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A little bit of my own opinion First, I suggest the author add a description of the room in the introduction or at the beginning of the first chapter, otherwise the title will really persuade many people to quit (it's actually very good-looking, but not green). Second, give some heroines a little more tenderness (for example, the first book has passed and the heroine has no luck), but since she already belongs to the protagonist physically and mentally, there is no need to continue to be so fussy, and give them enough sense of security, such as Shen Yan. If they are in a harem, there is no need to worry about them knowing each other. The protagonist is the protagonist, and they are all deputy. They have to use their own methods to please the protagonist, but they cannot harm each other.) As for punishing the broken hands, my opinion is teasing. For example, Shen Yan's bottom line is not to abandon her, so she can not be allowed to be with the protagonist😴 as a punishment, instead of stimulating her again and again. These are my current thoughts, and I will also share this book with people who like this type of book in my circle [Learned] In the villain stories I've read, there are now three directions: 1. Traditional villain novel, eunuch in disguise Second, it is cruel and cruel directly, and the writing is enjoyable, but it can easily lead to aesthetic exhaustion later on. Third, this is the kind of author who has feelings. He can drink soup before eating meat without becoming a real eunuch. He also has emotional lines. He writes very well and feels that he is the most promising one so far. {Concerning the third point, if the heroine has multiple emotional lines, it will collapse (the second point is one of the reasons: the desire not to read in the later stage), but the advancement of the world line is destined to have more and more female protagonists. If the world line is not advanced, then the later period will not be a villain novel but a daily novel (actually it is also a reverse change. I feel that reader retention will be higher than a single villain novel or a single novel) Daily writing), if there is a way, for example, to make the original heroine of the main line (who has not been completely conquered, and is ambiguous) become the heroine of another main line, but she must have a halo of anti-intelligence, otherwise being touched by the protagonist of the main line will make people feel a bit green} So far I can think of so many [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's okay. The protagonist's behavior is reasonable. Except for the beginning, which is a bit poisonous, the other parts are good, but later on, it doesn't look like the honest person set up [what] a pure Neptune.

I have always liked this book. After reading it for the second time today, I realized that I had no comments. I quickly came to comment. The male protagonist is the kind of Neptune who can pretend to be pitiful but has a cool personality. He makes all the female protagonists follow him willingly. He is very powerful and the plot is very interesting.

The beginning is relatively fresh compared to other books of the same type, and the overall plot design is also good. The protagonist's personality is calm, steady and thoughtful, and he is probably the type who will do whatever it takes to succeed. Overall, it is quite good. Except for the lack of updates in one day, everything else should be pretty good [top post]

Eye-catching, exquisite writing style It's just too short. I recommend 10,000 words in one day or 10,000 words in two days. [Laughing]

As long as we take care of the Shura Field [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is all very good, but the treatment of the heroine's feelings seems uncomfortable, but overall if you exclude this reason, it is really good.

Author, please code words

Not bad, personally I don't like it that much.

I don't rate others casually, but this book is really good, as long as you handle the emotional issues well.

The writing is delicate, the characters are vivid, and the author is thoughtful.

Not bad, nice to watch

It looks pretty good without any brains.

Just like this tune

Great, the writing is average

Very good, suits me

The female author writes so well! ! It would be great if there was a subtitle or more plot about Liu Bei

In fact, I quite like it. It's a novel, don't think so much about right and wrong, and Zhou An really fits the role of a great villain! The author must not stop updating, I will definitely keep reading [blowing kiss]

The writing is beautiful and the content is exciting [laughs crookedly], the author must stick to it.

The writing is unrestricted, and the male protagonist's perspective is novel.

Grandma, you stopped updating. I'm going against you. Please update me quickly.

How come no one reads such a good book? [What]