfully can people be made to feel grievances for a certain character. Personally, I still think this book is worth reading. The two worlds come together, and the knife and the candy go hand in hand. It is not too sweet and cliché, nor is it too hard to persuade people to leave. There are tense characters and a compelling plot, and they can maintain this tension and tension, which is relatively rare in Tomato. It's a pity to miss it.

Gaga looks good, very good. The first world is well written and the characters are also very nice. In the second world, I hope the author will let the chased husband go to the crematorium, otherwise it will feel a bit awkward. Although it is for the mission, the author will make more updates. If you like to read more, I will write more.

The author's writing style is very good. The first world is really apotheosis, it really pokes me xp🙌 Shou is not a weak shou, it is a double strength. The overall logic is not brainless. I hope to update it more!

The plot of the author's book actually surprised me. It's not the so-called love-at-first-sight type where you fall in love so hard that you can't help yourself. Gong is always sober, and the plot is also very sexually charged. I like this feeling very much, and the author's writing style is also very good. I hope I can keep it up.

After watching the first hour episode, I couldn't wait to come here to comment. It was really touching, and I was moved by their feelings. Maybe the routine is still popular, but how should I put it, I gave my sincere feelings in the routine that came and went. After pulling back and forth, you will eventually fall in love with him. If you think you have read thousands of stories, you will never be easily tempted. In the end, you will feel moved by another sincere person. Culture is limited, you'll know it when you see it, don't miss it if you pass by. Really nice It's so beautiful, I've already read it twice. So few people watch it

Oh my gosh, this novel really touched my hobby. It's so well written, I loved reading it so much. The plot is also very novel. Although the pace is fast, it's not too abrupt (in fact, it's not too fast for Tomato). The protagonist's character is also great, but it's a pity that there are so few of them! Come on, author! Lots of updates

Strong and strong are directly impacted. It's super good-looking, and the plot is also very interesting. It's a rare novel in Western Persimmon that contains a little bit of Che Che! Both attacking and receiving are my favorite types. Although it is not double clean, it is within the acceptable range. I haven't seen such a good taste in a long time! ! ! 1V1 successfully protected my young heart [love] [love] [love] The writing is also very good, and the cookie is not a loss for buying shares. The key is that the update is really fast [almost crying] Author I love you [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS]

The writing is super beautiful, and the writing style is very good. When Yin learned that 001 was the LP, he really doted on him. He is a peerless good man. In short, I only have one dissatisfaction ~ that is, can there be more updates? What did I do to get a serialized article? It is too painful to follow the update [crying] [crying] [crying]

All I can say is it's very, very beautiful! Although the second world is full of controversy, the protagonist is after all a person who has traveled through countless worlds. It is very unrealistic for an S-level ruthless person who has done so many tasks to fall in love with someone so quickly. And he also understands the little Jiujiu in the hearts of these men with many harems. If they are not ruthless, it will obviously not be effective. And this author, oh my God! I really love him to death, his writing style is really amazing! Why not do more? I will definitely keep chasing it, the latest in this world, wow! It really whetted my appetite. Looking forward to more and more! Looking forward to more and more! I will keep following for updates!

The first world really amazed me. I usually only comment when I see a reminder for more updates, but I remembered that there was a super-good book before and I found it was out of order after I finished it. I'm really sorry. In order to live up to this book, I wrote it as soon as the system prompted me. Overall It's very, very good. The writing style is not childish at all. It's not the usual childish writing. The first level is super novel and beautiful. Even if I saw the Imperial Master and the Emperor before, it was the Imperial Master who was the attacker, and the Imperial Master was often a shou who didn't know the world. This is a direct reversal! ! So fragrant 😄

It's super beautiful, the protagonist is well-developed, and what I love most is the writing style! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] Super good! ! Love words come out of her mouth easily, and she also knows how to write scenes! ! How dare the mountains and the earth merge with each other? It really impressed me and is worth a look! ! [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

The fried chicken is really good! ! I have never seen anything like this before. The author perfectly realized the two strengths in my heart! In my first life, I was an emperor, with a palace and status. I really love the double-door thermos cup. Gong was the national master who was even more impressive, full of fairy spirit, gentle and compassionate. He directly controlled Shou Gei to death and became Gong's most loyal believer. In the second world of cultivating immortals, Shou is a proud man of heaven who is full of ambitions. Gong acts as his younger brother to gain Shou's heart step by step, and then pretends to give up and manipulates Shou hard. The writing is great, and the plot is compact and exciting! Many unexpected climaxes made my blood boil! I've hit my mark on the characters, plot, writing, and background, and I'm pretty much locked into this article!

