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The subject matter is a bit novel (maybe it's the first time I've seen it), and some of the stories are quite funny. I hope to continue writing (don't let it suck and maintain the quality). I look forward to becoming a big hit [I learned it] [I learned it]

I hope everyone will support the adopted son! Thank you very much

There is neither good nor evil in the way of heaven, and the great road has neither beginning nor end. Only humanity can control the good and evil of living beings. The way of heaven only governs the movement of the world, and good and evil are also the way. The Dao of Heaven is the first, and the Dao of Earth and Humans assist the Dao of Heaven. The way of heaven assists the great road, and the great road governs everything, but does not care about anything.

The subject matter is very interesting, the opening is well written, and the merit system is also well written, showing that evil will be rewarded with evil, and good will be rewarded with good. Come on, author, write a very interesting world.

The writing is quite beautiful. Well written, well written. Come on! It's much better than those without a heroine to engage in ambiguity. There are no weird female supporting characters. I really like it behind the scenes. I quite like [shy][shy][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][sending heart] The update is just too slow. Raise books slowly. I read good novels relatively quickly. Among all the heroines, I hate the supporting female characters the most. The novel I read before did not have a female protagonist, and there were so many supporting female characters involved in the ambiguity. Or it's just that the woman can't walk. . There is no female supporting role in this one, which is good. What I like most is that the story is purely behind the scenes and does not involve those disgusting plots, such as (many female characters like the male protagonist, and the male protagonist does not reject it. They also keep engaging in ambiguity. Later, he said that there is no heroine, and he also labeled it as having no heroine, and then added a heroine in the extra chapter. A novel I followed before added a heroine in the extra chapter, which disgusted me to death. Then I didn't want to read that novel, it was really disgusting).

I've finished reading it now, and there's nothing wrong with it. Support me, I quite like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow of creating extraordinary things.

It's not about the plot, but does the author have any preference for the word "also"? Or is it the speaking custom somewhere? After reading only the first three chapters and the last chapter, there are endless "also"s in the article. Others don't know, but I have a headache when I read it. I can obviously use other words to replace it, or just don't use this word, but I insisted on adding it. After reading the whole article, I only remember a lot of "also"s. Generally speaking, when writing articles, you should be very careful about the number of times the same word appears in a chapter. When using it in the same context, try to use synonyms. For example, if you are writing about a person's mood, use the word "elated" throughout the article. I don't know if the author reads the comments, so don't blame me, I'm just complaining. In addition, I also found that some other novels also like to use the word "also", so I posted it to complain about it. Don't blame, don't blame.

It's a very good book. I've read dozens of chapters so far, and it's still behind the scenes. I like it. Personally, the only bad thing is that it's too biased. Kyushu, you're right about being biased, but Maozi is going too far. Even when choosing allies, you have to find someone reliable! What's more, you are the way of heaven, and karma is written in the book. The whole world is in dire straits, but Maozi and Jiuzhou are fine. To be honest: when it comes to aggression, Mao Zi is either first or second; when it comes to blood hatred against Japanese pirates, Mao Zi is first and second; when it comes to relations, Mao Zi has had a good relationship with us in the past few years and the years since the founding of the People's Republic of China. This book almost equates Maozi with Kyushu! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

A novel start. The right entry point starts with a small character to locate the main character line, and the plot slowly unfolds. From time to time, he lays down foreshadowings and echoes back and forth to form a better reading experience. I wish the author will continue to work hard and create better and better! Complete this masterpiece perfectly!

It's a very good book, with rich imagination and good logic. Unfortunately, it was written wrong at the beginning. It was normal that the protagonist was Tiandao at the beginning, but then it seemed as if he had abandoned his physical body, and his sense of existence kept decreasing. Overall, the pace was too fast. Its shortcoming is that there are a lot of holes that cannot be filled in. It may be that the author put it aside for a few days in the middle of writing and then started writing again. His advantage is that he is very open and the plot is well connected. In summary, the plot jumps too fast. The protagonist is more like a supporting character, but he often interferes in things. The subsequent plot is very different from the previous plot. The early characters (such as countries, people) disappear later, which is a pity. This may be the meaning of the novel. It has its own ideas and will not follow the same routine. In the end, the author can no longer write. Personally, an open ending may be better. Hope to keep up the good work The above is my personal understanding or feeling, without any position or specificity. There may be some shortcomings in what I said above, but there should be most of it [love] [love] [love] [love]

I still don't agree with some of the author's views. What happened to Tiandao? The way of heaven is also because of human beings. If there are no human beings, the three ways of heaven, earth, people and even the great road, it is okay to put some pressure on the human race. However, the Chinese human race is destined to be at the top of the universe.

