Under One Person: Wang Ye, Is He My Brother? !

I have read many artist fanfics, and this one is undoubtedly the best, but it is a bit slow.

So far, there are no mistakes in the chapters except for some problems with the character description of Feng Baobao. It is still very good for a new author. You can see from my homepage that I am a bookworm and have a very picky mouth. I have given low ratings to many books, but this one is different. The protagonist is not the Teddy, Madonna, or Diaosi in other books. This is already very good. There is a wise man downstairs who probably has a junior high school diploma and can't understand anything and just makes random comments. I almost didn't read the book because of his comments at first. After reading it, I found that all the comments he posted were folded. If you don't have the ability to understand, don't read the book [awkward laugh]

Awesome, this is the coolest fanfic I've seen so far.

It's good to watch. Although the ending is a little rushed, it's good without delaying the plot. (But Lu Huan is a little bit wrong. He seems to be about the same age. Of course, it may be normal for couples with a larger age gap, but if we go back in time, it seems to be a bit early [cover] Face] It's normal in reality, but when I read the novel, I feel that the timeline is a bit early.) There is nothing bad except for the rushed ending. Especially I remember that one section was an hour, and then it was said to be half an hour. I felt that this novel can be read, and he will not fool the readers by writing randomly.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will produce more works. The only flaw is that the ending is too hasty. But I still hope everyone will watch it carefully. The writing is really good. I hope everyone will support the author more.

Very good. I didn't skip any of them. I thought it was time travel. In fact, it was me. It was just the system that saved my life. From beginning to end, it was all for my girlfriend, and my girlfriend was also for him.

It looks good so far, nothing particularly bad, but it's not particularly attractive, and the emotional and hidden lines between the male and female protagonists are not very clear yet. Hmm... It sucks! ! ! ! The male protagonist's emotional line is simply the downfall of this book! It's so nonsensical, and no one really doubts how the male protagonist learned the Fenghou Qimen! ! ! !

It's hard to find something good. The author will update it soon!

Gaga is beautiful, your book is the best I have read (I don't want to criticize my personal opinion)

It's good to watch, it's good to watch. I liked it very much. When I first watched it, I thought that the male protagonist had found a new female protagonist and then stopped watching. But now that I want to watch it again, I realize that I misunderstood it [laughing and crying]

It's very good. It's the most innovative of this type I've ever seen. The plot is wonderful. It's written in my heart. It's all what I want to see. Hahaha. It's great [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The ending is a bit hasty, but overall it's good. The male protagonist improves too quickly, which is why the book only has more than a hundred chapters. I feel that if there is more description of the ending, the book will be improved to a higher level. Overall, it's not bad. You can read it.

The writing is quite good. I don't think there is any need to give Zhang Chulan face. This is too pretentious. He always plots this and that. There is no need to give him too much face.

It's wonderful. You can ascend to the world in other books later, such as In the Snow, Young Songs, Qin Shi Mingyue or Xian Xia.

It's very good. The plot is compact and fast-paced but not offensive. I would like to advise all newcomers, don't guess the heroine. You can't even imagine the heroine. She is an unexpected person. Just watch it and you won't make a sound.

The story is complete, but the ending is a bit sloppy, but it's worth reading.

I love it, I love it. This book is really great. The author will come up with a side story. I don't need much, just Wang Yu and Lu Huan, Zhang Lingyu and Xia He.

He was really good, although the ending was a bit fast and didn't have great details. But he sums it all up, it's a great ending, and you're a great author. I felt a little sad after reading it. After all, I haven't read an entire book about systems, so I don't know the ending. Well, that's quite good. This is also the first book I've read on Tomato. Thank you……

Love it, love it, it's rare to find a complete copy of this book written by a human being! ! !

Wang Ye brought two of them, they are so good and I love to watch them (XXX and so on are the best, Fire Tongs Liu Ming

This system is really good. The kindness of the two generations of kings is engraved in my heart. I hope you will meet a beautiful woman in the future.

It's very interesting. I'll give you a suggestion: ten chapters a day [laughing]

It's nice to read. Please give me a review. When this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan of this book [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's well written and more interesting than others, but the author stopped updating it and won't update it anymore haha ​​[awkward laugh]

Very good! Recommended for fans of Under the Stranger/Under One Person to watch!

Although the ending is a bit rushed, the process is still very enjoyable to watch, the protagonist does not drag himself out, and the plot is passable.

This is indeed a rare and valuable fan novel. It is quite interesting, but the ending is a bit sloppy and not far from the plot. However, it has breakthroughs, innovations and new ideas.

The novel is good, but the emotional line of the protagonist is too little. It is not revealed until the last two chapters, but it is also the end of the story... I feel that I have not seen enough. There should be a spin-off about Wang Yu and Lu Huan. After all, I couldn't go out for several years because of this relationship... The ending of the story is so hasty that it leaves people with a feeling of unfinished business, and it's hard to let go...

It's great. The ending was something I never expected, but it's excusable. Otherwise, there would be no way to end it. The choice of the male protagonist is also very consistent with the character.

Okay (˙-˙)👍Except for the short length, I quite like it o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o Did I swipe it so many times!? ⊙▽⊙It's been 42 hours... Okay, it's really beautiful*^_^*