When the night rain washes away the filth and fishy smell, who can see the brocade clothing store in Mangshan?
He shook off the rainwater from his body and walked into the pavilion. He held a long sword in his hand, with the scabbard pressed under the blade. He showed the back of the sword to the scholar in front of him: "Sir, look at this sword. It can't be put back into the sheath."
The scholar only smiled: "This sword was from the time of Ancestor Yi. It was forged by heaven and earth. It will drink blood when it is unsheathed. If it does not drink, it will bite the owner. When it comes to the world, it will be killed by the world. Some kings cited it as unlucky and sealed it in Beidi, where it will never come out for a hundred generations."
He smiled calmly and asked: "Now that the sword is out of its sheath, do you want me to kill all the demons in the world, or do you want me to draw my blood back into the sheath?"
The scholar said seriously: "At that time, the five kingdoms of China were standing side by side, and all kinds of demons were rising. The temples were treacherous, and the hearts of the people in the world were old. He Daxia is already a world-famous hero, and he will be promoted to the Golden Immortal in a short time. But now he is stuck in the world of mortals, and he has to bear the weight of a bloody sword. Is it really worth it?"
"Otherwise, the clamor in the world is only for myself or for the common people. In the autumn of crisis, immortals should save the world. When the devil's blood stains my body, I should sheath the bloody sword."
Reader comments
I have read the first ten chapters of this book, both good and bad, and here are my thoughts.
The biggest feeling that this book gave me was the problem of characterization. The characters who appeared in the first ten chapters spoke in too similar ways and did not fit their respective personalities. Secondly, the first ten chapters of this article gave me the feeling that they were somewhat deliberately highlighting their literary talents. For example, the waiter and the thief in the inn did not have their own spoken language characteristics, which resulted in monotonous and unfulfilled character portrayals.
Secondly, the plot development is too cliche and the progression is very deliberate, without a sense of letting nature take its course.
(After all, the author is a novice. I can understand that the author can try to carve out the character's behavior. Come on, author, your writing is good and has great potential (≧∇≦*)
I have read the first ten chapters of this book, both good and bad, and here are my thoughts. The biggest feeling that this book gave me was the problem of characterization. The characters who appeared in the first ten chapters spoke in too similar ways and did not fit their respective personalities. Secondly, the first ten chapters of this article gave me the feeling that they were somewhat deliberately highlighting their literary talents. For example, the waiter and the thief in the inn did not have their own spoken language characteristics, which resulted in monotonous and unfulfilled character portrayals. Secondly, the plot development is too cliche and the progression is very deliberate, without a sense of letting nature take its course. (After all, the author is a novice. I can understand that the author can try to carve out the character's behavior. Come on, author, your writing is good and has great potential (≧∇≦*)
Snow, why is it fragrant?