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It's very interesting. It's a rare imperial examination article that you won't get tired of reading. Although the writing is about daily life, the rhythm is tight, the plot is coherent, and the plot is interesting. Just a little too little

First of all, I would like to give myself a good review. This is my first novel. If there are any shortcomings, I will correct them again [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Yes, the relationship between the protagonists can be written well [admiration] Yuanbao is also very cute, but the appearance is too sudden. Qin has been struggling with whether to take Yuanbao to the general's house to ask if it is his cub [face covering] The part about making money is very simple and can be covered in just a few words. It mainly focuses on studying [Chigua] I guess Qin will have a very powerful identity later on, because some people say he looks like a certain prince [Chigua] The progress should be based on fast progress [Thinking][Thinking] Qin and Xing Geer quickly fell in love with each other [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

It looks pretty good now, but I don't know what will happen next.

Warm daily life, come on, come on

Not bad, I like it very much

Waaaaaaaaah! It's so beautiful, Jue Juezi! It feels like a long-running but interesting plot, which is very interesting to watch. Qin Huai is also really good, whether it is for the country, the people, or his family and friends. Both businesses are online, and the family and career have a double harvest! Xingxing is also very kind, and he treats his lover, friends and children with complete tenderness! Love Liao, love Liao, hope there will be more updates! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The general framework is good, and many inexplicable small holes were filled in time, but the specific process and various plots are a bit difficult to explain in one sentence, and the wording is too exaggerated. The 4 points are given because I hope the author will continue to work hard, make continuous progress, and write better works in the future.

Come on, come on, it's very well written.

It was great after watching it, I will add a follow-up review later!

The plot is very ordinary. Yuanbao, a child, always has the word "di" in his words. This kind of adult imitating the tone of children makes people look very jumpy and modern. I really can't stand it anymore. Paragraph: "Yuanbao sat outside the carriage and said goodbye to everyone. He said loudly: "Great-grandfather, great-grandfather, uncles, and uncles, Yuanbao is going home! Yuanbao will miss you. When you miss Yuanbao, don't hide under the quilt and cry secretly. " Everyone was amused by Yuan Bao's childish words, and Liu Xun joked: "Then if great-grandfather misses you, then I mustn't cry loudly! Yun Niang scolded him gently: "What a man you are, and you still tease our Yuan Bao." " Yuan Bao replied: "If you want Yuan Bao, just go to Yuan Bao's house to find Yuan Bao!" "Then Yuan Bao felt that the more he thought about it, the smarter he became. He continued: "When you go to Yuan Bao's house, Yuan Bao asked his father to make a big roast chicken for you. "

It's quite nice, everyday and warm. The Yuan Bao in it is very cute. I wonder if he will be with Fu Manchu in the future. I hope they can recognize each other as soon as possible.

I have been reading this book all day, and I always feel that in the early stage, I relied on my own efforts to live a serious life, and later on, I suddenly resorted to the "actually you are my biological child" to forcefully seize status, but I do not deny their love. It is really sweet and sticky. The ending timeline jumps very quickly. Overall, it looks good.

It's very beautiful. Yuanbao is really cute.

It's very interesting. The stories happen step by step, everyday and warm.

Very nice, I like it very much

Well written, thank you to the author.

It's beautiful, but I just can't get enough of it. Yuanbao is so cute.

It's very beautiful. Qin Huai should become more and more powerful in the future. Yuan Bao is also very cute. Come on, come on

Very beautiful and very warm

It's great. It's the first time I read a book with two male protagonists.

After reading the reviews, I felt like I didn't want to read this book. I opened it and closed it many times. I read it today. It's actually okay. There are some unreasonable things but it doesn't affect the reading too much. And at the moment, I don't think it's verbose. At present, I think the author mainly writes about subjects. For example, I just wrote about daily life in a simple way. It seems to be okay so far. I can read it. Sometimes I can't be too serious when reading a book. It is a novel and not a history textbook, so I can ignore some unreasonable parts. Overall, I feel pretty good if I can continue reading it. Although, I think the author's writing really needs to be strengthened. I think the story is good, but the text expression can be strengthened. It was acceptable at the beginning, but it became a bit boring after more than 200 chapters. The story development is good, but the text description is too boring, especially like the feeling of writing an essay. Come on, author, change the way of presentation. If it weren't for this story, I think it's okay. I really wouldn't have persisted through more than 200 chapters.

If you like the family, you don't like the protagonist, so the whole family will bully Brother Xing.

The plot is still okay, or I won't finish it. The reason for giving one less star is because the author likes to use a lot of adjectives to describe some scenes that can be omitted. This is a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it!

The author's writing is very beautiful [I learned it] [I learned it]

It's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the plot of Chaotang. I really like the characters of Qin Huai and Brother Xing. I'm looking forward to Zaizai.

It's good to watch, and it gets more and more exciting later on. I'm looking forward to Qin Huai's future plot in the court.

It's good to watch. Although the protagonist has a great halo, I just want to know the ending of the Sixth Prince and Song Yan.

The plot develops very naturally, the logic is smooth, the characters are not broken, and it is updated steadily. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] Super awesome

Kindness! Very sweet! But I feel uncomfortable when I hear this kid Yuan Bao speak. Why do I always speak for myself? It made me feel so uncomfortable to hear it. It didn't sound like a child talking, and the writing was unnatural. It felt like an adult pretending to be a child. It was so uncomfortable! When I heard this, I just thought that this child would grow up soon! When you grow up, you won't talk like this! But when they think about their own child being born 😂😂😂😂