The writing and plot are pretty good, I'm not a noob, I prefer the first world, the protagonists have feelings for each other. But the protagonist in the second world immediately starts to suffer from the CPU, and just shows off his cards and stops pretending. Although there are reasons for the first world, it is equivalent to starting to torture, which is not sweet anymore. I will come back after this world is over, and it will be torture to follow up, unless the author releases the update [sneaky laugh]

I really recommend not watching The Second World. If you want to watch it, please watch it later. Otherwise, if you look at the front, it's really easy to get pissed off. [Smile] But other worlds are okay. Five-star reviews are coming. [Blowing kiss]

It's really good-looking, so over the top. Especially the first world, after all, it is the first meeting between the two male protagonists, which obviously lays the emotional foundation for the subsequent plot. In just a few dozen chapters, the characters' emotions progress very smoothly and cleanly. It made me feel Helian Zhixi's love, obsession, strength and fragility, and the protagonist's change towards Helian also made me very excited. Because the original plot is set in a male video, how a straight man can be rationally converted is a difficult problem. I think the author handled it very well and very naturally and smoothly. Ah ah ah, anyway, it's just a waste of my xp. Author, I want to marry you! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

This book is really well written and the emotional descriptions are also very detailed. The character traits of Yin Wuqiu and Shou from various small worlds are also distinct. The plot is also unconventional, and the system does not play much role. At best, it is just a middleman and mascot. [Cover face] I would call it the strongest among the two-way redemption novels! The sweet parts are very sweet, and the sad parts are also sad, especially the second small world, which is like looking for candy in the glass shards. The other small worlds also have their own sad points. My heart ached while reading the whole book, it was very depressing! [Crying] [Crying] The most important and touching thing is the two-way redemption of Yin Wuxi and Qi Weigu. It is not a "collecting fragments" routine, but the rush of souls from both sides! Overcoming all difficulties in order to meet each other [crying] [crying] In addition to the description of the protagonist, the portrayal of NPCs also highlights human nature and emotions. For example, the Queen Mother in the first world, Feili in the third world... All in all, this review really does not express my great admiration for the book and the author. You can only feel their feelings after reading it yourself. May this book become a hit, long live! ! !

Nice! ! ! ! The characters and plots of different small worlds are also different. After reading so many fast-traveling books on Tomato, this is the first time I have found the fun of fast-traveling. I actually don't like to read too long questions. I often skip chapters or abandon articles, especially in Tomato [face covering]. But I read this book word for word. Although some plots are occasionally a bit awkward, they are acceptable. I still like the overall plot very much. I see that many people are struggling with the issue of cleanliness. I actually don't care about it that much. After all, who doesn't have an ex? As long as we don't mess around when we're together, it'll be fine.

Really love this quick read. (Not suitable for extreme attack control) The first world is about meeting each other, attracting each other, and then falling in love, accompanying each other, and the resonance of two mature souls. In the second world, Gong meets the young and energetic Shou. From being a dog licker for the mission to being together for the mission, Gong has always loved Shou from the first world. While he was attracted, there was an obvious feeling of being pulled away from him in his heart and actions. It was not until he confirmed that the current him was the one in his heart that he began to subvert and change his heart. Although the author did not describe so many Gong's inner activities, we can feel the step-by-step changes in his heart from his motivations. It was also in this world that he determined that the target of his mission was probably the same person. In the third world, because he had determined who his mission target was, he began to tend toward sweet pets. Until the end. In fact, this book is a very different kind of fast-travel novel in my mind, because each world is different, not only in terms of identity. Unlike many books, you can basically guess what is written after reading the two worlds. In this book, the story of each world has the protagonist serving the main body of the story, rather than having two different protagonists based on the same logic. Goldfinger is also very useful. The most favorite thing about it is that although he has a golden finger, he is not S B. He is not the kind of person who just sets up a system and just rests. He has his own rhythm, his own control and behavioral logic. The final relationship between the two people is also very good, so I won't reveal it. A very recommended book