ᴵ ʷⁱˡˡ ⁿᵒᵗ ᵗʳʸ ᵗᵒ ᵖⁱᶜᵏ ᵗʰᵉ ᵐᵒᵒⁿ. ᴵ ʷᵃⁿᵗ ᵗʰᵉ ᵐᵒᵒⁿ ᵗᵒ ᶜᵒᵐᵉ ᵗᵒ ᵐᵉ. Of course I won't try to pick the moon, I want the moon to come to me

This kind of subject matter is very good. It's my first time watching it. I hope it won't collapse later. Never write a heroine for the protagonist. It's not easy to write a heroine. If you don't write it well, it will collapse easily.

It's beautiful. This is the first time I've seen this kind of subject.

The author's writing is quite good, and it is unique among prehistoric novels, but it's just that the author is a little bit behind the scenes. After all, the outline here is about the upgrading of the world, and there is no way to go to the back, because the highest point in the prehistoric novels is Hongmeng. Maybe this is just one of them, but we can only get these in ancient books. After all, today's prehistoric novels are all based on changes in stories and characters in ancient books, and they also rank very high among Tiandao novels, so they are worth reading.

Doesn't Zhou Hao have a wife? In Chapter 63, Tyr, a blue-blooded star, needs 10 million to start a company, but he does not have Blue Star's money. So, he went to Zhou Hao to borrow money. Zhou Hao gave him all his savings and said: That's fine, I'll lend it to you, but this is my savings, so don't pay it to me, or my wife will kill me. Judging from this sentence, it means that Zhou Hao has a wife. In Chapter 112, how do you become boyfriend and girlfriend with the alien princess?

The author can resurrect the gods, Buddhas, demons, gods, Buddhas, Jade Emperors, Emperors of the Sanqing, Taoist and Four Emperors, and so on. The legendary tame One-Five can all be revived. Brother Monkey, Black, White, Impermanence, Underworld, etc., And Zhong Kui, Heaven and the Underworld have to pay for it. Is this interesting? You One-Five, your theme is the way of heaven. Heaven's way is the cultivation system. You don't have gods, demons, demons, how can it be the way of heaven? You see, now the three ways are in harmony. There are no gods and demons yet. You see, there are no gods from the three religions of Confucianism, Buddhism, and Taoism. Or you should update it quickly and fill in these shortcomings. You should check the classics of Confucianism, Buddhism, and Taoism. It will be good for you to write novels. You are writing about the cultivation system. The author writes well. Come on, I will keep watching. Also, Wudang is the Quanzhen sect, Maoshan is the Zhengyi sect, and these must be clearly distinguished. Come on, come on.

I feel good after reading Chapter 10 If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, don't write about female protagonists.

In the end, will we conquer all the worlds, or will we travel through other worlds? After the finale, can you write a side story about the fox monsters in the universe, Genshin Impact, and many worlds? Can you write a side story without writing about the protagonist traveling to other worlds? Xiaobei can't beat him, so he will shake people. Traveling to other worlds has a backstage in China.

Personally, I think it looks pretty good, but it's a bit lacking.

Great, author. This book made me see the perfect utopian world of Inhuman Shadows. I really like it so much. There are some flaws in the front, but it's very comfortable to read @

Shenglaishengru is still in someone else's body. It is very similar to a post-apocalyptic article I read 10 years ago. One cell is a universe, and the treasures of heaven, materials and earth that everyone is fighting for are the poisonous garbage excreted from other people's bodies [laughing and crying]

This is my first time seeing such a subject! What goes around comes around! Very nice! As long as you don't say anything or take it off the shelves, I will keep chasing you! Great author, come on↖(^ω^)↗

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

Be careful, little turtles come by the smell

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It started out as a system flow, but as it went on it became fantasy, and finally turned into a prehistoric flow. The origin of the system is explained very clearly. Overall, it's okay, and it's a good way to pass the time.

I have never seen such a development. I find it very interesting. Come on, author.

Not bad, not bad. I recently found a nice book. This book is really beautiful!

Your imagination is rich and colorful, it's wonderful, keep up the good work! ! !