My Yandere Shura Field with Two Eyes

I didn't write enough in my previous review, so I plan to re-review it. I think this is a great book, and it's the first book I'm willing to write a long review of. I like the yandere element very much, and I am also attracted by this element. At first I checked the introduction Cthulhu, Monster Girl? How could this happen? I opened this book with the intention of reading just two or three chapters. At the beginning, I thought it was a simple strategy game, but as I read through the first and second chapters. From quickly turning the pages at the beginning to reading word for word at the end... I realized that I thought it was simple. Both the psychological description of the protagonist and the characterization of other characters are perfect. Unlike most novels, new readers will not understand the worldview. Only the protagonist, the player, knows everything. This book is very well connected with the setting of returning from four years away. Let readers meet Helena from Rowe's perspective, starting from the mission in the first chapter, and then encountering events and reincarnations. Come and "understand" the world again with Luo Wei, which is a very immersive experience. Gradually, it seemed that he was Luo Wei. You will think about how to solve incidents one after another, and you will experience the despair of being killed. And this sense of substitution is inseparable from Maomao's portrayal of the plot and even the characters' personalities. Everyone has a distinct personality, they can be sad or happy, or even kill... Ahem. The thing that impressed me the most was that it was clear that Helena wanted to kill Luo Wei, but Luo Wei would think for her from Helena's perspective. When I read this, I also thought about it myself, thinking about what would happen if I were Helena's brother who suffered the same tragic fate as before and disappeared for four years. Will I collapse too~~ This was the beginning of me really falling in love with this book. Characters with distinctive personalities seem to be magical and make me feel that they all really exist. I can't help but continue reading, wanting to go to St. Karen in person, and wanting to explore the truth of this dark and sinking world with Rowe.

Wow, it's really cool, even though I know it by looking back! But! ! ! No ink stains, no lag, and it disappears as soon as you know it's not working. It's really refreshing! The plot is not particularly protracted and there are currently three female protagonists: the younger sister, the teacher, and the princess, which is really cool. There are cars but not too many. For this genre, there are less cars and more plot. Secondly, the protagonist's current combat power is not very strong, but what kind of combat power is needed for a mystery novel? Isn't it the most satisfying to find hope in despair and survive in impossibility? At present, the author has really controlled the despair very well, but it will not completely collapse and make people watch it, and it is not too relaxed to give people the illusion that I can do it. Come on, author! ! ! How can I look at other toilet paper after reading this at night? [Aggrieved] I don't care if it's your fault as the author and I will punish you immediately by adding 3000 chapters [Grief]

I guess it will be on fire. The writing is very good, and the characteristics of the yandere are obvious, unlike some novels that say it is a yandere, but it turns out to be a joke. It's not boring at all. What I value most is the thrill. I couldn't stop watching it today and I was completely addicted. The author will update soon.

Before you read it, you thought this was just an ordinary yandere novel with a single content. But after you read it, you will find that it is far from just a book about love and hate with a yandere, but a grand book about the world of Cthulhu with both light and dark lines. More than just love, love, love. Take in sick girls and save the world at the same time. The story is very coherent.

To be honest, the writing style of this novel is really good, much better than other novels of the same type (it's strange why the score is only 7). The protagonist's performance as a person who has just traveled through such a weird world is already remarkable. He also has the basic moral standards of a normal person. There is nothing wrong with the plot. In terms of character creation, the main characters' personalities are also very distinct, which is very worthy of everyone's reading (unfortunately, it is not enough to read now) Next, I would like to mention my own small opinion (only personal). It was mentioned at the beginning of the plot that the male protagonist plays the love game as a puzzle game. He only wants to improve his skills and increase his favorability level purely for rewards. He is a proper Sigma man, but in the later interactions with the teacher, he sometimes becomes an old driver and sometimes he is still shy? And the things these two people do, the sister and the teacher, can definitely lead to misogyny in the male protagonist, right? (Of course, if the male lead is all acting, then I have nothing to say, except "Nicky beer [awkward laugh]") In short, the suggestion I want to make is to make the male lead less ambiguous in his heart (but it must be indispensable for the male lead's wonderful acting skills and pua skills [learned], as well as the male lead's other emotional expressions other than ambiguity). Another thing is that the male lead should strive to be a Sigma man and not fall into the trap of women. After all, all of them are yanderes [get it] Finally, I agree with the article that tsundere is no longer popular [full] (I hate tsundere over and over again every day [smile])

It's very good. It's one of the few truly yandere stories in Tomato. It has a lot of foreshadowing and twists. Although the male protagonist is weak in strength and has a slightly cold personality in the early stage, after chapter 40, as his power increases, the author feels it. It's worth reading [Like]

Although the title of the book smells like tomato, it is really good to read and the reasoning is intense and exciting. I am not very immersed in reading the book. Lying on the bed, you can obviously feel your heartbeat speeding up. Sincerely recommend

It looks good. The author must be a veteran. The scenes he describes are despairing and terrifying. I'm going to polish it a little more. I feel like I can compare with others from (My Life in Another World). Come on, it's a great article!

