Immortality Begins with Martial Arts

The plot development is quite good, but there are some typos in each chapter, and there are also sentences that are not read smoothly and wrong sentences. If these problems can be solved, it will still be very good.

Chased from the courtyard. The author's writing style is not bad, and the beginning of the book is okay. Let me give you five stars first.

I personally like this kind of book very much. There is no nonsense about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger and getting slapped in the face, and there are no words like spreading hands, shrugging, raising eyebrows, smacking lips, looking indifferent, etc. It sounds very comfortable; even Zhang Wuji's opportunities are all given by you, including When he becomes the leader, since he is not allowed to fight for the world, I think it is fine to just follow the original plot. I also really don't like books about the two emperors Ming Taizu and Tang Taizong fighting for the world. There have been two such awesome emperors since the Qin and Han Dynasties.

The front part is really average, but what Douluo wrote about it really interested me.

The writing is very good, but Yitian and Shuanglong didn't read it. If you want to become emperor and change history, you can go to Blue Blood Sword. You didn't rebel in the late Northern Song Dynasty, and you didn't rebel in the Southern Song Dynasty, but you went to the Tang and Ming Dynasties to change history. Do you think you are more awesome than these two men?

The content is very interesting. This kind of novel about traveling through the heavens is very easy to relate to if it is a novel you have read! If you come across a novel that you haven't read and don't understand, it will be difficult to relate to it! Like the Douluo in the back, I just think the name is familiar, but I don't know the content. Maybe I've seen it but forgot the content! It's hard to get involved and I can only skip reading. As for the idea of ​​reading the original novel again! No matter if I am familiar with it or not, I have no intention of watching it again!

Although there are many typos, the writing is pretty good

The filter does not reduce inflammation. Do you think it is appropriate for a 30-year-old person to be reincarnated and cultivated like this with memories?

2025.08.18. Finished reading. I like the wind in March, the rain in April, the sun that never sets and the best of you the most. You stand in the position of champion, and I'll buy you some oranges.

The writing is very good, but each world moves too quickly. Maybe you want to write a side story later?

It is different from other time travels. The author has his own considerations. So far, it looks pretty good. Especially the identity of the sweeping monk is different from other authors. The identity of Yang Wulang is very thoughtful, not bad, not bad.

A very good martial arts novel, unlike other martial arts novels that only focus on the heroine I've read a hundred chapters. When will the protagonist meet Dongfang Bubai again? They won't meet again until the finale, right?

It's really good-looking, and the story is relatively novel. He's not the kind of stallion who can't walk when he sees a woman. The author's views are still very upright, but it's getting shorter and shorter [making faces]

This book was so enjoyable to read. I don't have it here anymore. It took me three days to read it. The author hurriedly wrote it.

A very good novel, IQ is online. No brainlessness. It's all justified. Like it very much. As an old bookworm, I haven't encountered such a good novel in a long time. Come on come on come on update

This book should be called, Look at my incompetence and rage with plug-ins. [Laughing]

More realistic, unlike others, too far away from the ordinary

It's okay. Although there are various minor problems, the flaws do not outweigh the advantages.

I'm at chapter 53 now. This is Heaven Slaying the Dragon. Looking at this rhythm, is it going to penetrate all of Mr. Jin's books starting from Swordsman and Proud Jianghu? Chapter 90 arrives in the world of Tianlong. In Chapter 149, it's time to shoot the vulture again.

Absolutely a good book, not sloppy, the plot is smooth and logical, nothing too far-fetched. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years, and I have been short of books for a long time. This is one of the better books.

There was this kind of thing before, but it was just an inexplicable time travel. Can't compare to this

"It's really not a big deal to watch the excitement. If they knew you were in Fuzhou City, no one would dare to make you feel uncomfortable at this time." The two of them had a problem here and kept chatting.

Well, it's wonderfully written. Come on, author. I give it five points.

Big cheers for the author! It looks great, come on!

It's really well written and worth reading. The relationships between the characters are clear and the story touches people's hearts. Come on, author

Personally, I feel that Zhuanliu is a masterpiece and the connection is smooth. I like it very much. Please support the author for more updates! ! !

I don't know what to say! Whatever

It looks good. Will we meet Dongfang Bubai again in the end?

It's very well written. I hope it won't collapse in the future. I'll give it a 5-star rating.

This is a very good book, but there is a bit of a knife at the end🔪