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It's quite interesting. It's a world woven through a sieve. There are rebirths, time travels, and systematic ones. The heroines can always make a guest appearance in their stories. They are either passers-by, backdrops, or cannon fodder [face covering] but the one who is riding the horse is another reincarnation [smile]. I just want to watch one, not reborn, no. Is it so difficult to travel through time, not reincarnate, and remain the original aboriginal [smile] Also, sometimes too much is written about the appearance of the heroine, and her attacks are beautifully written, which feels superficial and flashy [facepalm] Also, the fights take up too many chapters, and I can write one or two chapters [facepalm] This is the first time I see someone who has awakened the divine physique and has his own skin [face covering]

The author's writing is very good and gorgeous, not like a newbie. The heroine is described as very fairy-like and has a very lovable personality. He also acted decisively, and I hope that the character will not collapse in the future. A rare essay about genius cultivating immortality in Tomato. Advantages: 1. The heroine is a true genius and goddess, with a cold and noble personality. She is not funny, nonchalant, or the group's favorite junior sister. She always has the airs of a goddess and is aloof. 2. There is no cp and almost no ambiguous plot. King Chen quickly transformed into a passerby. Lord Shen Mu only showed an ambiguous single arrow on the first side, but then directly turned into a normal master. 3. As the first genius of the Immortal Sect, the heroine always has a pomp when she goes out. She rides on an immortal boat and is accompanied by many generals and protectors [cool]. Disadvantages (?): 1. In the first 20 or so chapters of Mortal World, the heroine is quite stubborn and has dissuaded many people. (But to put it another way, the heroine's memories from the modern ordinary people at that time and after that, she only had a Qi training period, and she didn't know any swordsmanship or spells. Even a little bit of it can be understood.) 2. The heroine is not a virgin, she is decisive and shows no mercy. However, there are two scenes where the passerby character just provokes the heroine, but it feels like the attack is too heavy [face covering]. (However, the introduction already shows that this is a world of the jungle. If a weak person dares to lust after the heroine and constantly provokes the strong, it is normal for him to be destroyed or deposed [laughing and crying]) All in all, the content is very interesting so far. Please keep updating the author! ! ! [Lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

After gritting your teeth and reading the first few chapters, you will find a new world. The storyline is exciting and colorful, the characters are beautiful, and the supporting characters have their own characteristics. So far, this novel can be described as "advanced". I hope there will be no CP in the future.

The biggest advantage of this book is that the author writes very steadily. The heroine is dedicated to seeking the truth and has no emotional line, so don't get involved, so those without CP can rest assured to watch it. Moreover, the heroine is really the darling of heaven, and she is treated like a goddess (anyway, this treatment is the best among all the fairy tales I have read), rather than the various hardships faced by various heroines. The kind that grinds everywhere and narrowly escapes death. This book on cultivating immortality may not be rated above 9.5, But 7.9 Is really low, at least 8.5 Or above.

This book is actually very good, but the first thirty chapters may be too confusing for many people. The first thirty chapters are ancient plots, so if you don't like it, it is really recommended to start reading from chapter 30. The main text starts from chapter 30, which is very consistent with the traditional fairy tale. The author can actually write it in the introduction. In this case, more people will like @

It's a fantasy novel about a female channel with a heroine. The plot concept is good, the author's writing is good, and there are no particularly big surprises. Usually I rarely read fantasy novels about female channels, because there are basically few good ones. They are all either sweet pet novels or green tea novels, and the plots are bland and boring. The writing style is unsightly. I think this is a true female fantasy novel with a female protagonist among female fantasy novels. I see the shadow of male fantasy novels with a male protagonist. I think this is a good reference, because the level of male fantasy novels is indeed much higher than that of female fantasy novels. This is This is the first time I have read a fantasy book with a female protagonist about the struggle in the world and the struggle for supremacy between geniuses. Although it is slightly inferior to the male version, regardless of the world background setting and the character design, the plot is interesting. Sorry, I don't think I should be so harsh on the female version. , And it is also the author's first book on Tomato. In short, I think this book has flaws as well as its merits. It is a female channel author's attempt to explore fantasy novels with female protagonists. The reason for such a low score is that most women prefer sweet pet fantasy novels, which suffers from a limited audience. Finally, I give the author five stars. I hope the author can continue this and good books will eventually be seen. Finally, I want to ask the author if he is a man [Thinking]

