Feng Xiaoxiao hadn’t been home once since her younger brother got married. When a business trip gave her a chance to visit, she met Dong Xiaoyi, her sister-in-law, whom she had only seen once before. She planned to stay for just a few days, but what was happening at home made it impossible for her to leave.
My dear little brother, if you don’t know how to cherish her, don’t blame me.
Powerful woman X married woman
Rescue. Redemption. First-person narration.
It’s a novel, so please don’t apply it to the real world. Please, please, please.
I’m just writing a novel, not a professional.
The complete novel is 100,000 words, and the full manuscript is finished. Bonus chapters included.
Working hard to improve my writing. I kneel in thanks to everyone who enjoys it.
It's actually pretty good-looking, but what I wrote above is a bit confusing because I don't know who is speaking. Characters are not expressed clearly enough. But in the last 11 chapters, I think they are quite sweet. I actually think the extras are better than the main text 🤦
Beautiful! He handles emotions very well! I like it very much! It's just that the amnesia episode was a bit cruel to me. Baby Xiaoyi was so miserable (;;)
Objectively, not unreasonable
There is a very delicate love between Xiaoxiao and Xiaoyi
Overall it looks okay
Personally, I think it's very interesting. I'll give it 5 stars to encourage the author to continue writing the next book. I prefer this type of double heroine. Maybe I'm just a pervert 🤦
A short and concise little sweet article, not bad, the author keeps up the good work [Blow kiss]
Beautiful, I love watching it
Finished reading. OK OK
Very well written, I like it 😊