I like this book very much. This book really touched my heart. The character and psychological division of the yandere are very detailed. It feels like the picture that once appeared in my mind has become a real story. Come on (ง•̀_•́)ง

The author's new book is very good. I really like the feeling of all the members being yandere.

Really nice. To be honest, it was really well written. After the teacher helped the protagonist to run away with his sister, I thought this book would be another cheesy harem story about meeting someone and falling in love with them. What I didn't expect was that the teacher turned out to be the mission in Act 1. The target was a bad guy, and he had ulterior motives for approaching the protagonist. It was really unexpected and well written. I hope to continue to update, author, come on! I beg you, author, please give me more. I can't see the tentacle monster sister. It felt like there were ants crawling all over my body, and it was as painful as a thousand arrows piercing my heart. Some more, some more!

It's been a long time since I experienced this suspenseful feeling in Tomato. I even thought that yandere was an add-on. If you take away the yandere, the weird, suspenseful, reasoning, and thrilling plots in this book are also great highlights. What I didn't expect was that these "highlights" blended perfectly with the "yandere" in this book. Not bad, very nice [like] (I seem to understand how the protagonist felt at that time...) I feel that this book has great potential, is comprehensive and has a clear main theme. After four months, I finally found gold again in tomatoesヾ(@^▽^@)ノ ——— I really didn't expect this book to be so good.

It's nice to read, and the author's character design is very good. The heroines of each guide have their own characteristics, and the plots are also very interesting. The story development is not cliche and has new ideas. The protagonist Goldfinger is also interesting. He can go back and be reborn. There is a limit to the number of times he can go back and reborn. This makes Goldfinger not so invincible and increases the sense of urgency. After all, if you fail five times, you will really die. The containment setting is also very interesting, and you can gain the power of the contained object. However, there are also some places that are not perfect. First, the power system is not clear. I have written more than a hundred chapters, and there is still no clear distinction between strong and weak powers. The power system is also unclear. Second, the world view is novel, but too small. There are many places to write about this kind of restricted world. The author has always limited the story to St. Lenka. Maybe the author is not capable of describing a magnificent world view. Third, and most importantly, in the first dungeon, the protagonist has to worry about dying all the time and has no power. In fact, there is a sense of urgency in reading, and it feels like anime re0. However, in the subsequent scripts, there is no such sense of urgency, and there is no sense of struggling in despair to attract readers. Moreover, although the story behind the story about how to capture the teacher and the princess is quite interesting, the plot design is not as good as the story about how to capture the younger sister. The author did not pay as much attention as at the beginning. I hope the author can improve the shortcomings. It is really good-looking, good-looking, and good-looking. If you improve it, it can really become a masterpiece. There are already signs of becoming a masterpiece now.

Absolute praise, the best and unique yandere novel I have ever seen. Taking the world of online games as the background, the special mechanism is also very attractive. The flesh-and-blood characters allow the protagonist to create infinite miracles with limited opportunities. I regret not reading this book earlier. It is definitely better than any other book I have read before. There is no crushing love, no infinite trials and errors, and the protagonist will die when he deserves it. There is no pure numerical crushing, but a game of intelligence. I have only seen this containment mechanism so far. The author has a rich imagination. Although he is a new book lover, I still wish the author prosperity.

I have to say that it is very palatable. Although there are routines, there are also some counter-routines. Moreover, the yandere attribute, Cthulhu, and the progress of the harem without any sloppiness are great! ! ! The author still has to focus on the main core of yandere, weirdness, and Cthulhu, and the emotional plot can be reduced a bit.