At first I saw some surprises in the front and wanted to give up on the article, but I persisted. The more I looked back, the more I felt it was great. It is really beautiful, the writing is also very good, and the characters are very full. (Personal opinion)

It's good to watch. I really like the protagonist. He is a true child of luck and his talent is real. It's the kind of game where you constantly upgrade and fight monsters, and there won't be any messy content. When I read fairy tales, most of the time I just want to see the protagonist upgrade and become a god. It's very satisfying to watch and it satisfies my dream of fairy cultivation😎😎😎😎😎

I like this book very much, the author's writing is great! I read the comments saying that they have objections to the author's no-CP statement, and everyone may have their own ideas. But I don't mind, I'm a native dog and I love watching! I still highly recommend it! This book is still very good, but I don't understand why the rating is so low. Everyone should read the introduction carefully. The author has also said that the first twenty or so chapters are equivalent to the heroine's experience in the mortal world and then all the experiences in the world of cultivation. If you really mind the content about the mortal world, you can skip the first twenty chapters and go straight to the content about the world of cultivation, as the author has said. About no CP: Fei Yundu: Is it abnormal for the direct disciples of Tianji Pavilion in the mortal world to blush when they see the heroine? I feel like the author only wrote this to highlight the good-looking heroine. Not counting this, his subsequent behavior was normal. He and An Yuhuan were a couple. I don't understand why some people think this is a single arrow. Shen Muxianjun: Shenmuxianjun's heart beat faster when he first met the heroine. I didn't understand it. But his subsequent behavior was in line with what a master should do. I don't know if there will be other unreasonable behavior in the future, at least I haven't seen anything else now. King Chen: In the later period, King Chen was completely a stranger and had no ambiguity with the heroine in the world of cultivation! He didn't even know that the goddess was the heroine! It's not that uncomfortable. There are only a few scenes that are ambiguous, but everything else is normal! ! ! Evaluation of the heroine: The heroine is not a charlatan, she is not funny, she is not the favored junior sister of the group, she is not a holy mother, she always looks like a goddess, she is aloof, a genius, a flute and sword master, she has no CP, she is like the bright moon in the sky no matter where she is, she is an existence that is beyond the reach of others, and she has opponents of comparable strength. I'm a local dog and I love watching. No CP, no CP, no CP! ! ! I have been following it from about sixty to seventy chapters until now. The author would like to give you more encouragement! Super recommended! ! ! (Sometimes it is recommended that you read the introduction and author's message) (If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you don't like it, don't spray it. If you don't like it, don't spray it.)

It's very interesting. The heroine is very self-reliant, elegant and unparalleled. She is indeed an unparalleled genius. The author's description is indeed spot-on. However, there is a small drawback, probably because the author has just written the book. The early plot jumps are not obvious enough. As a result, if I am not careful enough when listening to the book, I often feel confused. One second I am talking about one thing, and the next second it is another thing. However, the problem of scene jumps is indeed reduced as you go to the back. Overall, there is nothing sinister about it, the plot is very exciting, and the heroine's image of being a genius along the way is also well described. It is a very comfortable reading novel about the heroine Feng Aotian who studies immortality. It is highly recommended for readers who like fairy tales, heroines, etc. To read this book.

Good article. The heroine follows the law of the jungle and respects the strong. She does not engage in any kind of family, friendship or love affairs, but she is not cold-hearted. The sect protects the heroine's growth, and the heroine also gives back to the sect as she grows. There is no fearless kindness and compassion in the plot. All actions are to make herself stronger. Even if she is a proud son with an unparalleled physique, he is not blindly arrogant. He is very clear-headed and works hard.

It's really good-looking. This is a real cool novel, a more advanced cool novel, not a routine novel that slaps you in the face. Although some of the special effects descriptions are very exaggerated and I can't understand the lack of visual sense, the flaws are not concealed. Five stars encourage it.

My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I just want to read 200 copies of this stuff every day. It's awesome. Claes, Doubao helped me generate the author's bikini photos, and Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, OS finally let me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. Look at Bei! It's awesome, k. I wish the author directly that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine. Anyway, it's very good-looking. Go and watch it.

