Naruto: I, the Sandaime, the Strongest Hokage!

Not bad, not bad, it will kill three generations immediately. The soul penetrated the third generation, decisively eliminated Danzo and the advisory group, and passed on Orochimaru. No more dark intrigues. Concentrate on cultivating immortality alone [Like][Like]

The commoner love point is a little bit toxic. I might have wanted to add a female protagonist but was too impatient. I spent almost no pen and ink and the character was settled in two chapters. Everything else is pretty good. Orochimaru became the Hokage. It was quite unexpected, but I agree. After all, the one who is most qualified to be the boss in Konoha since the first generation is this one. After all, there are not many people with charisma, military, political, and economic accomplishments.

I think the New Konoha described by the author is what the village should really look like. The strength of the village, everyone living in harmony, the integration of Uchiha, the different endings of the three ninjas, Orochimaru becoming Hokage, his scientific research can bring a new trend, and Tsunade begins to practice with the protagonist , has also embarked on the path of immortality. I think Jiraiya's change is the best. This Jiraiya is the hero in my mind. He works hard for his friends and the village, instead of the original one who was completely brainwashed by a toad and only knew how to find the son of prophecy for the first half of his life.

The logic in Tomato is self-consistent. It has no major flaws and is a good book. The writing ideas are also good, but the text looks dry. I hope the description is richer.

The meaning is also very interesting. Interpreting this book from another perspective and looking at the world view, there is one thing that I agree with very much. How is chakra possible? Compare it with China's cultivation practice

I really like it, especially in the world of One Piece, helping Whitebeard return to his youth. Whitebeard at his peak is so awesome. Let Whitebeard join Konoha again. I like this setting very much. Author, please hurry up and update. You haven't updated in two days. I'm so worried The author's novel writing style, different perspective experience, and the arrangement of each character are very reasonable. Even the scapegoat has a good old age. It's a pity that Obito will eventually become a villain. If he can be resurrected and redeemed, Obito is actually not a bad person. Uchiha is like this, it is easy to go to extremes. Seeing him as a child, he was really a simple person. Love for Lin,. . . . . I hope it can have a happy ending. Konoha is so strong, it's okay to just wash Obito off. . . .

Very good, with a very novel angle, worth reading. It makes up for many regrets in Naruto, and the writing style is also very sophisticated. [Shy]

This is a very interesting fan novel, but the main character appears too rarely and has a very low sense of presence! It feels like Orochimaru is the protagonist. Various studies seem to have no bottlenecks. You can study whatever you want to study. Defeating the whole world entirely on his own, he is even more awesome than Destiny's Child. When I first read the book, I thought it was a cool novel where the protagonist relies on hanging to defeat everything.

How to say it? It's good to have new ideas, but some of the second designs are a bit too shabby. We can start with fantasy, immortality and spiritual cultivation, and upgrade Naruto's resources to those of the middle and lower levels of Zhongqian World, which should be almost the same. This does not happen overnight. At least read some settings of the original drama and rewrite it to avoid being attacked by some people.

It's a very good subject matter. I feel like it's really pointless to choose an anime fan by itself. It was originally written very well, but why did it go from two chapters a day to one chapter, and then suddenly it ended [face covering]

Due to various reasons, this book is coming to an end. I would like to thank all readers and book friends for their support and encouragement. Thank you for accompanying the author to the end of this book. From the beginning of the story to the end, you have been with me all the way to the end of the novel. I would like to thank you all for accompanying me to the end of the novel. The book is coming to an end at this point. My thoughts have been a bit confused recently and I don't know how to write. I have decided to stop reading for a while. I may write articles of a similar style in the future. Thank you very much for reading this. (If you see this, please give it a thumbs up, because this is nonsense).

It's good, but when I saw the 30th picture, I had a question. The protagonist, why didn't you absorb half of the chakra of Ushiuki? The purpose of training is to strengthen yourself, and the tailed beasts are separated from the ten-tails, and the ten-tails are absorbed and transformed by this planet. You absorb the chakra of the tailed beasts, and then transform it with fairy power. As long as you don't suck the tailed beasts to death, isn't this a continuous blood pack? And based on this calculation, the karma of heaven and earth should actually be calculated on the tailed beast. If that doesn't work, just share a little karma, but where has your own strength gone!

Rubbing with needle cloth, if you look closely, you will soon be immersed in the content.

It's okay for now, the idea is quite unique, I don't know what it will be like in the future.

In fact, I think the best reform in Konoha is in education. Konoha's training of ordinary ninjas is too slow. It occupies the best land, the largest population, and the most complete ninjutsu, but ordinary ninjas have no advantage. You can find that Konoha is the only one that has not developed bloodstains in several battles. The Rock Ninja has Molten Release and Dust Release, the Sand Ninja has Magnetic Release and Burning Release, the Mist Ninja has Boiling Release and Melting Release, and the Thunder Ninja has Explosion Release and Arashi Release. Basically, they are inherited from masters and apprentices rather than blood inheritance. Only Konoha doesn't

Come on come on! ! ! Super great plot, very comfortable to watch

Although it is a bit abstract, the logic and psychological state are still well grasped.

It's a good book, but overall the plot has nothing to do with the protagonist. Rather than being a group portrait, it's better to say that the protagonist is a wedge that leads to changes in the plot of the original characters. It's not too inconsistent to read. It's a rare masterpiece of fan fiction in Tomato. The original text is 5 stars, but Xiao Ai deserves 7 stars. The original characters are so well written, please write more.

The writing is very good, the logic is rigorous, and it is basically not wordy. Including the protagonist, the plot of basically every character is fascinating and the sense of substitution is very strong. I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue to write more books.

Okay, it's a good book if it doesn't have flaws.

After watching Naruto and thinking about it, the souls of the dead will always come out and remain trapped in the spirit world, and then a soul will be born from the newborn. So if a demon cultivator is there, he can create a Ten Thousand Soul Talisman with infinite souls.

What about the protagonist? Does the protagonist appear in ten chapters in total? [Laughing and crying] The overall writing is pretty good, and it has become a family fun. I suggest changing the title to "Scientific Snake Orochimaru Begins to Conquer the Heavens from the Ninja World" [laughing]

It's non-toxic. I personally tested it and found it not enough for the author.

It's quite interesting. Although the protagonist travels through three generations, the key development is Orochimaru. Better than most books with Orochimaru as the main character. I like how Orochimaru and Kakashi traveled to another Konoha, Obito was captured by Kakashi, and Native Kai and Native Kakashi said that wrong feelings should be thrown away. . . It's enough for Kakashi to have me as a close friend [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It feels good, seeing the harmonious development of Konoha

Excellent work, I hope I can continue this peaceful journey. There is more darkness and hatred in other fans than in the original work. It would be nice to see something more relaxed

This Naruto fanfic is creative and makes Orochimaru the Hokage, creating a different Naruto world, which makes sense. The transition from Naruto to Pirates is also very natural and smooth. It is not written in a way that directly changes the world. I give it five stars. The ending is too hasty. This is a rare and well-written novel that jumps from Naruto to Pirates. It made me want to continue exploring other worlds, but unfortunately it ended suddenly.

It's okay, but Xiao Ai is a bit poisonous [laughs]

So far it looks okay, keep up the good work.

It's rare to see a harmonious development of Naruto