In This Life, I Won't Be the Good Older Brother Anymore

Brothers, this is my first time writing a book, I hope you can support me a lot! I will try my best to avoid poisonous spots and make everyone happy to watch!

How can I put it, what everyone said in the comment area is not unreasonable. This novel does still have many shortcomings. However, after being baptized by so many Tomato novels with very poisonous plots and cruelty for the sake of torture, I instead want to read some fresh and refreshing novels that are non-toxic and non-exciting. I hope the author writes it at his own pace. As a harem novel that is neither poisonous nor violent nor gives away girls nor misses girls, it will naturally have an audience and achievements. Finally, I would like to say something selfishly, I must let Zhang Weiwei be the main palace, what a lovely girl, I want to become a real person with the male protagonist as soon as possible, don't kill her! It depends on how you deal with the character of Linlin. A harem must be opened. If it is not a harem, I will give up the book. However, writing about a harem will test the author's writing skills. How to convince the characters in the book and the readers within a reasonable framework. I will keep this four-star for you for now (although I am not very satisfied with the forced and irresponsible plot, it depends on how you deal with it). 12.16 The writing is getting worse and worse.

It's a bit too high and too low. I want to imitate Chen Hansheng, but the plot description is a bit poor. After learning from Zhou Yuwen, his writing style is not very good at portraying characters. But overall it's good! Come on!! The more I think about it, the angrier I get, 2 stars

The character description is indeed wrong. With five-star support, come on

There's something here, keep up the good work, it's not enough, every heroine is good

I feel constipated. Hey, I usually give five stars, and so do you.

To be honest, I was dissuaded by your line in Chapter 2

It's okay, but I personally don't like this kind of constant cutting (because of his family, he may not have been thorough in his previous life, but this is also the reason. After all, he is kind)

Don't say too much. Come on, don't let those useless comments drown you.

It's okay if you can write it, but it's difficult to write it well. Character characteristics, character, and character growth are inseparable from a good book. These are the most difficult to control. To put it bluntly, you are lacking too much. The characters are very jumpy and sudden. There are many, many more that I won't go into. Come on.