The Evil Brother Has a Long Road to Chasing His Wife

The plot may be okay, but the characters are not so good, and the writing is a bit immature. You need to sublimate the language. Once the level is improved, it will be naturally attractive. Come on, author. After reading the comments, the short article is easy to read and can be read without thinking, which is still very novel.

Very nice to look at. I didn't skip a chapter. Very immersive. Full of emotions. The only drawback is that the author is awesome, please update it quickly. [Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering][Face-covering] I hope the author of this comment can see it and favor it. Thank you Um, my poor Jiucang...[Face covering] Is he offline now?

Well, I felt pretty good when I first watched the plot. The relationship between the male and female protagonists doesn't feel fast or very slow now. Well, so the plot is a little too fast, but it's still okay. It is Lu Jiucang's character that makes me regretful. The rest of it feels pretty good, every character plays a role. It's just that some of the characters are not particularly perfect. But it's still very good. Come on, I look forward to your future works. I recommend this ending to be sloppy, but I still recommend it to be good-looking.

It's very interesting. I personally prefer to read short stories, and the female protagonist is silly and silly. It feels like she's here to be funny, while the male protagonist is more calm and the plot together is different. It's a pity that the ending is a bit rushed.

I think it looks good, but it's a little short and not enough to watch. I really hope that the love line between the male and female protagonists is longer. After the incident is almost done, I still hope to add some love lines. I also really like the taboo feeling of the previous sect, hahahahaha, but I don't like the two couples between Song and the dragon. I like it so much, because this is a romance novel. It's okay if a couple of pure love occasionally appears, and it doesn't make it too obvious. But if there are two couples at once and a lot of descriptions, I really can't get enough of the romance. I'm not a pure love reader, so I read romances just to watch the young couple.

It's not very exciting, but it's actually better than many novels. The plot is smooth and the emotions are natural. Although it's a bit shorter, this is what attracted me. I can't read a novel that's too long. The author is quite humorous. The funniest part of the whole article is actually the part where the author said he was bitten by a dog when he was a child, hahahahahahahahaha.

It is highly recommended and worth watching, but the male and female protagonist may not be the characters that everyone will like, and it is still a bit controversial, because I think the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist is reserved, and he does not give everything. He seems to love himself more. The female protagonist is a bit too kind, just a bit like a virgin, but it is still acceptable because she is a bit like Hua Qiangu. After all, no one is perfect, and the male and female protagonists are okay. My favorite among them is Shen Zhiyuan's couple. The emotional scene between Shen Congyang and his wife was so sudden that it felt completely unrelated. I always felt that they got together because of the incident with the enchantress, and I couldn't feel the emotional connection between them at all. Lu Jiucang I love him, my God, he is such a good baby. I thought he would be with Baby Qianluo, and why did the eldest prince want to save him? And why did the eldest prince ask him to get black stockings inside the male body? Will he be killed by the eldest prince? So scared. Anyway, you can still see it and it's worth seeing.

It is a time-travel fairy tale. The story is compact and not procrastinating. It is a great collection of many elements, but it does not seem boring. The heroine is not very powerful, but she is an optimist. In the later period, she also wanted to protect her companions, so she started working hard. Although she has not seen the results yet [laughs] because the ending was a bit unexpected and did not give the heroine a chance. Both the male protagonist and the male supporting character are set up to give everything for their lover, I like it!

Easy and interesting, suitable for reading when taking a break

Although the heroine is a little weak and cowardly, she doesn't want to practice hard and just wants to live an ordinary life. But it's good to have a kind heart and risk life and death for your friends. The story is also very interesting and beautiful! Come on, author!

It's good to read, much better than those cool articles, the chapters are not inked, Song Zhiyuan's man gave birth to a child. I also like to read it, but I feel sorry for him to go through this when he is only 19 years old [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

I felt that the whole story was pretty good from the beginning, but the ending was a little rushed, but it was still very enjoyable. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Good! For the first time, I saw a female protagonist who did not want to kill the heroine after passing through the book. Instead, she tried every means to escape the tragic route of the female protagonist and then made money to become a salted fish and then left her to die. However, the plot did not allow it, and she was forced to embark on the journey of cultivating immortality, and at the same time gained friendship and love!

I really like the character of the heroine, and I also like this novel very much. Generally speaking, it suits my taste. Except for the ending, which is a bit rushed, there is no drag on the whole. It is very good. I like to read short stories, but if I like this novel, I want it to be longer. It is not enough [laughing] [laughing] Come on, author

Except it's a little short, it's still quite interesting and sweet.

Overall: worth seeing! Not enough~ If the author has time, he might as well consider expanding this story or writing it in the form of a spin-off, so that the characters can be more fleshed out. Otherwise, let's make a whole series [laughs], and the stories of the deputy CPs should also be exciting! ~

It's very interesting. I like reading short stories very much. For novels with more than 200 chapters, I just skip to the end. I will finish reading the short story till the end

It's quite good, but a bit short. I read it in one day.

It's quite interesting, although at the beginning I wished the author could change the male protagonist, hahahahahahaha! But it's not that good at the back! It's just a pity that the extra chapter didn't make it clear whether they managed to clear out the magic thread in the end, and the heroine didn't get to know Goudan'er (Lu Jiucang) either, which was a pity!

It's pretty good, the plot is light-hearted and a bit funny. Recommend everyone to take a look

It's quite good to read, the story is complete, and the plot is remarkable. There are some minor flaws. I originally wanted to complain about it, but after the author's words, I feel there is no need to complain. I believe the author will write a better book in the next book.

Although it is short, it is very interesting. The whole story is complete and the emotional line is very clear. It's enough to see, big! !

Except for the ending, which is too rushed, everything else is great.

The writing is quite interesting. I don't know how to write book reviews, but in general, the plot of a novel is too slow to read and I don't want to follow it. I read this book in one go and it makes you want to read more. For me, it is a good book.

In the novel about cultivating immortals, the heroine traveled through time and met a fellow villager who also traveled through time. The male protagonist was reborn and met the former reborn heroine who had protected her for two hundred years in her previous life. I thought they would work together, but I didn't expect that the former heroine turned out to be a careerist. It's a pity.

The beginning process is very good, but the ending is a bit sloppy, and the character setting is also very good.

It's pretty good. The first half is a bit hard to watch, but the further you look at it, the better it gets.

Yes, book friends passing by can come in and take a look.

I hope there will be more extras... The whole story is quite interesting! It would be nice to write more at the end

Lu Jiucang also liked this episode [crying] Support, keep up the good work