Soul Penetration **********

If you don't want to travel to the Gu world, you have to become Ma Hongyu

The author's description of the original characters is great, and he is also very proficient in Gu insects. Overall, it is very good. I believe that the protagonist has the eighth-turn Good Luck Qitian Gu, and he is not in love, so there should be no mistakes. I hope there will be no female protagonist.

Step by step and careful consideration are the elements I always want to strive for. However, my writing power is limited, so I will do my best. If there is anything wrong, I can humbly accept it and make corrections seriously.

I want to ask the author based on Fang Yuan's left father's ghost, right mother's red lotus, in front of him is Ju Yang's third uncle's wisdom Gu, in the back is Thief Heaven's second uncle ghostly, one is Sister Xingxu reciting poems to guide the way, the other is Uncle Wuji turning around to greet him, the third is the savage old cousin giving him animal skin, the fourth is the original uncle's qigong fruit exploding the heaven, and finally there is the paradise brother's heavenly experience gift pack, tell me how he lost

Come on! I hope to give full play to the characteristics of the legendary Gu of Good Luck Qitian

This is the time when the second generation Beiyuan Fang Yuan became "Chang Shan Yin". With the investment of the venerable and God's will, it was indeed unreasonable to do Fang Yuan in the past. No matter what, we have to wait until the end of the Yitian Mountain War before we can take action against Fang Yuan. God will invest in the protagonist to fight against Fang Yuan later. However, in the original work, Fang Yuan could use Silkworm to resurrect him once during the battle in heaven. I really don't dare to think if Hong Lian had any back-up plan to resurrect Fang Yuan again. Thieving Heaven, Red Lotus, and Paradise are all three that Fang Yuan gave a lot of resources to Fang Yuan before he became an immortal. It is difficult to guarantee that the protagonist will have good fortune equal to the sky + God's Will > Fang Yuan. Unless you can't defeat him before and find Ju Yang Immortal Zombie directly, with Fang Yuan's talent, the protagonist should just wait for death.

There are certain logical problems when the protagonist of this book travels to Ma Hongyun. Even the Spring and Autumn Zen has God's will and the back-up plan of the Lord. In the original book, Ma Hongyun was able to obtain the Fortune Gu because of the plan of the Shadow Sect. Ma Hongyun in the previous life was a native of the Gu world. The protagonist of this book traveled to the Gu world and was already a demon from outside the world. Well, it is impossible for the Providence Shadow Sect and the back-up force left by the Venerable to allow the protagonist to possess the Fortune Qitian Gu, and the Shadow Sect of the second generation will definitely allow another native of the ancient world to obtain the Fortune Qitian. This person may be Li Hongyun, Zhang Hongyun, Wang Hongyun, but it will never be the demon Qi Xiao from outside the world. After thinking about it, I'll give it a five-star rating. After all, it's better compared to those fan stories about people who have traveled through time to become Fangzheng. When the real person wrote about the ancient world, he had already eliminated the possibility of traveling through time to become important chess pieces of God's will such as Fangzheng and Bai Ningbing. The Gu world only absorbs the time travelers because of the traces of the outer world on their bodies. Logically speaking, it is impossible for them to time travel into people who will seriously affect the layout of God's will.

There is nothing to say. This novel made me spend money on Tomato for the first time, although it was not much.

In other words, this one is just like the previous fanfics. It's of decent quality (after all, I've read real people's books, so I won't be clueless). It's normal to have a low rating, but it's troublesome if it's high. My evaluation is, come on, author, if conditions permit, try not to use eunuchs (many fics in the past were cut in half after 100-200 chapters). The most complete fanfic I have seen so far is Qitianzhuan, but that only lasts until Gu Zun. A fanfic that truly goes from the mortal realm to the finale (edited by the author) has yet to appear. Come on, author.

The writing is indeed interesting. The Red Lotus Demon Lord has been simulated by Spring and Autumn Cicada tens of thousands of times in the long river of time. At the moment when the protagonist's soul passes through, the Red Lotus Demon Lord can kill him. Most of Fang Yuan's other opportunities come from the backhand left by other Demon Lords and Immortal Lords. Fang Yuan is just like Sun Wukong, a chess piece being manipulated, let alone Ma Hongyun. Fang Yuan's Spring and Autumn Cicadas all contain God's will What's more, Ma Hongyun's Hongfu Qitian Gu I beg the author to make the protagonist of the next book be the Red Lotus Demon Lord. After all, he can be regarded as the ancestor of simulation writing.