It's okay, but I personally don't like too much description of appearance and a bit exaggerated writing style. I feel that there is no need for a bunch of descriptions. If you like gorgeous things, you can try it. The main reason is that I haven't read many chapters. I don't feel that there is anything interesting about it after more than 30 chapters. The fighting descriptions don't account for a lot so far. It's a bit bland, so maybe it will be interesting later.

It's very interesting. The story about the heroine has no CP yet. The author's writing style is a bit rhetorical but it is relatively good on Tomato. The plot is quite smooth, but I suggest you skip the early part of the house fight. . . The heroine has a noble status and has never been wronged. This is very different from other novels, which made me feel aggrieved. But this one is different. The genius is the genius. She is an absolutely powerful existence, and the forces behind it cannot be so weak. There are no people who love the law. This book breaks past stereotypes. However, the plot is still a slap in the face, making it suitable for watching without thinking. Overall, this is an enjoyable article. It is not suitable for reading with your brain. Some comments in the comment area are like pigs [smile]. It is recommended to turn off the comments when reading, otherwise it will affect your mood.

This book is very good, let me tell you what is good about it. First of all, I have been reading this novel for at least 13 years. I think she should be ranked in the top 10 on Tomato Girl Channel, and in my mind she can be ranked in the top 3. There is no discrepancy between this content and her profile. There is no ambiguity and no male protagonist. It is very consistent with the article about female cultivating immortals without cp. Instead of saying that there is no cp like other female cultivators, there is actually ambiguity. Of course, some people may think that it is just a little ambiguous, and it is not a confirmed relationship, so it is considered to be no cp. Then I would like to ask him about this. What does the description mean? Another point is that other female-channeled immortality novels cannot capture the magnificence of this author, as well as the beautiful landscapes about the world of immortality, the intense scenes of fights, and the special effects. (The reason why I focus on this is because I am studying fairy tales on other female channels, and I can't see how good or intense the picture is at all. However, I saw it in this book, and I can imagine the picture) Even if this book is taken out to compete with the male cultivator's fairy tale, I think it's still pretty good. Really, I have been reading it for a long time, and I think the author's literary talent is great, and there is something the author wants to express. Also, I think the emotions between the protagonist and the supporting characters and the PK scenes are very well written. I felt like I was reading a very good fairy tale like The Perfect World. Really highly recommended. The heroine did not have an affair with anyone throughout the whole process, which is very consistent with what I want in a strong female novel without cp. The heroine grows up step by step, which is not very exciting, but it is also very exciting. No one can always be a winner. If you lose, you will win, and everyone will grow. I think the effect of the current chapter is already very good, but it is a pity that it is not finished. This is a fly in the ointment, which is very good. I hope the author can continue his efforts and write more books. Another point is that the first 20 chapters are very boring. If you want to read directly and enjoy it, you can just start reading from chapter 21. Or you can fast forward and read the first 20 chapters. Because the beginning is really boring, of course the author also said that it would be better to start reading from Chapter 21.

I really like it here. I really like the cold character of the sword nun. It's not a traditional fairy tale. The heroine is in a high plane from the beginning. I really like it! ! However, there is one shortcoming: the heroine's fighting scenes are too gorgeous, including stars, moonlight, purple petals, and the shadow of some kind of beast. It looked very beautiful at first, but after watching more, it feels a bit too complicated, and there is no sense of substitution. It also focuses on describing the momentum and scene of the moves. There is not much description of the attack power caused. Also, the heroine is a sword and flute practitioner, and she does not use the sword much when fighting. It is like a simple magic practice, but these problems are not big. Overall I like it very much If the heroine's scenes were more down-to-earth and real, and if there were more specific scenes of the heroine practicing hard on swords and flutes, it would be perfect.

There are so many beauties and diverse personalities, the characters are solid, the scene descriptions are beautiful, and the fight scenes are stunning. It would be a bit embarrassing for someone who is not a time travel girl or a reborn person. Arrogance also requires ability. There are many smart people inside, but their strength does not allow them to be arrogant, so they are also very low-key. Overall, it looks pretty good. It would be nice if the plot was less confusing and filled with rebirth or time travel and countless protagonists.