This book is actually a novel worth listening to, and the author's writing style is quite good. In fact, I think the male protagonist in the author's works is well written at least in terms of the plot and ideas of each chapter. He handles things logically and does not go off topic, and he will not dig another hole just because of one plot. At least it sounds very comfortable. The male protagonist has a gentle personality and a lot of humor. He knows how to think (this is much better than some brainless novels) and how to solve problems. It also brings out the reality. (Some people say that the male protagonist is a scumbag. I think when you are a normal person and are chased by a few yanderes in a time-travel game and you have 5 lives in the chapter, you should first make sure you survive)

What's different about Nanbeng is that I won't read any Tomato book with a rating below 9.7. This one, I was about to fall asleep at the time, and I saw it as a 9.7. When I looked at it, it was a 9.7? I looked at what was going on and was immediately fascinated. I turned it in later and noticed that the score was 9.4, But it was really exciting. First of all, the characters of the heroines really struck a chord with me, whether it was the controlling princess, the cute and a little bit sinister witch lady, Helena, etc. The second is the plot. Really, remove the heroine factor and change them all into real monsters. I also think the plot of this book is very good. It has thinking, growth, and games. Having said so much, I give it five stars. In addition... The author please give me more updates! ! ! It's over. In fact, I think there's still a lot to expand on. I particularly like the strategy part (not the heroine strategy) that I like to write about. I feel like I could write about more than just the heroines. But as the author said, further expansion would be inappropriate for a yandere love game. I'll just bury my regrets in my heart. (By the way, I saw the expansion below.) When I was on the 2nd and 3rd floors of the room, I thought the next book would be a sequel to this one (wwwwwww). There were a lot of regrets and unfilled holes. There is no doubt that the ending is unsatisfactory, but I liked the previous plot very much, so I still gave it 5 stars. At the end, my favorite picture of Miss Witch! ! ! !

It's quite good to read. Compared with other books, this one doesn't have the protagonist's mindless ability to spawn monsters. He relies on his own intelligence to solve most of the incidents. The character's emotional development is also very in-depth. It's the most comfortable book I've read. The protagonist's character is also very well-shaped, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope the author can maintain the level and not abandon the quality because of speed. This is the book I am most willing to wait for. Summary: A good book worth my time to wait to read.

Great, I haven't found a love book like this that suits my taste for a long time. I actually have a general impression of love novels, but this book just made me feel comfortable. The characters of the heroine are all very well created, my favorite is probably the Fifth Princess, and then Miss Witch [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] The author's illustrations are also pretty good, but when can I change the one of Miss Witch? The current one is really weird, very different from what I imagined [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] There are no poisonous points, and the plot is very smooth. In short, I am very satisfied. I hope this book can be finished normally (I have read too many unfinished favorite books). As long as the eunuch is not a prisoner, I will definitely keep chasing it [make a face] [make a face] [make a face] (Update speed, the author understands that two books in one day are not enough, so you can take care of yourself [make a face] [make a face])

It's very pure and honest. I haven't seen such a good yandere novel in a long time. I started reading yandere novels in high school and have been reading yandere novels for four years. The last time I saw such an interesting novel was two years ago. How can I put it this way? This book is very suitable to my taste. It not only contains yandere, but also the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and the heroines. It is very good. It is one of the top yandere novels I have read. Moreover, the story background of the novel is also very interesting. At first glance, you will be an old COC player. If you have the opportunity, I will take one (not). By the way, the author will update it soon. My children will die without big books to read [crying]

It's really good. I watched Yandere at first, but as I read on, the plot is actually very good. Unfortunately, the author's focus is on the charm strategy. I feel that the highlights of the protagonist are all about the heroines alone, which lacks a sense of excitement. Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles, which makes me feel a bit regretful. The length is really a pity, I think it is a bit short, but it is also very comfortable, and it is really civilized without being unfinished. There are also extra chapters. Now I only see the ones about my sister and the teacher. I think there should be a few more. At the very least, I will arrange a side chapter for each one and one person, and make up for the ending that does not appear in the main text. I hope everyone can live a happy life.

It's a good novel, it feels like a detective novel, and the male protagonist doesn't do anything against the odds (but if you think that the male protagonist has to fall in love with the female protagonist for a long time while playing games, and he has to treat her well, then just pretend that I didn't say it). There are currently 111 chapters.

I finally finished reading this book, and I feel a little empty inside... Let me tell you what you think. The early and middle stages are undoubtedly the peak of the book. The heroines such as Evelyn and Helena have vivid and three-dimensional designs. The plot of the copy is thrilling and compact. The narrative rhythm of adventure and salvation is excellent. It has a certain writing power and smooth writing. The plot declined significantly in the later period, and there are three core problems: first, Charlton II left the scene in a hurry, and the character was separated from the front and back; second, the character creation of the goddess and other characters tended to be flat; third, the ending was weak. Overall, this work should be at the top level of Tomato, and it can be considered a high-quality product in the entire online literature circle.

