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It's a little bit high and low, and it's a god in the early stage. The poster on the floor below said it very well, but the characters are a bit disconnected from the plot. It can be reversed, but the foreshadowing cannot keep up, making the reversal very abrupt and abrupt. Overall rating four and a half stars But it's still five stars after rounding up. The type is really rare, and it's rare to have this kind of pattern. So I still support it [laughing evilly] The fifth fan recommendation All in all, it's a heartthrob and a fan of cp. In addition, it feels like it's a group portrait article with a low presence of the protagonist. But the only thing that attracts me about this article is the existence of the protagonist. Looking at other people's content, I can do it in the early stage, but I feel tired and sleepy in the middle and late stages. The popular point is that the protagonist is somewhat schizophrenic, more feminine, sometimes kind and indulgent, sometimes crazy and critical. It's just that the turning point is a bit blunt, but it's really touching. Then there is one wave after another. After reading one wave, I feel tired and have to wait several days before I can continue reading. I hope that the transition will be more natural, with more relaxed daily routines interspersed. I also want Di Makeup 13. I can change the rating later if Ness wants it, and I will make up for it.

I've always wanted to read this kind of subject, but no one has written about it. Some people's personalities after being redeemed have changed a lot. If you like the original character, please be careful. It's a bit OOC. , The owner of the manor, I prefer to have an affair with Jack, but I really don't want to talk to him. The dancer is Hongdie's child and has children. She likes healing and cuteness. You can read it, maybe I can't stand it. Just adding a emoji suddenly makes me start to imagine the picture, which makes me feel good. OOC, but I chose to pretend to be blind. I hope I don't add too much CP in the later period. Otherwise, I will collapse when I see that I am against my family. I will not give up the book. I can only say that the subject matter is very novel, and it makes you want to read it. I can only say that it is all a large-scale ooc, run quickly. From the time when Jack had an affair with the owner of the manor, I started to reminisce about the previous plot. The more I looked back, I found that the whole character collapsed and there were many unreasonable things, especially the owner of the manor who was suspected of being with Jack... I was blown away. The feeling of that large Shura field was a bit retarded, like the kind I might have watched when I was a child. I feel like the author I still haven't done a good job in shaping the character's personality. The protagonist sometimes behaves like a wife, and sometimes like a cold-blooded god. In my eyes, it may be very unlike a god, more like a person with powerful abilities, and a completely charming image. The author may want to create a contrast, or want to highlight the protagonist's strength or something like the feeling of being reduced to a weakling by Huang Yi. To please the protagonist and become a best friend with the dream witch? It gave me the feeling of a Mary Sue, but I can still understand it. She is powerful and Carl's mother is a very important role in Carl's story. However, I gave Carl the protagonist with money, as if I had sold him. It was completely unreasonable. After the tombkeeper and Carl were rescued, I felt mentally retarded. And the emotional scene with Jack may have been a god in my eyes. It's so sacred and inviolable, but in the end, the protagonist married Jack and got divorced so damn quickly in one day. This operation shows that the author really wanted to do something noble, but in the end it gave people the feeling that he was sick. It can only be said that he was like a piece of shit heart chocolate. Dare to eat the inner you. This is you.

It's so good, so good, please, the author, please don't stop updating it. Did your wife update on Lao Volt? I saw the same thing. Is it me?

I really, really like this book! In fact, I had no interest in the Identity V books at first. I thought they were quite boring and uninteresting. In fact, I just wanted to save them. This book is very suitable for my taste. The protagonist has a terrifyingly high IQ! I give it a five-star rating, not because I think it is a five-star product, but because the highest rating it can give is five stars! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

This book is really good, but is there a similar meal replacement author dressed as a manor owner? The update is too slow. I am bored waiting for the update every day. I am also reading fanfics, but oh, I am convinced, but I can't find it. Maybe I like the protagonist more, but unfortunately the protagonist's appearance rate is not so high in the later period, and then I didn't watch it much.

Like! Like! Like! Like! It's been a long time since I've found a book that appeals to my taste!

