Note: The low rating is because there are not many people watching and not many comments!
[Suspense and supernatural + light novel + Shura field + eating soft food + wits and reasoning]
By some mistake, Ling Jue crossed the line between life and death and saw another side of the daily world.
This place is called "Underworld".
There are people in the world of the sun and things in the underworld.
Ling Jue opened his eyes, the sun was shining brightly outside the room, and people were living ordinary lives day after day; Ling Jue closed his eyes, and there were corpses everywhere outside the room, and there were strange things.
The elegant and intellectual neighbor sister has eating preferences that are unacceptable to ordinary people in the underworld; the cold female top student in the class can easily destroy an entire city in the underworld.
But it doesn't matter, Ling Jue has awakened an ability - he can see the progress bar of the strategy, regardless of whether the opponent is a human or a trickster.
Wherever he goes, there is his meeting place.
A legend was born.
Reader comments
I worked hard to write the three golden chapters, but based on data and feedback from some friends, the first chapter really fell flat. However, if you book lovers are willing to persevere, I guarantee that you will see an excellent story that is thrilling, not brainless, and has a three-dimensional and plump heroine.
It's good-looking. The author corrected his mistakes when he made mistakes. I like it very much. The protagonist will definitely suffer from tracheitis in the future. This is not good. With so many wives, tracheitis cannot be controlled. I hope the author will listen more to readers' opinions. If you listen more, it will be rated 9.0. If you give more foreshadowing, it will be easier to write in the future. , And then write about the goals of the protagonist. People nowadays don't like Buddha (including me), so write less. It is best that the protagonist has experienced something, not a strict wife, or the protagonist was originally a big Boos, don't use a knife, don't use a knife, don't use a knife. You can push the protagonist with a small knife, don't use a big knife.
I originally wanted to read it first before commenting, but considering that the score of this book is really poor, I gave it a five-star support first.
There is no reason to give five stars. The plot of this book is not too amazing (personal feeling), but the overall feeling is very good. There are basically no poisonous points. It feels like you can keep reading without getting too tired.
I hope the author can keep writing and I believe this book will be successful. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Wow, I thought it was good-looking, both suspenseful and a little bit scary. And I haven't seen any novels of this type so far. It's a novel novel.
After this book becomes popular, I will become a real old fan hahahaha [shy]
Overall it looks good, no big problems
There is no problem with the plot, and the characters are okay, but the writing style is a bit raw. Overall, this book is good (≧∇≦*)
The weird wife is just gone?
Just don't be a eunuch [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Young man, I like you [laughing evilly]
Check it out, it feels like the writing is good, but the emotional line is a bit awkward, and the male protagonist is too calm. As you get to the end, you can feel that the male protagonist seems to have no emotions, but the interaction with the female protagonist will gradually recover, right?
There is also a weirdness inside the male body that is similar to Kuangsan's, which is quite good [eat melon] [top post] [please ask for more updates]
I think this book can be compared with "My Healing Game". This book is wonderful and I enjoy reading it.
The writing is very good, but can we not give all the good-looking women to the male protagonist? Four points because the plot structure is wonderful and unique, and one point deducted because there are not two male characters and there are a lot of female characters.
It's okay. Some of the plots are purely from the author's experience, but generally the writing is pretty good.
Come on, I feel like I can be hot [sending my heart]
Pretty good, just a little short
The setting is very interesting
Why do most novels of this type suffer from this so-called lack of emotion?
The school had a half-day holiday, and I wanted to take a good nap, but unfortunately I read this book and couldn't sleep all night!
Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good-looking.
This is the eunuch you are talking about. [Angry]
It seems that I will add another book to my long list of books.
It's good-looking, but a bit lacking. I'll support it with five stars.
The emotional line and the plot line are well integrated
reassuring work
The writing is good. Among all the strange stories, it can be said to be eye-catching. The storyline is not cliche. You can read it patiently, but it is too short [scroll][scroll]
It's still okay. The male protagonist is calm, so he's not overbearing. This aspect just doesn't appeal to me, but the rest is okay. There are new processes to follow.
It looks pretty good so far, but it's just not hot enough.
Why no more? [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Has the author changed platforms? ?
Okay, enough food to keep watching!
It's not cool enough, and it's not sad enough. It has the beauty of an ancient Internet novel.
I worked hard to write the three golden chapters, but based on data and feedback from some friends, the first chapter really fell flat. However, if you book lovers are willing to persevere, I guarantee that you will see an excellent story that is thrilling, not brainless, and has a three-dimensional and plump heroine.
It's good-looking. The author corrected his mistakes when he made mistakes. I like it very much. The protagonist will definitely suffer from tracheitis in the future. This is not good. With so many wives, tracheitis cannot be controlled. I hope the author will listen more to readers' opinions. If you listen more, it will be rated 9.0. If you give more foreshadowing, it will be easier to write in the future. , And then write about the goals of the protagonist. People nowadays don't like Buddha (including me), so write less. It is best that the protagonist has experienced something, not a strict wife, or the protagonist was originally a big Boos, don't use a knife, don't use a knife, don't use a knife. You can push the protagonist with a small knife, don't use a big knife.
I originally wanted to read it first before commenting, but considering that the score of this book is really poor, I gave it a five-star support first. There is no reason to give five stars. The plot of this book is not too amazing (personal feeling), but the overall feeling is very good. There are basically no poisonous points. It feels like you can keep reading without getting too tired. I hope the author can keep writing and I believe this book will be successful. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Wow, I thought it was good-looking, both suspenseful and a little bit scary. And I haven't seen any novels of this type so far. It's a novel novel.
After this book becomes popular, I will become a real old fan hahahaha [shy]
Overall it looks good, no big problems
There is no problem with the plot, and the characters are okay, but the writing style is a bit raw. Overall, this book is good (≧∇≦*)
The weird wife is just gone?
Just don't be a eunuch [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Young man, I like you [laughing evilly]
Check it out, it feels like the writing is good, but the emotional line is a bit awkward, and the male protagonist is too calm. As you get to the end, you can feel that the male protagonist seems to have no emotions, but the interaction with the female protagonist will gradually recover, right? There is also a weirdness inside the male body that is similar to Kuangsan's, which is quite good [eat melon] [top post] [please ask for more updates]
I think this book can be compared with "My Healing Game". This book is wonderful and I enjoy reading it.
The writing is very good, but can we not give all the good-looking women to the male protagonist? Four points because the plot structure is wonderful and unique, and one point deducted because there are not two male characters and there are a lot of female characters.
It's okay. Some of the plots are purely from the author's experience, but generally the writing is pretty good.
Come on, I feel like I can be hot [sending my heart]
Pretty good, just a little short
The setting is very interesting
Why do most novels of this type suffer from this so-called lack of emotion?
The school had a half-day holiday, and I wanted to take a good nap, but unfortunately I read this book and couldn't sleep all night!
Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good-looking.
This is the eunuch you are talking about. [Angry] It seems that I will add another book to my long list of books.
It's good-looking, but a bit lacking. I'll support it with five stars.
The emotional line and the plot line are well integrated reassuring work
The writing is good. Among all the strange stories, it can be said to be eye-catching. The storyline is not cliche. You can read it patiently, but it is too short [scroll][scroll]
It's still okay. The male protagonist is calm, so he's not overbearing. This aspect just doesn't appeal to me, but the rest is okay. There are new processes to follow.
It looks pretty good so far, but it's just not hot enough.
Why no more? [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Has the author changed platforms? ?
Okay, enough food to keep watching!
It's not cool enough, and it's not sad enough. It has the beauty of an ancient Internet novel.
It looks okay now
Five-star support