Thriller: Why Are All My Romance Targets So Terrifying?

I worked hard to write the three golden chapters, but based on data and feedback from some friends, the first chapter really fell flat. However, if you book lovers are willing to persevere, I guarantee that you will see an excellent story that is thrilling, not brainless, and has a three-dimensional and plump heroine.

It's good-looking. The author corrected his mistakes when he made mistakes. I like it very much. The protagonist will definitely suffer from tracheitis in the future. This is not good. With so many wives, tracheitis cannot be controlled. I hope the author will listen more to readers' opinions. If you listen more, it will be rated 9.0. If you give more foreshadowing, it will be easier to write in the future. , And then write about the goals of the protagonist. People nowadays don't like Buddha (including me), so write less. It is best that the protagonist has experienced something, not a strict wife, or the protagonist was originally a big Boos, don't use a knife, don't use a knife, don't use a knife. You can push the protagonist with a small knife, don't use a big knife.

I originally wanted to read it first before commenting, but considering that the score of this book is really poor, I gave it a five-star support first. There is no reason to give five stars. The plot of this book is not too amazing (personal feeling), but the overall feeling is very good. There are basically no poisonous points. It feels like you can keep reading without getting too tired. I hope the author can keep writing and I believe this book will be successful. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Wow, I thought it was good-looking, both suspenseful and a little bit scary. And I haven't seen any novels of this type so far. It's a novel novel.

After this book becomes popular, I will become a real old fan hahahaha 😳

There is no problem with the plot, and the characters are okay, but the writing style is a bit raw. Overall, this book is good (≧∇≦*)

Overall it looks good, no big problems

The writing is very good, but can we not give all the good-looking women to the male protagonist? Four points because the plot structure is wonderful and unique, and one point deducted because there are not two male characters and there are a lot of female characters.

Check it out, it feels like the writing is good, but the emotional line is a bit awkward, and the male protagonist is too calm. As you get to the end, you can feel that the male protagonist seems to have no emotions, but the interaction with the female protagonist will gradually recover, right? There is also a weirdness inside the male body that is similar to Kuangsan's, which is quite good 🍉 [top post] [please ask for more updates]

I think this book can be compared with "My Healing Game". This book is wonderful and I enjoy reading it.