In fact, overall it is still very good. It has improved a lot of regrets left behind. It is really touching to see their lives start to get better. But now it seems that the protagonist has a CP. To be precise, it is ambiguous (at least the part I saw). I am not sure because there are CPs in the back that I don't like, so I didn't read it. Maybe the author can write whether the protagonist has CPs or some possible sub-CPs in the introduction. The fifth CP should be written mixedly to attract people who like it and avoid CPs that I don't like. My wife writes very well, and I hope to update it more often.

It's really good to describe the characters' personalities carefully.

Good news, I found a book about Identity Five that I not only recommend, but also has the style I have been looking for and is also very well written. Bad news, it's only chapter 31! ! Why? ! Woo woo woo woo author update soon, don't force me to kneel down and beg you woo woo woo

It's so good. I came here to watch the plot just to play Fifth with my girlfriend.

I thought about it after watching it for so long and there was no rating, so I commented. First of all, the author's character creation really struck a chord with me [Love] [Love] Did the author really want to write a group portrait? (I have written something similar before and failed, woo woo) I am really excited to see the author writing this kind of article, and I hope the author will write a book! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] By the way, I have some doubts about the portrayal of the protagonist. I feel that his psychological description is a bit frivolous. (In my personal opinion) In fact, sometimes the author does not need to use such repetitive language to highlight the characters in a unique way. I think some plots can be adjusted appropriately (although the identity of the protagonist is really curious and a little distressed), but I still think it is a bit weird (think about a person with unknown origins suddenly seeming to confide in you). It feels like the author is a little bit unable to grasp the character design that is a bit high. And the transition feels a bit stiff. I hope the author can answer my confusion. I look forward to the author's reply. Thank you [love]@ who likes coyotes [love] [love] [love]

Advantages: 1. To make up for the tragedy of the manor, everyone must have a good ending and destination. Second, the writing is meticulous and the details are really heartwarming. Third, the author updates steadily, basically once a week or even every three or four days. Fourth, there will be no serious OOC, it feels like the words are what the characters would say. Fifth, (my) story does not account for a large proportion, and can be used both as a substitute party member and as an original party member. Sixth, combined with the plot, now that the original manor and Sherlock Holmes have been written, it seems that the author is going to write Under the Truth Friendly reminder: (If you really mind, don't read it) 1. This book is not about cheating. Jack and (me) are CPs. Second, this book has a lot of CPs. The current popular ones include Qiu Wu, Ganni, Gravekeeper and Violinist, Magician and Philanthropist, etc. Joseph the mercenary is uniquely beautiful. Third, there is a script for the Sherlock Holmes section. The character of the manor has an independent setting to act in front of Holmes, including the description of Holmes falling in love with Jack and some descriptions of Holmes being injured.

The characters in The Fifth Man have always been a source of frustration for us players. I'm really happy to see someone who can save them. The plot is very well written. The arrival of each character is not sudden. Everything goes smoothly. The plot is also quite innovative and updated very quickly. It's rare to see an author (novel) who can keep writing for such a long time and update it frequently. I really love it. Personally, I think this is the best thing among the Fifth fanfics besides the CP novels! [Send heart] If you like to read fan fiction, hurry up!

Update quickly! ! [Angry](Dark crawling)(Twisting)(Screaming)(Roaring)(Indescribable)

It's really good-looking. It looks like it has a knife, but in fact it doesn't. None of the members are OC! And everyone is given a chance, everyone wants redemption [shy] And there are also scenes of the Lord in Yellow and the Dream Witch

This book is like an old wine that becomes more and more flavorful the more you taste it. It lacks flavor at the beginning but becomes more flavorful at the end. The characters are just like the characters of Identity V. As the title of the book says, they are redemption, and they are worth a closer look [snickering] [smirking].

I really like it. I have been reading this book recently. The author has very good control over the personality of each character, especially watching the Hustle group perform their original plot. They laughed and hugged each other after the plot ended. All the disasters seemed to have never happened, because they met the owner of the manor: a God who sympathized with the world, no, maybe we should call "him" his mother and family. "He" protects his children and his family. At least, he truly has his own connection in this world.