Please support me. By the way, it can be worn by anyone, but not Ma Hongyun. Juyang can't let Hongyun Qitian Gu be possessed by the demon outside the world. I just browsed through it without looking too carefully. I feel that the author needs to improve in all aspects. Come on.

As a fanfic of Da Ai Xian Zun, I feel very good. It is the most beautiful and high-quality one I have ever read. I hope their bad comments will not affect you. I also hope you can keep updating this book until it is finished to give it a perfect ending.

If you practice Qi Dao, what will you do to become a master?

Damn, it looks really good. I highly recommend it. Although some places are not very rigorous

Just listen to Ma Hongyun chant loudly Innocence is already an invincible road. Why read the books of sages anymore? Why does a man need to be ambitious? An eight-foot man is illiterate. I am born with good luck, my mother determines the future The police lead the horse army to clear the way. The winner is the king and the loser is the hero. After saying that, his aura was no longer concealed. Ten Turns Ding Zhen, Ju Yang Immortal Lord's face was full of praise, and he immediately sighed. That sentence of "Mama's birth" from that year has confused me to this day. Young man in bright clothes and angry horse. Who doesn't know the King of Litang? Take him. Good Luck Qitian Gu has been waiting for you here for hundreds of years. Ma Hongyun chuckled, and instantly made me Hongtian Qi Yun Gu. Regardless of the slander of the world, he refined it in an instant, smiled and said: It's okay, I can't read [Cool]

The writing is okay, the protagonist develops quickly and well, and the plot of the novel is compact and exciting. After the protagonist turns 6, there are many immortal Gus, and he has direct combat power after turning 7. So far, the protagonist is talented, but it's been overshadowed by luck and familiarity with the plot. The genre is a bit mixed, but I'm a little curious about how the protagonist will become a hero in the future. The power of luck, soul, dream, wisdom and refinement change, and each of the two orifices has one positive and one strange, which are the four schools. To become a master requires 300,000 dao marks, supreme realm, world blockade, and immortal essence. The process of becoming a master is basically to cultivate the combat power of the sub-immortal master at rank eight, improve the realm in the dream, then grab the Yuan mirror, and then overcome the tribulation.

It's okay. Although the fighting is not exciting at all, the author's ideas are still relatively clear, but his writing skills need to be improved. Of course he is definitely better than me, but you can't compare with me. I am a reader [laughing evilly]

Gu Master, I am worried that my foundation is not stable even if I am lucky enough. I can only keep up with my experience. How can I say that the foundation of Gu Dao is not stable?

Some worldviews about the flow of luck can be made into Dao marks, for example: the luck system is also called the Five Lucks [Qingdi Edition]: the fairy court is above, and the five elements flow to harvest the world. Divide the luck of the world by grades and colors, and harvest it layer by layer, or like the founder of the magic stick, turn the luck into successful virtues, the only currency of heaven and earth, follow the five virtues system, and find the path of luck, fate Gu + good luck Qitian Gu, ten-turn God's Will Gu, you are the will of God [sneaky smile]

The book is a good book. However, due to personal reasons, I feel uncomfortable when I see anything that touches on reproduction with the opposite sex, even if it is just a brush. So if the author can try to write as little about this as possible, I dare not read it. It is very uncomfortable to read it again😔, but the book is quite good-looking.

A good book, the setting is consistent with the original work, and the plot flow The protagonist is slightly cold-blooded but not brainless

I'd like to ask if there are any fan fiction about Xiu Zhidao?

That said, he made me feel very comfortable Not great, so chilling

When the aliens were in power, the human race was slaves. When the humans were in power, mortals were slaves. People without power were miserable. Fang Yuan's pursuit of immortality was actually more about enjoying the process of constantly becoming stronger and becoming a chess player in charge of the world. I haven't seen such a wonderful Gu fanfic in about three years. The author asks you to finish it.

It looks good, but the description of Lucky Gu needs to be strengthened. It doesn't seem to have a very outstanding feeling.

I love Immortal Lord so much. Of course, I don't want to go to the Gu world in my life, and I don't want to go to the next life either.

How come the protagonist's Good Luck Qitian Gu doesn't even have half the power of the original Ma Hongyun's Lucky Qitian Gu?

Real-life novels must be supported, come on! Tomato seems to have only two or three real-life novels

Okay, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh

The protagonist chooses Qi Dao to catch the wave of Qi waves, but cultivating Li Dao is really useless.