It's very interesting. The heroine has a strong background and talent. Although in the first few pictures, the setting of "a cruel heroine" seems a bit frustrating, as if the heroine is weak, but in the first few chapters, the heroine quickly becomes stronger. In the back, she becomes a cool and cool heroine. It's a cool story! ! Moreover, the heroine regained her memory quickly without any delay. I think the author wrote this very well [Sending Hearts]

Dear author, this book is really well written. As a first-time writer, I am very surprised to be able to write something like this. However, there is something missing in the later plot. It may be the coherence or the sense of urgency. Maybe more life-like elements can be added to enrich it. For example, again Returning to the mortal world for the first time, and the world view of this book was originally written on a relatively large scale, similar to the main god and the confrontation of all realms, but in fact what I have seen now is basically partial. I think it can be expanded a bit in the future, or a very hellish plot, such as the loss of cultivation, etc.

The best novel about cultivating immortals I have read so far First of all, the heroine's character is to my liking: elegant, noble, and powerful. I especially like the fact that she is talented and always comes first. Moreover, there is no female competition, dog blood, etc. In this book, which really breaks the traditional start of cultivating immortality. Each character has his own characteristics, his own pride, and the quality of accepting humbly. Of course, there will also be mischievous or ruthless heroines during the period. They are all dealt with one by one without any delay, which is really good. Secondly, I really like DaDa's descriptions, and I'm really good at describing them. Every fighting scene I see from DaDa's descriptions has a picture in my mind, so DaDa's descriptions are very successful. The final content is also very intertwined, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. I look forward to the future direction of this book, it will definitely be spectacular!

Ahhhh~ It's so beautiful, everyone's brains are online [blowing kisses], the heroine is dazzling, but the supporting characters are also dazzling, and they don't weaken the others in order to highlight the heroine. The logical thinking is all online, it's very beautiful [Adoration], the only bad thing is that this book is still serialized, woo woo hoo~ [crying] Come on, it's not enough, it's really a shortage of books, it's all up to you [in progress]

It's so beautiful and beautiful. The heroine is the Goddess of Jiuhua. She has the divine body of Taiyin, divine ice spirit roots, and mysterious bloodline. I like this kind of heroine without cp. The heroine has always been the number one genius in the contemporary era (the number one in ancient times and the leader of all heavens). She is pure and pure and has a protector. She is The genius of the sect started in the previous plane, with many small worlds underneath, and a huge world view (those losers counterattacked, the path to ascension to immortality was cut off, and they were reborn to dig up spiritual roots and steal talents. I am really tired of reading revenge stories. The heroine should always be looked up to by everyone on the top of the mountain)

It was very enjoyable to write and the characters were well developed. Instead of the traditional female strong cultivating immortality novel, there is more about the male competition aspect, which is different from other novels, and it has the feeling of a male strong female strong character novel.

The characters are clearly and vividly depicted, each with their own characteristics, and not brainless. The heroine is taciturn, but powerful and full of pomp, which satisfied my vanity when reading the book. Although the overall book rating is not high, the author's imagination is very wide, in the description of the language, action and environment of some secret tours and the appearance of the goddess. , Meticulous and precise. Unlike other books, which basically cover this aspect in one stroke and will not feel boring. This book as a whole gives people a grand and refreshing feeling. It is a powerful novel about cultivating immortals that is excellent in the description of characters, scenes and imagination.

It's very, very, very good-looking, and the heroine is an absolute blast! If you want to have more fun, you can skip the mortal world part! There won't be any problems, there won't be any problems with not being able to connect to the context! Because ordinary people might feel a little aggrieved when they see that one, but it is really very beautiful.

All in all, it's very satisfying. The heroine is finally saved instead of being a loser waiting to die. The sect is also super awesome and it's not a loser sect. This is simply not so satisfying hahahahaha

It opens low and goes high, and the back part is simply shocking and delicious. It matches all my fantasies about the heroine who cultivates immortality. The heroine is always on top and has no setbacks and is happy to the end. I like to watch this kind of movie. There is also a star for the author Lao Duan Update😡😡😡

Nice! I like the CP of Yun Nong and Goddess Lily! ! !

I started reading it from the first chapter. I didn't find it bad. On the contrary, the more I read, the more addicted I became. I don't know why they all said how good the first 30 chapters were. When I read this review, I also thought about skipping to chapter 30, but I was afraid that something would be missed by then. I couldn't figure it out, so I started reading from the beginning. It's very interesting, and there is no female competition that makes me hate it. I think this rating can be higher than 9 points. I will follow up after reading this review [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]