Murderous Aura

Please don't embarrass the author. The author is just an ordinary person. It is impossible for every plot, every dialogue, and every character setting to please everyone. If you think the story is interesting, just read it. It would also be great to give it a free gift. If you don't think it's good, go find something good to read. There are so many books on Tomato... Right? The update is basically 3 chapters and 10,000 words a day. Sometimes when a big plot is difficult to write, it will be two chapters of more than 6,000 words.

The front part is very good, but the back style is not good. The protagonist is a killer who was reborn to 13 years old. He should be someone with a high IQ. He can achieve his goal silently and then leave gracefully, leaving countless legends behind. Instead of just firing a shot at every turn, attracting hundreds of people to besiege him, and then being reckless. You are a killer, not a superman. Here are some personal suggestions.

Although the author said it is slow-burning and generally refreshing, I think it looks very silky, and it is more daily life. However, there are always exciting fighting strategies, but the emotional scenes are a little less, and the interaction with the heroines is a little less. I hope the author can add a little more pen and ink.

Full marks for the author's writing and plot, but I don't know what to say about the characterization? My personal point of view is that every character in it, including the protagonist's personality, always makes me feel out of the circle. I can't say anything specific. If you are interested, you can take a good look. At least this book is relatively good on Tomato. Come on, author! Leave

Second one, I gave it all five stars before I finished watching it. Needless to say how good it is.

It feels a bit like watching "Hidden Killer" before, but it feels like Yu Pingdan has been described too? It lacks a sense of immersion, so I have no memory after reading the whole article. It was originally a refreshing article, but I didn't feel refreshed after reading it. It's strange🤔️

Super exciting urban writing. A young killer who wants to be a salty fish is a bit too showy, but he is still quite good-looking.

It's 2:20 in the morning, it's getting late, I'll continue watching tomorrow, the progress is 62, so far it's pretty good (it's just the height of the male protagonist that makes me feel a bit less immersed) Well, everyone has their own opinions, which may not be true, but this is also my attitude

By far the best book I have ever read on Tomato Do you plan to write to or after college?

How to judge an excellent novel? When you keep turning the pages until the latest chapter feels lost, when you check the time and find that time flies by, when you want to find fault with the eggs but find that you have nothing to say, you will involuntarily give this fledgling novel a five-star rating to prevent it from dying halfway, just like me now [laughing]