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The idea is very good and the ideas are good. The main point is to change the marriage. The disadvantage is that the front layout is very disastrous and I don't feel as relaxed as reading a novel. I have been doing research on the setting. I know this is the way for the protagonist to improve himself, but it is too dry. The point is not the theory. The point is that she did it and achieved it through the performance process. The results affect the surroundings, etc. Instead of dry data and research objects, the length of these growth and the uncomfortable feeling of not changing the name after reading more than ten chapters have worn out my tolerance for writing and imagination. I hope the author writes better and better in the future. I will see you in the future [Love]

The writing style is delicate. Although it is not a common novel format, it has a unique flavor. It can be seen that the author is serious about writing a book and writing a good book. The whole book is not sloppy and the storyline is smooth. It really makes me, a resident tomato gold digger, unable to find faults.

Are some texts written using AI? It's a bit interesting. It can be seen that the author knows exactly what to do with AI.

It is also a unique existence among Dou Po fans. I thought it was a cliché marriage change at first, but I didn't expect it to be so exciting. Xun'er's general attack, Nalan and Xiao Ran's gb and bg are all very annoying. I support you three to live a good life together😍 The character of the heroine is also... I like it very much. She is calm, rational, smart and decisive. The plot is quite serious and there is no brainless plot. All in all, it is very good.

Suitable for viewing with a brain

It's a bit slow to pick up. This series feels like I could have written more than a thousand chapters before I could finish the Lower Planes. If I had to finish The Great Master, it would probably take even longer. Don't come here if you like fast and cool writing.

It's okay, the plot is good, and the content is generous. Need to watch with brain. Personally, I feel there are still some shortcomings. For example, the content in parentheses in many places can be integrated into the text. In some places, it is written like a table, which affects the look and feel.

Xiao Yan is yours, Xiao Xun'er is yours, and Medusa is yours too. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The quality is pretty good, but the main reason is that the volume is large and the number of words is updated every day. [Blowing kiss] Let me talk about what I care about. For example, the title "Nalan Boyan" in the first thirty chapters is very awkward. If you want to show that the protagonist has not accepted Nalan Yanran's life experience and responsibility, you can directly make up the surname before time travel. When I read the word Nalan, I thought it was followed by Yanran, which was very awkward. [Cover face] There is also the problem of the number of words in each paragraph. There are often two to three hundred words in a paragraph, which seriously reduces my desire to write paragraph reviews. [Cover face] The main character in the entire article has no selling points. He is a cultivator who is usually stern and has no hobbies other than practicing (you mentioned it all in one sentence, but I ignored it if you didn't write about it). Seeing now, what attracts me the most is the two themes of time travel and gender reassignment. The process of the time traveler accepting himself to become Nalan Yanran has also been briefly described. As a time traveler, there is no opportunity that is unique to him. So far, everything has been the result of hard work. I hope the protagonist's performance when he gets married can be more contrasting. There is really nothing that attracts me. I feel that the protagonist of this book is not as exciting as the supporting character Xiao Yan. [Eat melon] Of course, although there are no big ups and downs, it is not annoying at all, so I give it a pretty good rating. [Thinking][Like]

Yes, the character plot IQ is online. Much better than most mindless novels.

The writing is okay, but I just want to ask if this is a harem or pure love. Does Xiao Yan only marry the female protagonist?

It feels like the author is here to experience life. It has the author's strong personal style and is generally inconsistent with Tomato. The summary is not mindless.

I have read a lot of novels and now I feel sleepy and not happy when reading this kind of novel (it just feels like fighting in this village against that village, and the big event will be broken in the middle and late stages). People who have read less books should find it easier to read. I just don't know what the performance of the book is now. Anyway, it is much better than ordinary literature.

Looking forward to the next plot

Yes, yes, as long as the male protagonist doesn't have a harem?

Slower to heat up, but still very nice. No eunuchs [cry][cry][cry][cry]

The follow-up should be exciting hh A bit disappointed. Don't talk about your views on marriage and childbearing, or the protagonist's views on marriage and childbearing, okay? This can easily lead to quarrels. Everyone has different feelings about this, and everyone has different ideas. The focus should be on the main push picture and the emotional line, but I will still pursue it. I want to see the follow-up and I want to see more updates.

It's good-looking, much better than some fake male videos. Try not to use the writing style of sadistic female videos about palace fights [shy], I just like pure rationality with a little sweetness.

If the needle doesn't poke, come on.

So tired, so tired with my brain😭

The frustrating life of Xiao Yan, a young chef [smile][smile][smile] Susu Niangzi 1000.0

It looks good. It completes the world view and logical perception based on the original work.

The plot written by the author is very interesting, and the protagonist Nalan is also very lovable. Author, if you want to continue writing, please don't give up. [Sending my heart]. By the way, when will Nalan and Huohuo get married [laughing evilly]

How long until we can see watering and cultivating[exploration][exploration]

Surprisingly good. The character of the protagonist is very good. Unlike the useless protagonist who relies solely on cheats, this protagonist has many advantages.

Interesting [laughs evilly] More of it

The writing is still very good.

Support the author

Good, good, good, good

It's okay, relatively rare subject matter