Fifth, the top 1 fanfic I have read so far. It is not just about pure redemption, but about helping them when they really encounter difficulties, allowing them to truly find their love, break away from their original destiny, and live better according to their original goals. "They all have a bright future." This sentence can be used as a knife in any circle, but this book really does it. The pace of the plot is neither fast nor slow, which is my favorite type. The degree of ooc is a little small, but it is not suitable for newcomers who are not familiar with the original plot, because if you watch it too much, you will easily get confused with the plot and be scolded by others as Sister Yun. Perhaps in the future, the owner of the manor will leave and become the true god who protects all nations. However, the traces he left will make everyone remember him and follow his footsteps. In this way, the energy he paid and the rewards he received became a closed loop. There will be generations of "believers" who will consciously and unconditionally follow him. Very meaningful, love the author so much❤️ I plan to write a Sanchuang fanfic for the author. The writing skills in the previous paragraph may not be very good, but the author is the first! Straight! Exist! Enter! Step! So stop scolding some black people!

I had read it a long time ago, but at that time there were only five or sixty chapters. Later, due to personal reasons, I quit the game for half a year and have not followed up. This time I came back, because it took a long time, so I read it again. Here are some of my personal opinions on this book: First of all, the author's writing style is relatively good and he is very diligent in updating, so you don't have to worry about it taking a long time. However, some characters have OOC content, mixed with certain private settings, and there are some early rumors; and the protagonist and Jack have certain cp-oriented content. The overall feel is pretty good. If you see something inconsistent with the original work or context of Identity V, it may be some of the author's early chapters that are similar to experimental fields. (Because the author has tried other writing styles and written several articles, the original intention is to let everyone choose which one they want to read, but due to the problem of character design, the context may seem a bit fragmented) If you are not disgusted with the contents of the above two paragraphs, this book is still worth reading, because the character description is actually very delicate, and it is indeed a good choice among the fanfics of the same period. Finally, the above is just my personal understanding, just take a look, you don't have to take it all seriously. [Sending Hearts]

The book is very interesting, and I suddenly thought of the ending. The manor owner became a god and completely lost his humanity. In order to make the manor owner change back, Supervision and Survival began a life of cannibalism like the fifth personality.

I don't know how to describe him anymore, it's perfect. The plot is very smooth. But here the manor owner and Jack are a couple. If you can't accept it, please don't enter. Don't seek blame on yourself.

It's good to read. Although I quit playing games in anger because I was so angry, this novel fulfilled all my hopes for the manor. Woohoo, they are all good babies. I hope the author can continue writing like this so that every character has a perfect life and allows them to live for themselves! Also, I hope the author can do more and more and don't let me see that shitty yellow button. I will greatly dedicate my power of love to the dear author. (There really is no extra money. ಥ⌣ಥ)

Hahaha, so similar. I personally feel that the characters are well drawn and the author is also very active and interesting. However, the cover is a bit discouraging. I suggest changing the cover.

I really enjoyed reading this book. It's really good. Does the author also play Identity V? The details are also in place. I also researched the character's background story. I hope the rating of this book can go up.

I rarely see books about Identity V in Tomato, and even if I do, they are not of high quality. However, this book is adapted based on different timelines and character plots. The atmosphere is very warm and harmonious, and there are also some CPs about the protagonist that you can talk about. Everyone in the manor gathered together, and no one left behind the final result. It was like a family, it was really warm😭

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! ! ! I really like the setting of this book! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Can you update the character's daily life and the manor owner's daily life more? (´◊ω◊｀)

Really great! ! ! I had many regrets before, such as psychologists and patients, Annie, I, and the prophet. I hope that they can all be made up for in this book [love] [love] [love] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [top post] [ top post ] [ top post ]

I have been reading it for a long time. I have been following it from the previous 100 chapters to now. It is great and I have reread it many times. It is very suitable for my taste. Thank you for your help. [Love] [Love] [Love] [KISS] [KISS] [KISS]

The description of each character is very detailed, and the personality and the origin of each character are very accurate. At the beginning, I had no feeling about this book, but I liked it more and more as I went on. Uh ah ah ah ah ah ah, my Chinese is not good, I don't know how to express it, I hope it can get better and better Shoot more knives... (Quietly)

It's really, really, really, really, really beautiful. In the later period, the heroine's personality collapsed a bit, but it's not considered a collapse, right? Just a little blurry The character descriptions of the characters in the game are very consistent with the original work. There is no coo. All in all, it's very perfect. And the heroine herself is the creator