It is worth mentioning that yandere novels are yanderes in the true sense. The protagonist either loses himself and is imprisoned and monopolized, or is killed by the yandere who becomes angry and angry. It's not so much a weird love game as it is a survival game between yanderes. The protagonist has a retroactive ability similar to 486, and each event has five retroactive abilities. So far it seems that the pacing is okay, the only drawback is that the protagonist lacks initiative at certain times.

It is a novel that is interesting and not poisonous. It is the pinnacle of yandere novels. Nowadays, yandere novels are either too poisonous or have broken logic. Anyway, the attribute of being a yandere is almost becoming poisonous. But this is a masterpiece 1. The battle of wits and yandere pictures is all about excitement. The excitement and morbidity are wrapped up in the name of love. The control of this is still very good. Unfortunately, the battle of wits and courage later is a little weaker. The 2 main plot is quite interesting. It's less abrupt and more natural and smooth. It can't be said to be addictive, it can only be regarded as not boring. 3. The performance of the character design is still good, but the expressiveness of the images can only be regarded as second-rate, mainly because there is not much pen and ink. 4 Is better (four warm reminders) The attribute of yandere is no brainer I originally wanted to give it three and a half stars, but I decided to give it four stars without this option.

Overall, it's a 4.5. The writing is not perfect, but at least it doesn't make people think it's too white. The short length means some holes haven't been filled in, and the extras are assigned to a few relatively weak characters. It's a good start, the plot is well arranged, and the male protagonist's personality is rare in yandere novels. Although I was obviously a little anxious in the middle and late stages, and most of the chapters were a bit watery, the story was indeed finished. Of the five female protagonists, the teacher, the fifth princess, and the shrine maiden are the best portrayed. The characters are common but not cliché. After all, they have layers of grunge filters on them. The younger sister and the saint suffered from a lack of development in the early stage and a rushed ending in the later stage. A good yandere article, worth reading

Cthulhu is paired with yandere stories. Those who like this subject will probably like this book very much. It is probably one of the few good books on this subject on Tomato. The author's writing style is relatively good. Although it is still a bit rigid and routine in some places, it does not affect the reading experience overall. There are no major flaws in the details of the story, and the protagonist's IQ is basically always online. It is a rare book that can be read with the brain (if you pursue perfection, some places still need to be temporarily discarded). Overall, it's a book worth trying. It's a good book if you can read it, and it won't make you sick if you can't read it.

It's good to read. I was attracted by the title, introduction and rating at first, and then I was moved by the sense of oppression depicted by the author at the beginning of the novel. Although this article is not a traditional yandere, it reasonably integrates many elements such as magic, each heroine has a different personality and charm, and the story is vividly created. In the end, the story of joint exploration and rescue is also quite good. It is better to say that it is more in line with my taste and avoids the monotonous and boring problem in the later period caused by excessive emotional entanglement. The only shortcoming is that the last chapter at the end is a little rushed, and I didn't see the ending of Naia💢, but the flaws are not concealed, and what needs to be explained has been explained, and it deserves praise.

It's great, it's just an objective view of love and confusing logical thinking. It would be great if there were four updates a day. I finished Spreading Flowers, and it seems that I caught it quite by chance. Overall, the author's novel is very well written, and the characteristics of each character are vividly described. Moreover, there are also very interesting settings, including the cute tentacle lady, the elderly vampire teacher [face covering], and the intimate dragon queen (dog head), The erudite witch lady, the gentle cross-sanctioned saint [eating melon], the ups and downs of love are undeniable, this is a harem novel [face covering] In fact, the pace is too fast, it can be slowed down a bit, I feel like some of the detective's job can be interspersed in the process [crying] It will definitely be interesting

It's very interesting, the plot is great, and the rescue plot is in line with my values, but I should have seen it here, because of my ridiculous view of love. I regard the behavior of human reproduction simply as the reproductive instinct of living things, and I hate seeing this kind of plot in love. Even if I am very dirty, I will be very disgusted when I step in. I regard love as too holy. I I also know very well that I am not qualified to force my own values ​​on others, so I chose to leave. This book is the same without me. At least the author chooses to save every child. The first round of the game is to establish a bond with everyone. When the male protagonist travels in, the real redemption begins. It is wonderful. Forgive me for my shameless view of love. Goodbye everyone.