[Double Heroines] This is a short story of two-way redemption, going around and around and finally getting married. They are the light in each other's gloomy lives, and they are irreplaceable before they know it. Two heroines stick to each other, he
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For me, this book is a bit lacking because the text is a bit short and not enough to read. I think the ending may be a little bit imperfect. It should cover the plot of their proposal and marriage, as well as some daily life. This should be the author's first book on Tomato. I'm not sure, hahaha, so I'm probably a newbie. I think it's pretty good for a newbie to write like this, and the author's writing style has also improved a lot. I think the new book is very good, and it's the new book that attracted me to follow your work. I've read two of your books before and didn't notice such a treasure author. I just finished the other one. The author continues to work hard to write books.
How should I put it? The overall writing style seems a bit weird, but I can't say what's weird about it. I think Lin Zhiwei's attitude towards her parents is sometimes too timid. In fact, most children in patriarchal families do not have much affection for their parents except for the gift of childbearing. Most of their characters will become sensitive, suspicious, inferior, or suffer from mental illness. But there will also be a rebellious heart (I don't know about other families, but my friends around me are all like this, including myself). I am simply expressing my own thoughts. The author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. I hope I can continue to work hard and write better articles! [Blowing kiss]
After all, this is the author's debut work. There are some holes that have not been filled in, but it is quite healing.
See Jun Zhiwei, she's redeeming in the front but a little bit abusive in the middle and it's great in the back~!
It's great that they all met each other's redemption!
The author's writing is good. I'm reading several of his books, but I just can't read them. There's so little written.
It would be better if it were longer
Finished reading. OK OK
Super nice article
Fortunately I met you, I will be you for the rest of my life
It's short but very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low.
It's very beautiful👀I finished reading it in one go [crying][crying][crying]
The author's writing style is quite good, but the psychology of the characters and the plot are slightly lacking, and some of the emotional turns are a bit stiff.
For me, this book is a bit lacking because the text is a bit short and not enough to read. I think the ending may be a little bit imperfect. It should cover the plot of their proposal and marriage, as well as some daily life. This should be the author's first book on Tomato. I'm not sure, hahaha, so I'm probably a newbie. I think it's pretty good for a newbie to write like this, and the author's writing style has also improved a lot. I think the new book is very good, and it's the new book that attracted me to follow your work. I've read two of your books before and didn't notice such a treasure author. I just finished the other one. The author continues to work hard to write books.
How should I put it? The overall writing style seems a bit weird, but I can't say what's weird about it. I think Lin Zhiwei's attitude towards her parents is sometimes too timid. In fact, most children in patriarchal families do not have much affection for their parents except for the gift of childbearing. Most of their characters will become sensitive, suspicious, inferior, or suffer from mental illness. But there will also be a rebellious heart (I don't know about other families, but my friends around me are all like this, including myself). I am simply expressing my own thoughts. The author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. I hope I can continue to work hard and write better articles! [Blowing kiss]
After all, this is the author's debut work. There are some holes that have not been filled in, but it is quite healing.
See Jun Zhiwei, she's redeeming in the front but a little bit abusive in the middle and it's great in the back~!
It's great that they all met each other's redemption!
The author's writing is good. I'm reading several of his books, but I just can't read them. There's so little written.
It would be better if it were longer
Finished reading. OK OK
Super nice article
Fortunately I met you, I will be you for the rest of my life
It's short but very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low.
It's very beautiful👀I finished reading it in one go [crying][crying][crying]
The author's writing style is quite good, but the psychology of the characters and the plot are slightly lacking, and some of the emotional turns are a bit stiff.