How can I put it this way? I thought it was a bit short before and was not attracted to it, but after reading it later I found that it is really delicious. Helian Zhixi is really Bai Yueguang, and the equal love between the two people is really enviable. Chu Wangchuan is really the pitiful one. Gong was moved in the first world, so he learned the hard way and restrained his emotions in the second world. And because Xiao Chu was in the second world, it happened to be when Gong didn't know his identity and was attracted to Bai Yueguang, so the part about Xiao Chu really hurt me. My favorite of the last two is the Regent. I'm not very interested in the Western magical world, but Cheres is a real wife. Oh my god, baby, how can you be so virtuous. Huo Yunzheng's words are quite satisfactory. It is not as stunning as the first world, nor as thrilling as the second world, but it is still very interesting. At least it is better written than most fast-traveling articles. Although it is short, it is very meaningful.

Hey hey hey, it looks good, hehe hey hey, it looks so good, there are still a few details in the details, hehe hey hey, I like it. Ahem, the plot is still very good. Although it was a surprise when it ended (because I thought it would be a long novel), it made sense (at the time, I was still thinking that the protagonist had figured out how to make a novel in the future, but it ended naturally). Except for the second world, which I felt was a little bit different, the other worlds were really great! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhh! ! ! ! But it's a pity that the first world is not orthopedics. I was excited when I saw that they were brothers, but it is true that if it was orthopedics, it would be difficult for the emperor to deal with it. The white-haired succubus boy in the second world is so cute! ! ! The third world overlord is also really good when he goes to the bow, and he has a relationship between an adopted son and an adopted father. Fragrant, so fragrant, I feel so good eating these meats ~

The writing is very good, the plot is good, and the characters directly hit my mark [Adoration] [Adoration] But the later plot is not the same as the scumbag style I originally wanted, but I am very satisfied with the beginning. Overall, it is good, Mrs. Nb! (Ps: But the ending came a bit too unexpectedly)

I really recommend it. Each world can be read as an independent story. The author is very careful in constructing each small world. Unlike other fast-travel novels, the world background is perfunctory. Although we all like to eat sweets without thinking, we can't really treat readers as fools! By the way, I whispered: The extra Shura Field can actually grow a little bit more [laughing] After seeing other works of the author Da Da, I realized that the unfinished book on the bookshelf before was by the same author as this one. As expected, it is true that it is the same. I will pay attention to the author Da Da Da. Come on! [Top post]

Five stars must be given to the author. The writing is so good. I really like Zhixi and Mukari. The author's writing is very good and really profound. It feels more profound than watching anime and TV series. It left a deep impression on me. The image is very vivid. I feel that the two of them have a sense of destiny and are both powerful. It's a thief that poked me xp. It's so beautiful. It's like a white moonlight. For someone who likes to read short stories, I'm just like it. I like it so much. It really seems like they are in love in a world that I can't see [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Beautiful! Each world brings me different feelings, there is a big difference. There are many styles, and the small worlds I have watched so far are both powerful, but sometimes my heart is really beating in pain [crying] but after all the hardships, it is actually quite sweet [shy] I like it very much. The first world is really invincible!!! It is super beautiful, I love it!!! But there is one thing that is both offensive and defensive. After reading the two worlds, I feel that this article is not suitable for extreme control. I will really be angry. I'll look at it later, it should be nothing [almost crying] In short, the author's writing style of this novel is very good and will not bring any bad experience to the readers. The characterization is also very vivid and not thin! It is because of the diverse world styles and vivid characterization that I, a somewhat controlled person, could read it. It is really good to read [Adoration]

I went. After reading this book, I am really starving for it. The plot setting of this book will really make my aunt laugh. I love this style to death [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Help, this is the most beautiful general attack article I have ever read (no one!!). The writing style is unparalleled, even the xp is firmly on my heart! ! I cheat a little to chase my wife, torture her a little and then come back sweetly, who understands me! Qiangqiang is the one who hangs! The teacher has become a god (screaming) (distorted) (dark crawling) (transforms into a monkey) Teacher, update soon! ! !

I like it. Every world feels different hahaha. I like the world of Western Fantasy the most. The cute little succubus can't resist the temptation of his wife. The plan is broken for the first time. It's also very cute. Hahaha. I just hope there will be a sequel or something.