Ye Luo************

The author is big, Wa (sitting on the silver butterfly of the flower city) (royal of this casual) (riding a little apple) (leading the fairy) (whistling) (falling off the back of the donkey) (dark, twisted and perverted crawling) (raising 999 roses) is here~

Give five stars first and then evaluate: I saw a little complaint about the protagonist's character in the middle (just a personal opinion), especially the part at Shu Yan's house. I personally hate the Ye Luoli warrior, but if you accept someone else's invitation, rather than someone else owing something, it's better to present yourself as a guest at someone else's house. It feels really rude to be a bodyguard (personally think!!!!). If you don't like others, you can clearly refuse. If you accept, don't give people the impression that the host and the guest are reversed. Personally! It feels disrespectful. I know that it is not easy for authors to write great articles, because I have also written, so I will give five stars before evaluating. These are my great suggestions to the author. I think the protagonist can be tough and proud, but don't feel too rude (maybe I've only seen half of it so I don't know how the character is going to be later on. This is just some evaluation of the protagonist's character that I've seen) Finally, thank you for writing the article. If the author feels that my comments are not good, you can delete them in any way. I will only be a reader.

Good looking, the male protagonist has a good personality, cp water prince, okay, come on

Great, keep up the good work! I like the setting very much, and the plot is also good. It's my favorite style. Please work hard on writing.

It's a good book. The author's writing style is also great. But can it be updated faster? Not enough kids [crying]

Give yourself some fuel

I just saw Chapter 48. It's not that it's not good to read, it's just that it pissed me off. Personally, I think one person has two souls (separated). Even if they are the same person after merging, with separate main and sub-personalities, they still cannot accept the fake threesome. (Mainly not articles read at the flower market) In reading apps other than the flower market, I can accept physical impurity, but I can never accept emotional and spiritual impurity. After all, the two personalities have different personalities, hobbies, habits, etc. Even if the two are combined into one, it still goes against loneliness in my heart. The main focus is a lonely problem. Of course, this book is good to read, and you can read it to the end if you don't care.

It feels great, the characters are well described, I don't know what to say, but it's pretty good anyway.

The plot in the front of this book seems a bit awkward, but the plot in the back is really improved by more than one level. Overall, it is not bad. It would be more perfect if the author could revise the previous ones.

This book is very good. I read it in the early stage and listened to it in the later stage. This story has many twists and turns. Although I have finished reading this book, there are still some parts that are confusing. There are also extra chapters. Although this book is finished, I feel that some things will happen in that extra chapter. If you want to read this book, I hope you will be more serious, especially the middle part, which is the early part where the protagonist wants to delete his memory. It is confusing. I did not understand it. I hope this book will be liked by more readers. I will read other books first, bye. Maybe I will think of this book in the future

Very nice! (*^_^*) Come on! ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

Just don't abuse me later.

The middle part, which was quite good at the beginning, was also very good. However, it was a bit unsightly after arriving on another continent, but overall it was very good to watch. I think this is the best among all the Ye Luoli double male protagonists I have watched.

I like this kind of text with super big golden fingers

It's good-looking. I like watching Ye Luoli recently. I used to particularly like double male protagonists

The logic is clear and the plot turns well. I look forward to the following plots.

Didn't you say you won't abuse me? [Pouts]

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In this world, happiness is yours💕The answer is that no one can predict the future, so we can only grasp every moment in life seriously. ——Shi Wang is very beautiful👀[shy][blowing kiss][sending heart][admiration]

Not bad, not bad, not bad! Come on! [Like][Send heart]

Look good, good, good! ! ! Like 😍

The author's imagination is quite big. This is the first time I've seen the twist behind it, and I still recommend it.

The previous chapters are all good, but I think traveling through another world to find parents could be omitted or even omitted, and it would be better if there are more foreshadowings. Personally, I think it's pretty good. Come on.

I personally think the plot is pretty good and interesting! ! !

Very pretty, I like it ٩(๑^o^๑)۶

Nice! Really, there is just no process.

How should I put it, it's a bit of a bloody plot. Just say no. A new chapter begins again. He chased him and fled. He can't fly without wings [Thinking][Thinking] I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it.

I originally wanted to see the protagonist go to other planes, so I chose the plane. As a result, he was teleported to the original plane with just a click.

Don't know what to say

You can also write some other stories about two male protagonists