Aokiden's First Entry into the World

In the vast sea of ​​​​people, meeting each other is fate. During the reading process, if you have any opinions, suggestions, or ideas, you can share them in the comment area. It doesn't matter whether it's good or bad. I hope you can use your noble hands and comment a lot. Your support is my biggest motivation!

I like the author's writing and the story is also very good, but for me, I think the progress is a bit slow. Of course, it's not that this book is not good, it's just that everyone's reading experience is different. I recommend reading it if you like traditional martial arts.

The three of them went down the mountain to practice. Qingqing, who had a brother in everything, and Li Ruyue had completely different feelings along the way, forming a sharp contrast.

A very good book with a reasonable structure and exciting plot. The setting of the male and female protagonists is orthodox and vivid. The writing is very good. I like it.

I like this kind of group portrait.

The story is very detailed, and the younger generation in the family goes out for experience, which makes people feel full of vitality.

A group of half-grown children went on a trip (to increase their knowledge), and they were really wanton and high-spirited.

The characters range from cunning and willful to gentle and generous. It will definitely be fun to have these people together!

You can tell whether this is the author's first online novel. There are some ink stains in some places. Cheers, author: -O, still five-star support

I hope the author will keep it up, write slowly, and show the experiences of these people step by step. Think about it, Guo Jing and Huang Rong also came out to experience things at a very young age.

As time goes by, young people venture into the world with high spirits, make a few friends, and have some experiences, which are beneficial to their growth.

I don't know why, but I really like this kind of traditional martial arts novel without a system or time travel. Maybe this is more in line with the original intention of the martial arts novel.

Mu Qingqing is very similar to Jiu Mei in Xiao Yu'er and Hua Wuque, she is willful, fast-talking, and not afraid of trouble (because she has her brother by her side)

Qingqing is very direct, cute and free-spirited.

A sense of chivalry rushes towards the face, making people feel proud and full of pride, and they can conquer the world with their swords.

The atmosphere of Jianghu is both strong and novel, and the characters are young and energetic, full of passion and not reckless.

The characterizations are very vivid. Mu Qingqing and Ru Yue, one is lively and cheerful, the other is steady and generous, which adds a lot of interest to the work.

The plot progress is relatively slow, but the characterization is still good and vivid, and the sister Qingqing is vividly written.

There are many foreshadowings and the writing is smooth. It is rare to see martial arts novels without system or time travel, but with a slightly ancient feel. Support

The writing is good, the concept is okay, there are many CP articles, I really want to see who the official partner of the male protagonist is [laughing] I guess it's Kisaragi

This book is really well written! I like this work very much. I prefer this kind of book!

It's a good book. The author's writing is good and the story is very interesting. The experience of going down the mountain is very exciting. The content of the story is rich and colorful, and the characterization is also very good.

It's really good. The various characters are three-dimensional and lively. You can see that the young people who have gone through the experience have grown up. The protagonist has a very upright outlook on life. Good books good books

It looks good and has a bit of a classic martial arts flavor, which is really rare in this age of fantasy!

People are like books, books are like people, beautiful mountains and clear waters, profound artistic conception, worth savoring!

The author likes the artistic conception of the story and the description of the character's heart very much. The essence of the world is the everlasting human heart.

Yes, the characters are written very flexibly. You can increase the difficulty to give them more experience.

It's definitely a growth-oriented martial arts novel worth reading, but among these couples, I'm a little confused as to who is cooperating with whom.

Chivalrous feelings, ancient rhymes, unrestrained and wanton, the description is exciting, and each character in the author's works has a distinct personality!

I read some of them and it sounds like a martial arts novel! The author's writing is very good, and everyone in this small team has their own distinct personality.