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This is my favorite marriage change story so far. It made me smile. I can put it into the author's perspective. Haha, I would like to ask the author to cheer up. It's good to write about daily life. It just needs some climax occasionally. I think it can discuss the connection between friendship and love and other related topics. Also, is the author interested in revealing why he time travels? [Think]

The author must continue to write about this super doubled brotherhood. This year's lemons are contracted by this book. I have been following this book since I discovered it in September. It is really not easy for the author to keep updating. I myself sometimes stop updating due to various reasons. I'm also writing my first novel, so I think it's relatively close to the author's situation. First of all, these are my personal thoughts. If you see it, you have to disagree. You are right. First of all, the author's description and writing style are relatively good, but it may be his first time writing and the plot arrangement is a bit lacking. Secondly, after reading this book so far, although everyone knows what the ending of the two protagonists will be and everyone is anxious, the author did not directly choose to fast-forward the process of the two from re-contact to changing feelings. Although this process is not as sweet as directly writing about love, it may make people a little anxious, but undoubtedly, with all the previous processes, when the two people confirm their relationship, readers can understand how the relationship between them got here step by step, and all the past plots will turn into sugar. (I hope the author can continue to maintain his own rhythm) Finally, I am also in a hurry. The author will update it quickly. It is only a lethal dose of citric acid. [Please update]

The plot is very good and this is what I want to learn from. It writes about the good times of high school students. I want to go back, but I can never go back. I'm very envious of Xia and Luo's relationship. I used to laugh and chat with my good brothers, talking about everything. There is really nothing to say first, time will really change a person. Recommend to friends who like it.

The relationship between girls is well written, the author is very grateful [love] [love] I hope I can give Lu Shitong more shots to see myself [happying] [making faces]

Hmm... I saw about chapter 111 when I was commenting. How can I put it, it suits my appetite. I like to read it, but to be honest, I have a little stomachache [laughing and crying]. It feels very uncomfortable when there is no confirmation of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Although there are sweets to eat, the original personality of the female protagonist is not fully mature. I probably know that it is impossible for the time being. I can't help but take a look at the later chapters. Unexpectedly, the male and female protagonists may be officially announced... I am a bit unmotivated. Although the male and female protagonists are also depressed, but seeing that the male and female protagonists have no hope, [palms face] emmmmm I also feel that if it is officially announced, the author will not end it like that... It will not be long and I will be very confused [face covering] It would be nice if there was a reassurance to let me chase with peace of mind. Although the author said in the introduction that he is not a eunuch, I am still worried. Then I chase and my stomach hurts. If I don't chase, I want to read it again. Uh-huh, [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] I hope there is a reassurance. For example, the male and female protagonists start to realize their feelings (I just read Chapter 111, I haven't finished it yet, there may be more in the future). I guarantee that I will immediately follow it with peace of mind.

Both the male and female protagonists are so sweet, and the progress is not too outrageous. I feel that after the male and female protagonists confirmed their relationship, Luo Yuchen was completely lost, and Xia Zhimeng still retained some brotherly thoughts. By the way, no one would want to have this kind of relationship with their brother, right? [Sinister smile]

I have to say that although there are occasional minor flaws in the writing, this is definitely the most satisfying change of marriage I have ever seen on Tomato. Big cheers for the author ~ [Love] [Like] [Please update] [Send heart] (Too short 😭) [Send heart]

This is the first time that I have so clearly felt the author's intention for his work. I am deeply touched by the persistence in it. The interaction between people in the plot also attracts me, touches me, and even inspires me. I would also like to thank the author. It is your attitude towards the work that relieves me as a high school student. The pressure to study further, and also gives me the courage to continue working hard in life. I believe that the difficulties in life will eventually be overcome by us, thank you! Ps: This is my first time to post a review, purely based on my feelings after reading it to a certain extent [face covering] [face covering]

The author of Changfa Welfare understands boys very well. The interaction between the heroine and the hero is very ambiguous, even a little cute, but very sweet. When you are bored, it will immediately arouse your interest, and you never know what progress the two of them will have next. The author's arrangement is very clever and wonderful.

