Apocalyptic Disasters: Building My Own Goddess Legion

Cheers to the author, Ollie, 😏 Although I'm new to this book, I like the rhythm and plot of your book. Hahaha, I hope you won't suffer the same in the future. It's too cool, you're still playing this kind of thing in the last days

It's good. It's my favorite harem. There are many types. The only bad thing is that the protagonist is too weak, always injured, a little stupid, and dares to sell resources without absolute strength. What if others join forces to carve up the protagonist's power? You must know that the protagonist's combat power of being injured and dying cannot protect so many women and resources. At the very least, other Xuan-level protagonists must also have invincible strength at the Earth-level.

Spatial abilities, as long as they can attack, will definitely break the defense in the early and mid-term, and can only be avoided. You are going too far. [Awkward laugh][Awkward laugh] As long as the spatial ability is not in the auxiliary direction, it is a strong attack from front to back. It just depends on whether you have enough mana.

The protagonist is too lazy. If you can't beat him when something happens, he'll just be incompetent and yell. He can't even train his brain to become reckless. If you don't improve your strength, he'll just wander around here and there.

I usually read a book no matter how bad it is and never write a review. This time I couldn't stand it anymore. I read 80+ chapters and gave up. I slept for a few days last time, and then a week passed in one sentence. Then the protagonist stayed in the comatose heroine's room for two days. I didn't have to do serious business to play affectionate😅? Now I have been injured and slept for 5 days. Doesn't the author have a sense of time? Don't farm monsters in the early stage to widen the gap. Your ability is love. The Crimson King, right? A small college protagonist encounters a big rat of Xuan level not long after the start, followed by a cat of Xuan level. This proves that there are many monsters of Xuan level everywhere. Killing a big mouse will increase Xuan level. The protagonist has done nothing for so many days, and then he injured a big cat and slept for 5 days. The weather has changed outside in such a long time 🤮. If you don't know how to write the time, you don't have to write it, but don't fill in a random time, okay? , Why don't you just sleep and everyone will become the emperor in ten years, and the protagonist is still in Xuanjie [laughs]. The advantages in the early stage are completely negligible, and the protagonist is unconscious every day. The few women who leave some supplies think it is unlucky and object. I don't understand the use of storing things in the space. The advantage is not reflected at all. Those members who follow the male protagonist are really unlucky for eight lifetimes. It is worse than following Brother Crow🤣

The writing is good, but it doesn't suit my taste. Real life is inherently tiring, so I only like to watch the kind of protagonists who kill everyone or are invincible. I don't like the kind of post-apocalyptic scenes where I'm extremely tired.

People who are unable to awaken at first should be given a chance to awaken again. There are too few people with superpowers and so many monsters. This is not a good framework.

The protagonist is always unconscious and cannot be defeated. And for the one named Jiayi, do you plan to make her unconscious until the finale, following the same old routine from 10 years ago? The protagonist didn't find a way to save him until he became invincible. Then a girl named Sun was almost raped, which is also a poisonous point. I just finished watching it, so I gave it a 4. I actually wanted to give it a 3 stars.

It was pretty good at first, but I struggled for too long with the transformation of the policewoman's virgin heart.

Does the male protagonist have the physique of a street rat? People look at him displeased wherever he goes, and they often write about the male protagonist exuding cold air. Do you think you are writing about central air conditioning? He always gets a cold look on his face and exudes cold air.