Mythical Cardmaking: From the Start, I Fused the White Snake

It's really good. The writing is very good and the plot is very nice. I just don't know why it's not popular. The character descriptions are very specific.

It's a good book. The beginning is good. I hope the content in the middle can be better.

The author has a certain literary foundation and the reading experience is great. The shortcomings or small suggestions that I personally feel at the moment: ① Focusing too much on martial arts weakens the presence of the cards. The martial arts genre is very new, but there are too few descriptions of the cards. It could just be a skill. Why is it called a skill card? ②That Wei Yi character is very unpleasant to me, I hope it is not an important supporting role. ③The market overlap of mythical character card novels is very high. I hope the author will not fall into the old routine. At present, I am very optimistic about the uniqueness of certain characters. ④Best wishes and look forward to updates.

The old-fashioned setting is the core of novelty. The ideas are clear and the writing is smooth. There is too much detail in the early stage but it is not a big problem. At present, it seems that the flaws are not concealed. It is also filled with a lot of Chinese folk mythology knowledge. It is quite good in appearance. Five-star recommendation.

This author is writing well now, and it suits my taste very well. The changes in the characters' expressions also make sense, such as from gloomy and cautious at the beginning to serious and cheerful later on. . . There are obviously more inner dramas (of course I suspect that the author is overconfusing the word count) 🤔

1. This novel has a good subject matter and is quite novel. The card summoning flow at the beginning, and the forbidden well elements at the end are also OK, but there is a bit too much about martial arts, so it can be compressed appropriately. 2. Mythical system summoning + unique system panel 3. I personally like collecting, and I like the protagonist to collect various cards step by step. I hope the author can make it more interesting. 4. I hope you don't write emotional scenes. If you can't write well, don't forcefully write it. So far, it seems that there is no problem. 5. I hope that when the protagonist becomes stronger, he can slap his parents in the face. 6. If there is a behind-the-scenes leak, there should be a card that can control people's hearts, and they can be tied up with interests later. 7. The theme of troubled times and troubled seeds can be 8. Keep updating at least twice a day.

The writing is really good, the plot is great, the world view is clear, and the author's writing style is also very good. I personally score it at least 9 points. I don't know why the score is low now. I believe that if the author continues to maintain this pace, it will definitely become popular in the end.

Very good, very good-looking. When will the protagonist's real parents be revealed? The mother's side can come first, since they are close. When the protagonist becomes stronger, I estimate that he can go to defeat his mother's side at around level 4. When he becomes stronger, he can then join his father's company. Isn't this another dozens of chapters of plot? With this background setting, are you still worried that there will be no plot?

Nice, come on, the martial arts section in the middle is a bit too long (the author also said it in the article and reflected on it, but it seems that it's not much). Overall, it's very, very nice to watch (♥∀♥)

Give it a five-star support. The book is very good. Basically, it is thoughtful and does not treat people like fools. Although there are some flaws here and there, the overall protagonist is very decisive, the article is clear, and the ideas are clear. Moreover, the problems are all minor and can be ignored or even ignored. The author should improve the protagonist's strength faster, set up a larger world view, and then finish it in about two or three hundred pictures. If it is really a thousand pictures, it will not be completed. If you write well, 4,000 words a day is fine, as long as you keep updating.