This novel tells the emotional entanglement between Luo and Xia in a touching way, and shows every bit of their lives to the readers in a daily way. Beyond that, it gets to the heart of relationships: friendship, love, and family. Among them, this article mainly elaborates on the emotional response between friendship and love under specific circumstances. The essence is to start from the needs and create an emotional relationship that is almost impossible through a parallel world, which can be described as unique. (If what I said is wrong, please correct me)

Now that I see it, I feel that the writing is still great. As a love story and a marriage change, it is really sweet and a bit refreshing. The withdrawal reaction I had after watching it is already worth recommending. But I feel that the bond between the male and female protagonists is not deep enough. I suggest adding some small crises to consolidate the relationship. Finally, I hope the author will finish it slowly. I don't want to see such a good novel one day🙏🙏🙏

It's perfect, the content is very sweet, and it has a more special ending than the ordinary marriage change (the extra ending is the process of the male protagonist (the real protagonist of the text is the female protagonist) traveling back to the beginning to be with the female protagonist again)

The subject matter is very good, and the writing is also very good, but it is a little too slow to warm up. It can't be called slow to warm up, but it is written very carefully. I've read Chapter 70, and it's very interesting, but I can't stand it anymore. After all, there are too many things in it that can't be solved on the spot. I feel a little frustrated, but there are also some problems on my part. After all, I am from a God's perspective. After all, this is not a good article, so it is my problem. If you like to watch slow-motion movies, you can check it out. It's still very sweet. I have countless red stones, but there are still people who are hung up in front of me [smile] [like] [love]

I read the latest one directly from yesterday. It's so good\(//∇//)\, so sweet! ! It's like the author just stuffed brown sugar into my mouth. I look forward to the author writing until the day of marriage. Come on, author (ง ˙o˙)ว @

The subject matter is relatively novel, and the plot development of the male and female protagonists is just right and happy. At the same time, the ending of each chapter also gives readers rich space for imagination. Of course, there are some shortcomings: the update speed is slow and the length of each chapter is short (to put it bluntly, it is not enough to read). It would be better if it could be updated three times a day. Of course, five would be fine (manual dog head)

Not bad, not bad. What he tells in this article is actually just a short love story. From high school to college to marriage, it is ordinary but also full of fun. The overall evaluation is good and I feel good after listening to it.

After reading this I feel like I am going to fall in love... The emotional line is not inexplicable, it is gradual and beautiful. The main character is very cute, and the second male and female lead are also very compatible. All in all, it is one of the few pieces of gold in the story of changing marriage. Everybody go and see ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

Not only does it satisfy my requirements for gender reassignment, but it is also a book about changing marriages. Although it may not satisfy other people's tastes, it is quite good for me. (I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future) It looks really good. To summarize, brother, you smell so good.

Although I didn't spend too much time reading this book, the plot of the book is very good. I want to save more than a hundred chapters to read it. I saw it when I went to college. This book is also very sweet. I already fantasized about my 1.5-Meter brother turning into a loli [laughter]

It's so beautiful😀. I've seen so many marriage changes, and this one is really interesting.

It has great stamina. After reading it, I felt both moved and sad, but I think I was more moved. The emotions between the three male and female protagonists in your novel were all expressed very well, which at least captured my heart. Secondly, it was a bit uncomfortable because you wrote the timeline so quickly (although I know this is necessary). , The plot requires), I felt like I was just watching every bit of their sophomore year in high school, and the next moment I saw them graduating from college, getting married and having a baby, which actually made me feel even more uncomfortable (actually it also reminded me of some past events). In the end (including the extras), it was actually more of a complex psychology. In short, the writing is very beautiful. Keep up the good work. I hope you can write more high-quality works.

It's so beautiful. I put my hair inside and it feels so good.

This is the best book I have ever read, bar none [laughter][laughter]. It would be nice if the author could write more details about his/her life in the third year of high school and after the male and female lead received their certificates. After reading it, I still had a feeling of reluctance. I didn't want his/their story to end like this [cry][cry]

It's invincible. The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. The plot is well written, the writing is delicate, the characters' personalities are clear, and their psychological processes are also clearly explained. Sweet! It's sweet to read for a while, and sweet to keep reading! ! ! [Love][Like]

This is really a very good book. I read it three times. Three times and not reading it for a day felt as uncomfortable as drinking sleepy black tea (great joy)

It looks pretty good so far (I really like to read the chapter where the good brothers are kept in the dark (o^∀^o))

Really pretty! ! ! For the first time, I was able to read the entire story about changing marriage without skipping chapters! The sense of pull from brotherly love to minor ambiguity is so beautiful! Highly recommended! ! Big cheers for the author! Don't get an appendix

It's really sweet, so sweet to me, warm and everyday, beautiful, beautiful! ! !

Very pretty and full of sugar! Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Absolutely amazing! The reversal of the plot in the early stage caught people off guard. The mutual tricks between the two protagonists also very much reflected the friendship between the two protagonists. The story of the final reveal of their identities was also very exciting! Do the two protagonists have a sweet love relationship in the end? I hope the author can continue to work hard to write, and I hope the author will work hard! Strive to achieve high production and high quality! The author updates 3 chapters daily! 4,000 Words per chapter! Hahahahaha!