He Comes from the End of the World and Is the First Person to Cultivate in the New World

The writing style is unique and not mindless. The case is well designed and focuses on an unexpected aspect, which is quite to my liking.

I really like this book. Obviously the author's writing style is not that outstanding, the story does not have a special experience, the setting is a bit general, and the emotions are not unforgettable, but I just like it, it seems like this is what novels should be.

There are thousands of characters in the novel, and there is no sense of inconsistency in the appearance of each person, and the characters are all very distinctive. The whole story line is relatively reasonable, but some official aspects have not been explained clearly. I hope the author has filled in all the pitfalls. It will be very good-looking.

In fact, my inner score is pretty good, but since it was difficult to dig out from tomatoes, I still gave it 5 stars. The content is a fusion of time travel + supernatural powers + detective + officialdom + adventure and other elements. The fusion is pretty good, at least for now it is attractive enough to keep watching. I personally think that the advantage of this book is the characters. Everyone has a different personality, and the main protagonists have contrasting cuteness. For example, Captain Gu, an official fan, is also a playboy who loves to play games, catch fish, and run around in bars. As a person with a small background, he still has to find ways to drink and hang out in the circle. The boss of the reborn man in the apocalypse has no idea of ​​​​Long Aotian. Instead, he found a stable job as a university teacher, loves food, and is always green when he stocks stocks. The other supporting characters also have their own characteristics. As far as my personal reading preference is concerned, the writing style is more anecdotal, which is not friendly to people like me who read ten lines at a glance and can't read a book clearly. The author likes to use the narrative technique of flashbacks, but the transitions are often very abrupt, and the continuity of the timeline is a bit awkward. I often have to go back to understand which time period it is now, and it will be easier to understand by adding transition lines or transition terms.

After reading Chapter 35, I felt pretty good, but there were too many characters and locations, and my brain was running out of ideas, and it was all blurry. It feels like I've been watching this for a long time, and I'm a little curious about how long I spent watching it. 1St ed. Reading 10 chapters in one hour, oh no, is this right? ? ? 2Nd ed. I heard there was a female lead, so I withdrew first. It's not easy to write about a single female protagonist. One star was deducted, not because of the female protagonist (I didn't even see that), the reason for deducting a star was a long explanation, it was too late, sleepy, too lazy to fight, that's all. Maybe I'll fall in love with the female protagonist again in a few years. Destined to meet. 3Rd edition. Forget it, let's just give it five stars.

Nice. I feel that the personalities of the main characters are very distinctive, the plot progresses smoothly, and some settings are quite unexpected but also seem reasonable. I finished the game in 4 days. Great work, keep writing new articles.

Give yourself a five star. This is the first book I have written, I hope you all like it. The protagonist Ding Yuanyi comes from the end of the world. He looks cold but is actually a warm man from IKEA. He has a firm mind and has been practicing all the way, and is always the strongest. The companion Lao Gu is more like a traditional male protagonist, with high qualifications and high IQ, and finally became a high-ranking official. The other companions also have their own characteristics. In the process of solving crimes and exploring, they work together to improve their practice. The whole text has a soothing rhythm and is more comfortable to read.

I read it in a little haste in one day. It's pretty good. I like this book and like every character equally. But the heroine's appearance was too hasty and the plot was not handled well. I'm the kind of person who is tricked into killing her🥹

How can I put it, I'm the dumbest, but I'm really eager to let everyone know how good this book is. I think the author's writing style is relatively good, at least I can't fault it. The second thing is that I'm quite optimistic about the plot structure and setting. No matter if it's a big hit or not, I like it very much.

"He came from the future and became the first person in the new world" Wang Fusheng The plot is rich and logical. The characters are all distinctive and vivid. The story is told eloquently and the pace is slow, so I give it a five-star rating.

Gaga is great. This novel has a lot of plots that I didn't expect. Originally, I thought it would be like this, but when I looked back, it was completely different from what I thought. It didn't follow the same old routine, and it made me want to win and lose.

The logic is reasonable, the plot can withstand scrutiny, the male protagonist is wise, courageous, and very strong. There are only a few scenes in the early stage, but the more you watch later, the more interesting it becomes, especially the adventure. I admire the author's brain circuit.

How can I put it, I'm the dumbest, but I'm really eager to let everyone know how good this book is. I think the author's writing style is relatively good, at least I can't fault it. The second thing is that I'm quite optimistic about the plot structure and setting. No matter if it's a big hit or not, I like it very much.

It's a good book that I personally agree with. The first 75% is very interesting. It arranges the events in a smooth manner, reveals the truth in an orderly manner, and I'm very satisfied with the outcome of dealing with the evildoers. I'll continue to unlock the rest.

I can keep up with it on Tomato, and I think the flaws are okay. I mainly value logic and thinking sensitivity. Although it is relatively slow, it is fate that I happen to meet a reader like me who likes this kind of speed. Nothing in the world is perfect, and I think this book is perfect.

Judging from the plots of these short stories, it's okay, but these stories are a bit too ordinary and monotonous. They follow a slow-paced approach, so it would be better to write the stories more profoundly.

Super super super super beautiful! But why didn't I get it at the end of the game? Do you know how I felt when I was watching and looking forward to further development? I went crazy, I yelled, I punched and kicked! Author, I beg you to update quickly

This book was written rather thoughtfully. In fact, I have tried to write novels before, but there were always problems such as unreasonable plots and unrealistic plots. Because I have experienced it myself, I am still willing to take a few minutes to evaluate this book and give encouragement to the author for his hard work.

The description of details is really good, and I have a strong sense of immersion. I write slowly. I finally found a good book, but don't be a eunuch. What a diligent author, he became very fat after only a few days of feeding. I happily read it for another afternoon and continued.

Really nice to look at. There is a novel feeling. As an old bookworm, I really like this. Although there are only a few poor likes, I hope the author can continue writing. This story is really exciting.

So pretty. The plot is wonderful, I love Ding Yuanyi so much

666! At first I thought it was very cliché, but I didn't expect that the plot was very novel. It was not a traditional urban fantasy, and the ingenious criminal investigation content surprised me.

It's very beautiful. I like reading this kind of group portraits😋😋😋😋

Very beautiful, highly recommended. The characters in the book are vivid and lively, and the plot is gripping, making people full of expectations and never disappointing.

I really like the plot and narrative of this book. There are little humorous jokes from time to time. This is a very good first book to write. Come on, author!

This is the charm of imagination writing by connecting dull criminal investigation cases in intricate series or parallel, combining it with psychology and human nature to vividly express the rationality of each character's behavior, and finding clues in seemingly ordinary life.

It's a beautiful book, and I will definitely continue to read it. I admit that it is not perfect, and cannot be compared with many of Tomato's masterpieces, but it also has its own areas of expertise, slowly and clearly bringing the truth of the story and the truth it wants to express to readers.

How to say it? The group portraits are well written, and each person's portrayal is very distinct. I prefer the protagonist's character. But then I suddenly had a relationship scene with a character in front of me. It was a bit stiff and I couldn't stand it anymore. Goodbye was well written.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist is definitely the type that everyone will like.

I'm going! What a wonderful plot, but why do you always imitate Cavan! Come on, author.