You Work Hard to Become Immortals, and I Will Go Home to Marry a Wife and Have Children.

No one has commented, so I'm taking the blame for myself and giving it five stars is not too much.

Not bad, keep up the good work, I feel like practicing a little bit, and I don't have a harem randomly, it's very good! The most important thing is precision, not too much. Too much. Without good writing, it's just data. I hope you can work hard!

Overall, this book is readable. Let me talk about the issues first. 1. This is originally a system article about many children and many blessings, but in the middle and early stages, the protagonist slowly cultivates through his own efforts, and the system is relatively crude before the upgrade. Readers who read the article about a brainless system may be dissatisfied. 2. The female characters were not handled well. Some of the female characters that had been described with words and ink were not accepted. Instead, a matchmaker was hired to acquire more than a dozen women who had not been described with words and ink at once. The heroine seemed not three-dimensional enough. 3. In the early fights, the villain is always just a little stronger than the protagonist, but not much, which is very deliberate. Then the protagonist has to struggle to win. It loses the feeling of a refreshing novel and becomes more like a royal and passionate novel. Readers of systematic novels may not buy it. 4. There are some logical loopholes. For example, if the father-in-law has a treasure, searching for the soul can solve it, but the villain can't think of it. The shortcomings mentioned above are not major problems, and most of them have been solved later. The system has been upgraded, and the role of the system has become greater. The fights have become less ink, and there have been a lot more exciting points. It is considered a 56 points in the early stage, barely passing. As long as the system is gradually upgraded after the first 30 or 50 chapters, it becomes a pretty good and enjoyable book. Readable.

As long as it doesn't turn into a pig story, I can keep chasing it.

Fast, update, the author should not care so much, come on, the rating is low

It's not bad, but I still have too few wives. You need to marry more, and you need to marry a name worthy of you.

If the Zhang family doesn't handle it well, they will be scolded later.

I can read it. I'll keep reading after reading it.

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This novel is good, better than others, decisive in killing, and the characters are better. Unlike other novels, it can still retain the habits of the earth after traveling once.

Nice! It doesn't collapse later, you can see the ending

Not bad, okay, watchable

I have read Chapter 22 so far, and I feel pretty good After reading Chapter 39, my senses are a million points different. There is a plot like this where the protagonist is so depressed. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

The novel is rich in content and exciting. Give it a five-star rating of 666666

I have never read a fantasy novel so easily and happily, with completely new ideas and without too much fighting and killing.

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Not bad, but the words are a bit short

Is the author from Jiangxi?

He is obviously a cultivator, why not show his identity among mortals. No mortal would dare to mess with you if they knew you were a cultivator.

My wife is not that exaggerated and can still accept it.

Can you write some extra stories? Show me those extra chapters that readers don't want to read @ Cola Classmate

I don't know how to comment on this book. I've only read more than half of it. The heroine has a lot of babies and I can't remember clearly, and the plot has started to become a matryoshka. I've only read half of it so far. The characteristic of this book may be that the protagonist is not strict at all and has a good time all the way. The other immortal cultivation streams are basically submissive.

Nice looking, quite interesting,,,,,,

I finished reading it in one go

The first wife was not mentioned much later,

The ending was something I didn't expect, haha

It's a pity that Li Yi was already engaged, but he didn't get married. In the end, he gave it away to someone else.

Please note that books with 8 points are the real deal. If you've read too many cool articles and don't want to read them, you can read this one

Objectively speaking. There are so many harems that I can't even remember some of their names. But everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens.

Quick thinking, smooth plot, super beautiful