My Battleship Is Stronger Than Yours

It's not bad. He should be a new author. It would be better if the "I" in the article is changed to the name of the protagonist (I always feel that the author has brought himself into it and then uses "I" to describe it). If "I" is used to describe this book, not many people will read it. If it is replaced by the name of the protagonist, many people will definitely read it. I can't guarantee that it will be 10,000 people, but there are still 5,000 people.

Don't worry about whether this is a harem story, because he has already written it on his face. (◦˙▽˙◦) Anything else to write about? The writing is average. But you can still take a look at the old ones. The protagonist is pretty good at driving.

This book is pretty good, not too hard-core, but I just came here to read the cool stuff and that's it. Also, the enemy's strength fluctuates up and down. The recently released enemies can't even pierce ground-penetrating bombs, although the main gun has been upgraded. Also, if there are electromagnetic weapons, the surface-to-air missiles can be dispensed with. I'll also replace the secondary guns at some point.

It's pretty good. I look forward to it every time I follow this work. Although I won't push for updates in the later period, it doesn't affect my mood of waiting for updates every day. The protagonist written by the author is really awesome in his unsystematic human society and other situations. Actually, author, I really want to imitate your work. Of course, I have to wait until I have time. It turns out that when I first saw your work, I did write something very similar to your work. But later on, because my wife was about to give birth, I was too busy and had no time to look at my mobile phone. Every day after get off work, I would rush to seek compensation as soon as possible. I will have less and less time to read in the future, but I am still looking forward to your new work, the author. When I was writing a novel about battleships, I also wrote a post-apocalyptic armor story linking Armor Warrior and Kamen Rider. Now I have postponed it because of my wife's affairs. Congratulations to the author brother again on the completion of your work.

Except for some weapons and equipment that were not designed well, ship-based lasers have never been used. Domestic weapons and equipment include 1130 for air defense. The Silent Hunter laser weapon system (which has achieved actual combat results) has not been mentioned. A series of Haihongqi air defense missiles have not been mentioned. The transport helicopter can reach sea level up to 20 meters and can be used as a part-time anti-submarine weapon. The J-15 is better than the J-16, has a higher bomb load, and can be used for multiple purposes, including but not limited to anti-submarine, anti-ship, anti-aircraft, electronic warfare, anti-ground, and anti-radiation (attacking radar positions) The F35, a sea-air amphibious multi-purpose fighter, has little use. Apart from the F35C's vertical takeoff and landing and advanced avionics system, it has a small bomb load and a high failure rate.

The subject matter is novel, but the story still has room for improvement.

Very good, keep up the good work.

Come on! Keep up the good work!

I feel like my writing is pretty good so far, but I don't know why my score is so low [what]

There are just a few chapters, but everything else is fine.