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Bad news: it's Stitches Good news: It's all sewn! Even worse news: the protagonist only has the strength of an indigenous protagonist, who can't beat anyone, and who can't beat anyone, and can pass the level every day with residual blood [Petrochemical] When I saw Chapter 145, it was still the same core problem. The protagonist has no inheritance. So far, all his strengths have been pieced together, without his own understanding or development. Or the author himself feels that the protagonist is already strong now, but from the reader's perspective, the potential of the protagonist is not as good as that of the great teacher's Ultraman, and it is not as good as directly practicing domineering. Not to mention that all the characters that the protagonist has to fight are named characters, and they are all in a headwind situation. Can a protagonist like Orochimaru be able to defeat them? I'm afraid I have to send it even for the characters, okay? Combat experience is not the same level at all. To put it simply, the core poisonous point of this book is that the protagonist has a very poor gaming experience and suffers every day. The author also feels good about himself and thinks that giving the protagonist more skills will make him stronger. However, the reality is that no one in the introduction has more abilities than the protagonist and has a better future.

If you want to integrate the world view, you can use Fate or Tsukihime. If you are Fate, you can go to Dongmu City next door to fight a Holy Grail War. Tsukihime can go and trick Elquet into becoming your wife [sneaky laugh]

The writing is pretty good, but the protagonist's abilities could be strengthened. I recommend the Demonic Eye of Death. The enemy's strength should also be strengthened. I recommend incorporating spells into the battle.

Five stars, it looks good. The writing of the battles can be improved. The emotional scenes are okay, but I don't know if you can write them well. After all, there are two female protagonists. Then the protagonist's combat power needs to be strengthened so that many people can beat him up. Then the abnormal aspects of the official battle can also be written. Later, the protagonist has something to hide his identity. You can try to write something to do with the official. Anyway, why are there so few and few people are watching? Is it too unpopular? Theme

Not bad, I don't care who the other heroines are. I just came here for Yukino [eating melon]

Come on, it's very beautiful

Overall, it's okay. The characteristic of this book is that the original male protagonist has CP. If you can't accept it, don't read it. Then the definite disadvantage is that the hero's ability is weakened in everything, and the enemy's ability is strengthened.

Come on, I really think it looks good

This one is okay, but it doesn't quite suit my taste, so I can only give it four stars. Sorry.

The author wanted to write well, which deserves encouragement, but the protagonist is too small. He was compared to the standard Shadow King, but the protagonist failed. The semi-pseudo-invincible style of the comic is quite good.

The author is very responsible, but the data is not good, and he keeps updating it every day. Moreover, the quality of the book is pretty good. Good luck to the author! Will it win? [Cry][cry]

From the current point of view, the world view is quite unique. It would be better if the writing style could be strengthened [Like] Come on, author [currently working on the manuscript]

Maybe I skipped a little bit, but I want to ask, why didn't Yegrit show up?

I have read more than 300 chapters of the book, and it seems to be getting farther and farther away from the daily life of the manga. The book is not bad, but the change from daily life is such a big change... I will try my best to read it. Come on, author. I hope the next book will be even better!

Pretty good. Come on.

Not bad, but after watching it for so long, the protagonist Shadow King's abilities are not reflected very well.

It's very interesting. I've been looking for this type of book and finally found one.

Nice! (What a short and powerful comment, irritating) [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, I hope to add companion plots

It looks good, I love watching it, come on, author

My evaluation is that if you can write well, you have to put poison. You don't need to use the parasite yourself. If you forget, it is much better than a cat taking it away.

It's been taken off the shelves, but I can still watch it. It's so cool.

I think it's pretty good, Duo Chu is ecstatic [I learned it]

The writing is very good, but I hope there is more plot of the Shadow King or more shadow soldiers. After all, there are still too few novels about the power of the Shadow King on Tomato.

I haven't watched it for long, and it feels good. I'm here to ask, will there be a shadow troop similar to Jackie Chan's Adventures in the future?

This novel is pretty good. Why is the rating so low? Is the update too slow?

I don't need a reason to give five stars, as long as I think it looks good. I see recommendations.

Nice, short and powerful

The books are very good, but there are not many people

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [crying][crying]