Dragon Ball: This Gohan Is Beyond Broken!

The writing is really beautiful, not brainless, and well-founded. Some of the ideas for becoming stronger are basically the ideas of normal comic fans, and they are much better than the brainless enhancements in system literature. You can take a look.

Dragon Ball fics are well written. It's the first time I've encountered a fic that focuses on the time and space of Sun Wuhan.

At present, this is the most comfortable Dragon Ball fanfic I have seen in the past few years. There is no random increase in combat power that will lead to a breakdown in writing, and enemies will not appear randomly to engage in chaotic battles that will cause the plot to collapse. There are no cheating cheats. All methods are based on the settings of Dragon Ball itself, and there is no random magic modification.

It's pretty good, full marks for the illustrations. Let's talk about the plot first. Although it's not like the original novel or other fanfics, it's quite solid. In terms of fighting, there's basically not much. It's all one move, sneak attack or something like that. It's okay. At first I thought it would be a harem, but later I saw that the heroine was Bidili, and I thought it was pretty good. After all, it was an official match. Come on Only represents personal views

It's not bad. It's one of the few good Gohan fanfics. It's not brainless and invincible. Although the character design is a little off, it's not broken. Except for the fact that Gohan always tells things that he shouldn't know in the first place, it's not handled very well (I need to find a reasonable reason to explain to other people, but there is none, so it affects the perception a bit). Basically, it's not bad.

Very good. I read it all day long. I heard that the author does not update often, so I hope everyone will read this book slowly. How can I put it this way? It is a rare good Dragon Ball article. The logic is basically good. In terms of combat power, it can be seen that the author is trying to fix the loopholes in the original work. The plot is not procrastinating. The protagonist is decisive and has a single heroine, but there are basically no emotional scenes. This is easy to understand. I have watched the Dragon Ball anime for more than ten years. I can't fault this book too much. I can only say that it basically restores the original work well enough. The combat power is not too low. It's very reasonable. It's just short and not enough to watch. The most important thing is that it doesn't drag on. The plot develops very quickly. There are basically no short-term situations. After watching this, I want to see new forms. You can get there soon. You don't need to keep looking forward to becoming stronger.

It looks good, but this one is about Super Four. Gohan is a bit tired of it. I support other Saiyans taking the Super Four route, but Gohan is an exception. Beast Mode is too perfect, with low loss, higher amplification rate than God Blue, and physical strength is no worse than Super Four.

This can be said to be the best batch of fanfics I have ever read. The plot in the book is just like the author's label. It completely matches all my fantasies about time-travelers. Because no matter how big the chapter is or how exciting the plot will be later? The author tries his best to write from the perspective of a time traveler and a fancier. Because there is no system, there is no messy and confusing operation due to system tasks or anything like that. The entire plot can be said to be a time traveler, the best way to write a fanfic. Although doing things cleanly lacks some fun. But it's because of his character. So the apparent reality is not bloody for any reason. Looking at it all, I feel great. It can be said that as long as it doesn't end badly, this is a fanfic that cannot be overstated. 👏👏👏Excellent👏👏👏Excellent👏👏👏Excellent

It looks good, it's really good, I still have more to say As a stranger who has never read the original work and is a fan of the same series, I feel that the viewing is quite good and it seems quite enjoyable 🥰 Although it has only been updated for more than 40 chapters, which is not enough to read, it is still understandable as the first work of a new author. It's so well written, keep it up 😘

At first I saw that the rating was around seven points, but because it was Dragon Ball, I clicked in and read it. The result was beyond imagination. Because Dragon Ball is already quite incompetent and the plot is very outdated, it is really difficult for fans to write it well. This new book is really surprising. It doesn't have the kind of mindless and combative plot, and there is no ambiguity with the female characters. It's a solid one, the protagonist is not a loser but it seemed like I saw the real Gohan reborn. I really like them. I liked Gohan and Videl very much when I was very young. Gohan was also very upset. Although Dragon Ball Super's combat power is pretty bad, I still finished it one episode a week. If this book hadn't been broken, I would have continued to read it day by day. Come on, come on 💕 Looking forward to the day when the score reaches nine points