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Reader comments
A suggestion to the author, don't make your wishes too much. It can be difficult for the heroine to work hard to complete, but it's really annoying that the original owner wants this and that. For example, in the first world, when the original owner died, he just wanted to eat another bite of white steamed buns, but in the end, it turned into a series of wishes to save his sister, torture his scumbag father and younger brother, save the common people, find the child born by his previous sister, and live a good life. It feels like greed is not enough, and the heroine is like being controlled by the original owner. She must satisfy her greed or pay liquidated damages (although these greeds are kind-hearted, but they are still too much. She wants everything, otherwise she cannot be fully satisfied. This makes people unable to empathize with her, and it is boring if she is not happy). I originally clicked in because I wanted to watch Disaster Survival, but it turned out to be Fairy Godmother and I was quite speechless. If you want to describe a disaster, focus on escape. If you want to write about post-disaster reconstruction and messianism, focus on this aspect. What I feel now is that the whole text tends to be a running account. It seems that I have written a little bit, but it is not in-depth. It is quite bland and not interesting to watch. The live barrage is not interesting either.
There is a very annoying man who behaves well even if he gets an advantage. When the heroine encounters this man, she feels like she has been poisoned and becomes an all-purpose nanny who gives money to her.
Why didn't the author write [cry][cry]
Watching Zombie World makes my head hurt. I especially love to lick the captain who is a soldier. The author has a huge filter on the profession of soldier. I feel aggrieved and kneel down to lick. After reading a book for more than 10 years, I have rarely been so submissive... Speechless and curious.
A suggestion to the author, don't make your wishes too much. It can be difficult for the heroine to work hard to complete, but it's really annoying that the original owner wants this and that. For example, in the first world, when the original owner died, he just wanted to eat another bite of white steamed buns, but in the end, it turned into a series of wishes to save his sister, torture his scumbag father and younger brother, save the common people, find the child born by his previous sister, and live a good life. It feels like greed is not enough, and the heroine is like being controlled by the original owner. She must satisfy her greed or pay liquidated damages (although these greeds are kind-hearted, but they are still too much. She wants everything, otherwise she cannot be fully satisfied. This makes people unable to empathize with her, and it is boring if she is not happy). I originally clicked in because I wanted to watch Disaster Survival, but it turned out to be Fairy Godmother and I was quite speechless. If you want to describe a disaster, focus on escape. If you want to write about post-disaster reconstruction and messianism, focus on this aspect. What I feel now is that the whole text tends to be a running account. It seems that I have written a little bit, but it is not in-depth. It is quite bland and not interesting to watch. The live barrage is not interesting either.
There is a very annoying man who behaves well even if he gets an advantage. When the heroine encounters this man, she feels like she has been poisoned and becomes an all-purpose nanny who gives money to her.
Why didn't the author write [cry][cry]
Watching Zombie World makes my head hurt. I especially love to lick the captain who is a soldier. The author has a huge filter on the profession of soldier. I feel aggrieved and kneel down to lick. After reading a book for more than 10 years, I have rarely been so submissive... Speechless and curious.
Didn't the author write the copy? [Shy]
It looks good, I will continue to watch it